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Reviews for The Lucky Ones

By : isilwath
  • From ANON - Anon on April 11, 2005
    I love your story, and have read it several times. I just wanted to report a strange deletion of chapter 20. The chapter abruptly breaks from the doctor yelling to Ayumi in a spot you had not originally written. I just thought you'd like to know.
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  • From ANON - Dreamscapes on February 11, 2005
    Absolutely wonderful story! I really do not come across other stories like this. I enjoyed every part of it except for some grammar errors...lol! But nobody needs good spelling to write a fabulous story! Your connection between Inuyasha and his eldest son and youngest dog youkai stood out so much for me. :) I appreciate a person who can tie in family aspects, romance, and a bit of action without making the story a mary-sue. Job well done!
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  • From ANON - merkitty on December 08, 2004
    very nice story.
    so cute, just sad that the half demons had to be infertile.
    however i had a lot of problems with the set up, it seemed as if the end of every chapter was cut out and sometimes parts of the middle of teh chapter were sliced and diced as well.
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  • From ironreaver on November 06, 2004
    Amazing!!!!!!!!!!

    It's the oly word that can describe your fic.
    Usualy, normal pairings tend to go either boring or too unrealistic, but you managed to keep it in the right spot.
    You kept each character's personality intact and this is no easy task

    as we say it in french: Mon chapeau!
    continiu the good work
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  • From MelMuff on November 04, 2004
    What a beautiful fanfic u wrote. It took me a while to read it but it was well worth it in the end. This fic was truly touching and I'm glad that it had a good ending. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Setsuna(aka. Alison) on November 01, 2004
    I love it! I started reading it on fanfition.net, but when I came back to the site to finish reading it, it was gone! The story was under my fav. stories too! My username was DemonGirl-Setsuna on fanfiction.net! *Dances around in circles around the computer* I LOVE HAPPY ENDINGS! I JUST LOVE THEM! *Hugs her InuYasha plushie* I got my five year old brother hooked on InuYasha and because of me he loves the sappy parts! He loves the hug sceanes between Kagome & InuYasha! He has rewined the DVD so many times that he has watched them hug about ten times now!

    Ja'ne(later), from Setsuna-chan!
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  • From ANON - Midnight_Sparrow on October 14, 2004
    Beautiful....
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  • From ANON - Dark_Neko17 on October 12, 2004
    Awesome story, damn I loved it. I was reading it on fanfiction.net, but then it disapeared...damn and I would never know how it ended. Loved it, once more, awesome story. Best one i've read yet
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  • From ANON - Midnight_Sparrow on October 11, 2004
    Hoo boy....well, how's he gonna resolve that? I'll be back to read more later.
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  • From ANON - Midnight_Sparrow on October 11, 2004
    This is beautiful....if only I didn't have class in the morning so I could stay up reading this...
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  • From ANON - Kazemaru on September 29, 2004
    Yay! I finshed it finally! great story. I usually hate really long stories, but this one got me hooked. Cant wait to read others you have made.
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  • From EMiller152 on September 26, 2004
    *claps wildly for about half a minute* Beautiful, heartrending, and well thought out, with moments of being laugh-out-loud funny. Definitely worth all the time it took me to read it. I really hope you'll write more, because this is a truly incredible story.
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  • From ANON - Demon_eyes on September 17, 2004
    Love it! I haven't exactly been able to finish it yet but I still love it!
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  • From EMiller152 on September 17, 2004
    This is absolutely exquisite. You actually brought tears to my eyes. It's 2:10 a.m. right now and I should go to bed, but I must read more!
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  • From EMiller152 on September 16, 2004
    I just finished chapter seven, and I intend to read the whole thing. I usually don't read such long fanfics, but yours is just so wonderful that I have to read it. It's beautiful and touching, and some parts had me laughing out loud. This is now on my Recommended Reading List.
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