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Reviews for Bargaining Death

By : lunanight
  • From ANON - konneko_nezumi on September 18, 2004
    aww... kawaii chapter...
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  • From ANON - Saphir Kitsune Youkai Girl on September 18, 2004
    Not bad. But you might like to try
    to slow down their relationship a
    bit. I, personnaly, think they're
    moving too fast. Anyway, update
    soon!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - anomaly on September 16, 2004
    I like it so far.
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  • From ANON - szmadad on September 16, 2004
    Y'know...I vaguely recall the movie you're basing this on...but can't remember the end. For that reaon, I'm enjoying the character interactions and how you're building up the attraction between Inu and Kag. I also like the way you're describing Inuyasha's reactions to everything...it's kind of like he's a kid seeing and experiencing things for the first time.

    In your story, as impossible as it sounds, I hope that Kagome and Inuyasha can get and STAY together....after all, it IS fanfiction and authors shoud be able to make anything happen, right? Can Inu "retire" from his duties to stay with her?

    I just love them as a couple and want them to be together... at least in the realm of fanfics. :)
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  • From ANON - NightmareadeptX on September 14, 2004
    This story is the best not to bother but can you try to get the next chapter up soon. .......
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  • From ANON - drake220 on September 06, 2004
    cute! but you might want to seperate people's speech. update!
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  • From ANON - theMaven on September 06, 2004
    Interesting premise. InuYasha as the grim reaper, huh?

    My only suggestion is start a new paragraph when you change speakers. It's hard to tell who's talking when if your paragraph is a jumble of quotation marks.
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  • From ANON - Lady Sethia on September 06, 2004
    This is very interesting take on things. I don't think I've seen this one done yet and it has my interest that's for sure. I will be looking forward to your next chapter!
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