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Reviews for Sloppy Seconds

By : CutiePieHentai
  • From isisriku90 on October 13, 2014
    Oh, my god, this story was so great. I loved all the fluffy moments and the little hidden things. The ending brought tears to my eyes, and I loved it, especially his mother coming to him and her being Midoriko's great-granddaughter. I really hope that life is treating you well, and you may find a very happy life after everything you have been through. I hope an epilogue is able to be created. Great story
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on December 08, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on December 28, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 02, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - Megha on July 29, 2006
    Hey, this isn't really a review (I'll be sure to do that when I've gone through your whole story, I just started it), but a little details note. In your chapter 7, "Scrolls" (which I'm reading right now), you wrote that Souta's age was 10, however, you'd stated some chapters earlier that it had been at least three years since the shard-hunting started, putting Kagome at 18 years of age or so, correct? If you recall from the series (I haven't read the manga yet, so I can't be sure if its there too), Souta is in the third grade, making him 8 or 9, and according to your timeline, shouldn't he be in the sixth grade, maybe seventh, making him at least 12? If, however, making him 10 is more suitable to what you're writing in your scenes, then that's cool, I get it. Just wondering if you knew about this timeline/age thing... Anyway, that's it. You'll no doubt get a proper review when I'm done. Ciao, and good luck!
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  • From ANON - Silvermist on July 14, 2006
    Wow.. just wow.
    The amount of research and thought that went into this battle and chapter are astounding. The editing is excellent.
    I can honestly say this is the best final battle I've read and well.. I read alot. I've never been good at reveiwing, so I rarely comment, due to my rather poor way with words, in so far as giving feedback that is constructive -as opposed to mindless babbling about how impressed I am.
    I am blessed (cursed?) with photo recall, and posession of the series. You've put so much THOUGHT into what might happen if the pack pulled in all their markers.

    Kudos.

    Silvermist the Taleweaver

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  • From Asmodai666 on January 10, 2006
    woo hoo, i came to read your fics, and i am ABOLUTELY stunned by your talent to write :O you rock girl! its reeeeeeeally wonderful, your fic its magnificent :D :D congrats...but tell me, did u give up on ur story???OMFG, UPDATE PLEASE???!!!! kisses ;**
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  • From ANON - Lost Star on December 11, 2005
    Your story was great and I can't wait to read any other storties you may have.
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  • From ANON - Urgazhi on November 17, 2005
    Dang good story :)

    overall a REALLY good plot, the char's arent too OOC and overall it is very well writen, good story! :)

    -Urgazhi
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  • From ANON - psyco_chick32 on November 06, 2005
    why won't you update this story anymore? I really really really miss it!
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  • From ANON - Saori on October 23, 2005
    Aww! I LOVED this story so far. It's very heart-warming, very endearing. I actually shed tears when Mama Higurashi was talking about her Husband, and cried more when I learned it was an experience taken from your own life. You know you have a real peice of art when you can draw tears to your readers, when you can draw emotion. I commend you on your fine art here, Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Zincpaw on October 10, 2005
    Hello. That lemon was well writen and, dare I say it, filled to the brim with lemony goodness. It is one of the best lemons that I have read, the others being those by Sueric (the BEST of the best) and the entire story of Something Real on this site. One part I particularily liked was when InuYasha couldn't take Kagome for fear of hurting her, his devotion and love for her and his will not to hurt her anymore really shine through in that part. Well done. On another note, I'm not sure if you want to hear this but I think there may have been some spelling errors. Shippou's attack, kitsune-bi has the 'i' at the end not 'e'. 'i's are pronounced as 'ee', while 'e' is pronounced as something else. Now I need to find that chart again. Also 'Aishiteru' is the spelling of 'I love you'. Don't hate me for telling you that. Most people don't like it when I tell them the correct spellings. Is the story done now or are there more chapters to come?
    Ok now for the conclusion, Bows. Thank you for taking so much time out of your life to thiknk up, write, edit, and post this story onto this site amoung others, for the entire English speaking, computer owning, and internet acessable population of the Earth. Anyone who does all of this are some of the bravest people that I know of. Thank you. Zincpaw
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  • From ANON - Kittie Katana on September 03, 2005
    Holy hell... I have no words with which to review this little gem. Do you have any idea how bizarre that is? My ridiculous, full-blown critique has simply flown away. I can say without a single doubt that this is probably the best IY fic (hentai or non) I have ever had the pleasure of reading, and that's the first time I've ever said that. Thank you so much for doing the characters and the story justice. I hope you update soon. This is on my favorites list...
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  • From ANON - Markeesha on August 09, 2005
    Absolutely AMAZING story! And your lemons are so tasteful, and detailed. Thank you for being a magnificent writer. :)
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  • From ANON - kittenclaws on July 10, 2005
    oh you are evil to leave us hanging like that but to give you your dues it is a ass kicking story and i loved it please finish it i wanna see want happens
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