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Reviews for The Lucky Ones

By : isilwath
  • From ANON - LibraCourt on February 11, 2013
    Terri you must fix this story so it is readable again. I really loved it. It's such a good story and one of the best ones I've read in years. It remains #1 in my books and I'm so sad I can't read it any more cause of the...well I'm not sure what to call it, but it's all mess up.
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  • From DhHoney on October 13, 2007
    This is probably the third time I have read this story, but it never gets old. I noticed that there are a lot of instances where the story skips and pieces are left out, but I know how hard it is to make everything just so. Very well done with this. I have to say that "The Lucky Ones" is probably my all time favorite Inuyasha story.
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  • From ANON - dspem on October 12, 2006
    great story
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  • From ANON - AJ_Phelps on July 14, 2006
    I love this story. I read it a long time ago on fanfiction.com.
    I was so sad when it dissappered from there.
    Took me a while, but I found it on AFF. (I was very excited!)

    I still love this story, even with a lot of parts of it not there...

    What happen? What it AFF? Or something else?

    Anyway, I still love the story and can't wait to read the other story you have on here... (The Coyote Child)

    Much love from:
    ~~Blue_Babe

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 19, 2006
    I enjoyed the story, but there were too many pieces missing. I got confused many times. Please work on that next time. Other than that, good job!
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  • From ANON - the cridic on December 09, 2005
    continuye
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  • From ANON - cynthia shippee on November 26, 2005
    when i first came upon this story it was midnight and i was clicking around the media miner and bam the best story i have ever read in my life was suddenly there. I give you five stars for this story and come crawling on bended knee begging you to send me any indication that you are putting your writing skills to work gracing us with another one of your wonderful stories. i am truly a fan.
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  • From ANON - angie on November 19, 2005
    Hey, love your story!......but what happened to the end of chapter 22? ::sad face::
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  • From ANON - Jinxed1 on October 08, 2005
    Just to let you know you are missing some of your story in chapter 20.
    What happened with the doctor?

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  • From ANON - mhall on September 04, 2005
    please repost most chapter were cut short.
    great story
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  • From ANON - Kidwellie on August 27, 2005
    This is, by far, one of the best fan fics that I have EVER read! Wonderful work!
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  • From ANON - Gyousei on July 08, 2005
    umm, a lot of the chapters didn't upload completely or at all, could you please fix this?
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  • From ANON - Shadowknight on June 19, 2005
    This is a great story, but it is incomplete. Many, if not all, chapters have been chopped off roughly in half. I've no idea how that happened, but it might be do to technical issues. I've been reading this on MM.net, and I noticed the differences easily.
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  • From ANON - dj on June 02, 2005
    Love your story. I noticed that in The Lucky Ones you had Eri's last name as Bast. Would that have had anything to do with the Egyptian Goddess of the Cats, Bast or Bastet?
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  • From beccapatty on May 25, 2005
    heyy there.. i just found this story on this site and was thrilled.. I was able to review and tell ya what i thought. I had originally found this story and read it on kokololio.com .. also on ur home page.. I fell in love with it.. It made me laugh histerically, aww in cuteness, and bawl my eyes out.. It was such a great story! I just wanted to let u kno that this story is my all time favorite story ever! Ive re-read it once already.. the story never gets old! lol .. Hell i think i even wrote in my profile that ur story was my all time favorite.. and copied the link to where its located at Kokololio.com hehe.. anyways Im also printing the full story out .. that way in case the website goes down for good.. or the story gets deleted or sumthin i'd still have a copy to be able to always read... its sooooooooooooooooooooo good! I love the Inuyoukai talking bit.. thats adorable! "Mother female, leader male hungry" .. "Pup good " ooo and i like the having to lick under the chin and stuff for forgiveness.. and all about the pack.. and how they threatened to kick yukio out of the pack when he was little when they turned their backs on him.. and he screamed and cried as if he were being killed.. YOUR STORY IS AWESOMEEEEE! I just wanted to let u kno what I thought! I hope u continue with The Coyote Child soon.. Its really good as well! Keep up the awesome work!
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