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Reviews for Sloppy Seconds

By : CutiePieHentai
  • From qtgrl1129 on January 17, 2005
    COOL!!!!
    plz continue - QUICKLY!!
    and--hey, look!
    a plot bunny!
    (imitating Dory from Finding Nemo)
    I shall catch it!
    *runs after bunny*
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  • From ANON - scherezade on January 17, 2005
    Yesssssss!
    The lemon! The lemon!

    Nice job...though, I have to admit that your food references gave me a good laugh! Inu's ears and al dente pasta? Hmm...next time I have pasta, it will bring odd thoughts to mind!

    Y'know that I'm partial to auras colliding...a metaphysical fireworks to go along with the physical act! I"m just so happy that they finally got together! What a nice, long lemon too! Ahh..aggressive Inu...gotta love sweet but aggressive Inu! :)
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  • From ANON - Mia on January 17, 2005
    *is glued to computer screen*
    Wonderfull lemon!
    Very juicy...
    *likes to drink lemon juice*
    Don't ask!
    Neways...
    *deep breath*
    New Chappie please!
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  • From ANON - Ash on January 17, 2005
    Holy fuck. I've sat here for 4 hours, I'm freezing, and my arm is asleep. Look what you made me do!! This is beyond wonderful, and just so you know, I'm not the "suck-up-to-make-you-feel-good-type". I especially liked the scene with Kagome and Shippou, telling her he'd never forget her. Hurray hurray. Very very very very nice, I shall now sit and attempt to wait patiently for your next update.
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  • From ANON - YoukaiMusashi (too lazy to sign in) on January 17, 2005
    OMG Jen...that chap was not a lemon...that was The Ultimate Inu-Kags Lemon lol...so absolutely perfect and romantic and sweet, not to mention hot :) and very Inu-Kag-ish :) Girl you so ROCK!!! This and Scherezade's one-shot are the best IY erotic stories I've ever come upon the good fortune to read. I'm SO not worthy. This was so beautiful...and HOT. Phew ::fans herself:: Ok... ahem... review...ass kissing...you deserve it, don't complain :P This actually (the whole story, not the chap) deserves a very long email of praise not a mere review...but let me try it now: YOU KICK ASS! Ok let me try again...this was awesome. Simply Perfect. So beautiful. Not merely a sex scene or a simple 'lemon', but sweet, steamy lovemaking at its best with our fave couple no less... beautifully described, wonderfully written, simply...wow. I have no words. I dislike to repeat myself but...did I mention you rock? YOU ROCK! I'm speechless. I will build you a small shrine for this, CP Hentai lol. ::bows:: Thank you for giving us this story! It's flawless, from the beginning to the last posted chap, and girl, like I said, I never lie, so if you don't want This YM to kiss your ass you should start doing something wrong with the story! :) I'll go take a cold shower now. Just kidding...maybe lol. Standing ovation. You rock, your story kicks ass, you're so talented it's selfish not to pass some talent onto us mere mortals struggling to write :P I freakin love you Jen! ::hugs:: And you know it's not just because of this chap :) Go you talented girl you!!!!!
    Love and ramen!!!!
    YM
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  • From ANON - Jordy on January 17, 2005
    Wow! It just keeps getting better!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jasmine Fields on January 17, 2005
    That was, without doubt, on the top 10 list of most beautiful lemons I've read. Simply beautiful.
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  • From ANON - satisfied kinky lurker on January 17, 2005
    well, that was hot, ne? let me just say that i'm going to be enjoying that lemon for a while yet. it was very, very, very tastefully done and you did a wonderful job describing everything. i enjoyed this chapter very, very much and i hope to read more from you soon. please, please, please write more for me soon. please, i need more! (this is me begging you shamelessly)

    it was a great update and i hope to read more from you soon. (glomps for all!)

    ja ne!
    ~hanyou-elf
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  • From VampireWitch on January 17, 2005
    Well done.
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  • From ANON - Jasmine Fields on January 16, 2005
    Awesome, awesome, awesome! I know that I've not reviewed this entire time, but I couldn't help but keep reading! (That, and I just found this fic 3 days ago and keep getting sidetracked from reading its entirety.) Love everything that you've done to build up to this point so far! All the images created really had me wanting more...all the things in a relationship - good, bad, everything....There isn't enough writing space in this world that expresses the way my heart feels for both Kags and Inu right now. Love it. Can't wait for the next update.

    -Jazz-
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  • From ANON - Mia on January 15, 2005
    Please update! Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
    -lil Mia-kins >_
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  • From ANON - blossom on January 15, 2005
    wow this story is so good please update and soon
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  • From KuroKen on January 15, 2005
    Indeed it would figure that I would enter a review and miss the signing in part *sighs* well "that" *glances up at the previous entry* was my password *grumble* well just wonderful, I will miss it.
    One thing for nothing happens without a reason, after entering my review I noticed that ms. Suketchi had reviewed you recently as well. Before I came across your work ms. Cutie I was fortunate enough to read hers, I hope you have an oportunity to do so yourself.
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  • From ANON - KuroKen on January 15, 2005
    Dear Cutie Pie Hentai:

    As I write this, I am compelled to thank you, your craft, attention to detail and obvious knowledge of the realm you've chosen to work with is a marvel to behold, a labor of love that you've chosen to give us to enjoy.

    These are but the most meager reasons why you and your writing are so special: I thank you for being of strong spirit and gentle soul, for sharing from your own life's experience and memories and thusly giving onto the memory of your loved one a homage that will remain within us all whom your work has touched, for this courage that you are so modest of, we are greatful.
    I want to thank you for reading your reviews and replying in as much as you found the time or the pertinence to those who seeked to encourage or advise you, for skill tempered with modesty we thank you.

    For being an example that inspires emulation -as it stands I am working on my first FanFic and have found your work a wealth of information in things from paragraph structure to dialog dynamic- and for accepting accolades while still striving to turn out work that not only satisfies your needs as a story teller but those of your audience as you magik us into caring, laughing and crying for the characters, thank you.
    I undertook the reading of this piece from beginning to end in one sitting, within the span of time it has taken me to finish up to the current chapter I've laughed, been annoyed, felt angry, sad and on occasion lustful, but always entertained, thank you.
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  • From ANON - No Sugar Added on January 14, 2005
    *sigh*

    I love this story...perfect balance of everything and an ORIGINAL (shocking!!) plot. I love it. Write more! NOW!!! ;-P
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