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By : CutiePieHentai
  • From ANON - Mia on January 03, 2005
    Please post more!!!
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  • From ANON - ectweak2004 on January 02, 2005
    I hope that's not the end!!! this has been too good to just end like that. there's almost no closure, and it leaves so many questions! I know, I'm rambling... but this is really good! better than my fics I'll tell you what.

    Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - scherezade on January 02, 2005
    Silly girl..'twas my pleasure to read. What are winter breaks for? Sigh. Now at the end of that. Thanks for the plug (I'm sorta embarassed).

    Good grief! I finally read the whole chapter and I'm just....sitting here with a dumb grin on my face :)
    I know I've said this to you before, but yours is the first fic that I've seen that brings in such a comprehensive cast of characters to help in the final battle. Very "Lord of the Rings" style with an epic battle. And I just love that concept! The funny thing is that it makes so much sense when you think about it...afterall, Naraku has the potential to change life as it is for everyone -human and demon- in Japan. Why shouldn't humans and demons band together to fight him?
    And nice clarification about Sesshie's arm - made much more sense to me. Did anyone get the reference? Wink, wink, nudge, nudge? If not...I'll set the killer rabbit with the pointy teeth on them...or perhaps use the holy hand grenade...
    :)
    Your actual battle scene was great...and I'm glad that you didn't drag it on for too long. Just enough action. Everyone seems to be getting their happy endings...Kohaku is alive; Ayame will get Kouga; and Kikyo....hmm...

    But what we're waiting for is the mating...(Starts chanting "lemon...lemon...lemon....lemon...lemon")


    I can't *wait* to read what the next chapter has in store.
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  • From ANON - essie on January 02, 2005
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO T_T WHY WHY WHY STOP THERE you are a great writer please update soon the fight part great pllllllllllllleeeeeeaase update
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  • From ANON - No Sugar Added on January 02, 2005
    Ya know, usually, I can find something wrong with a story...but I can't offer any criticism!! New favorite story of all time. That was the best fight scene ever; you are an amazing writer. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Psyco_chick32 on January 02, 2005
    GOD I'm loving this storyline! The intrigue, the humor, and the hentai... the perfect balance of awesomeness! KEEP IT UP!!!
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  • From ANON - camille on January 02, 2005
    omg ivebeen reading your fic.. checking for new chapters and such.. this is soooooo beautiful im crying right now.. this was such a beautiful chapter.. great writing and perceived emotions.. the fight scenes were great to... the end where kohaku is reborn or watever because of sesho. that was so beautiful.. GREAT WORK.. i cant wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Spud on January 02, 2005
    Wow... And I thought your A/N made me cry... That was truly beautiful. Nothing more, nothing less. That's all there is to it.
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  • From ANON - kinky lurker on January 02, 2005
    (rising and applauding the chapter) well, i have to say that that was beautifully written and wonderfully presented. you did a marvelous job describing everything and the excellent effort that it took to keep the battel flowing and still keep the level of description... (applause) beautiful! i loved it! you should so not be shy about the way you write your action sequences. you did a wonderful job here (except for a few spelling errors on attacks and names). i was very impressed and engrossed.

    ... and i also have this deep desire to call you a bitch for the evil ass cliff-hanger at the end of this chapter. but, i suppose it is fitting as the chapter does address so much other things. (shrugs)

    who knows. and to the question of trusting inuyasha, hell yeah! (nodding vigorously)

    great job and i look forward to the next email! (love that btw!)
    ~hanyou-elf
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  • From ANON - offdutyninja on January 02, 2005
    love the story, i check almost everyday to see you have posted. one thing caught my eye though. the fight between hakudoshi and sessh. was that a shout out to monty python? its gotta be. i found it quite funny. mega props to you for that. post soon!
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  • From ANON - Lucy on January 02, 2005
    Ahhh! Evil Cliffie! But I trust you; you won't let us suffer too long, now will you? I didn't think so. Y'know, I've read a lot of fanfics about the 'last battle,' so to speak, but I really think that this is by far the best yet. You managed to keep it from seeming trite, which, I'll admit, is no small feat. This actually seemed like a natural place for the plot to go, instead of the too-convenient wrapping up of loose ends that so many other, less talented authors turn their stories into. Brava!
    ~MidsummerDreamer (pen name)
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  • From ANON - malice_elisa on January 02, 2005
    wow! Your fight scene was great! I've knew you were having them gathering allies I just never knew you would gather...them all. This is probably the best allied final battle I've read so far. Usually people just have Inuyasha, Kagome, Sango, Miroku, Shippou, Kirara, Kikyou, Kouga with his wolves, and Sesshoumaru. It never fails that people usually have those people only in the final battle, but you went all out. Very nicely done I think it's great for a person who says they don't do fight scenes. Well now I can't wait for the next chapter that was one hell of a cliffie you ended with! I wonder what Kikyou did? I'm suprised Inuyasha trusted Kikyou to touch Kagome after all the times Kikyou tried to hurt her in the series and all. Well better cut this short so you wont have to read too much. Thanks again for another great chapter!

    Elisa
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  • From ANON - Iron Dog on December 30, 2004
    Oh please tell me there will be more. Pleasepleaseplease let there be more. You absolutely cannot end it here. This was awsome. One of the best Inu Yasha pieces I've read in a while.
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  • From ANON - kinnky lurker, hanyou-elf on December 29, 2004
    (sniffles) fluff! (wipes theatrically dramatic tear from eye) my love, thy name is fluff. how i love thee fluff. let me tell you, this was a wonderful chapter (running tackle glomp) and i enjoyed reading it. especially when inuyasha told her the truth, even if he doesn't think she knows. i particularly liked te image of him lovingly stroking her head whilst saying that he would lay at her feet, just to be near her because he loved her so much. kami, i wish somebody would tell me that! (hanyou-elf is jealous now.)

    all in all, it was a great chapter and i loved it and i so can't wait for the next chapter. and i totally love that you send out those little emails to let us know when you update, otherwise, i don't think i'd review as often. i mean, i come on the site frequently, but i visit other stories as well, you understand, ne? and the fact that you send out the emails to let us know that you have updated, well, that helps out. a lot. lets me know what i need to do next, what story needs to be read. (not that it's a burden, ne?)

    okay... so i'm ranting a little bit now... -.-''

    ja ne! (update soon!)
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  • From ANON - malice_elisa on December 29, 2004
    Another good chapter, short and sweet. I think I might have liked the authors note at the end more then the chapter... is that bad? Well the final battle is coming up and I can't wait to read it! I know it's going to be great since you have a knack for making great stories and also being a part of them. Until the next chapter, Good bye!



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