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Reviews for Hot Springs

By : ColShaLin
  • From mitapyon on July 24, 2009
    I should've known it was Jaken all along... Green is my fav color though so I didnt think at all and wondering who that uke might be AT ALL. I think it was going to be an OC. Well... That end was shocking me... Though imagining Jaken to be a bishonen kinda prevented me from puking right out. Nice one, not to mention rape *hint* *hint* back there, btw!
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  • From Pumpkinpi on August 24, 2008
    Hi,

    I really like the your story, especially the twist at the end. I should have know who the green guy was from all the crying he did. Any way great story.

    Take Care,

    Pumpkinpi
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  • From ANON - cas (2 lazy 2 log) on October 21, 2005
    O_O Oh hell no. XD Jesus, you have a good way of intensifying the story! That came as a HUGE surprise! Shocking, but pleasant. LOL I hope you do another chapter. This was wrong and delightful at the same time! Loved the rape and how you describe Sesshy's feelings. Awesome! Great fic! I can't wait for more!!! ~thumbs-up~
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  • From ANON - Rawben on October 11, 2005
    ohhhhh... that was goooood. never even saw it coming!! great job! i was like, "who has green hair and green skin???" damn good! if you made more chapters, i'd read em! ;)
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  • From ANON - the mystical dragon on October 11, 2005
    :: jaw drops in shock :: ohhh my god!!! oh my god!!! I guess Jaken got what he always wanted....LMAO
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  • From ANON - Terry on October 11, 2005
    Cough:Cough...ummm....cough:cough...wow...Jaken! I can't believe I didn't get it! Green, Terry, he was green. Man, if Sesshoumaru found out...Great fic!
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  • From ANON - Tainted Dreams on October 11, 2005
    *Blinks-falls off chair* Oh my!! Well that was different and quite resourceful of Jaken. ACK!! *Shudders* Lovely writing on this, and very original!!
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  • From ANON - Akela on July 12, 2005
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! you evil beast!!
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  • From ANON - ilovesesshomaru4evr on February 22, 2005
    o_O wow....unbelievable
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  • From ANON - Lynx on February 19, 2005
    OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!! What a surprise ending I would have never guessed!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - myself on January 29, 2005
    HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA...HAhHahHAhAHhahaa...

    Yeah. You "own" him.

    Poor fuck.
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  • From ANON - Sesshyaoilover on January 04, 2005
    NO!0______0 need....second chapter PlZ I love it!!!

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  • From ANON - kiiro on December 28, 2004
    Wow... I thought Sesshomaru had issues but... Jaken is straight up Psyco. He went through all of that just to get skrewed by sesshomaru?! Like I said He don't have issues he a Psyco. I knew he was gay but wow... I'll bet Jaken loved that too... Great story...
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  • From ANON - T on September 29, 2004
    =-O..that's the only thing i could've done after that..make a face..lol..REALLY good fic..but i dunno..maybe a bit of unexpected squick?...even though Sesshy was literally gone..he might've stopped if he knew who it really was lol
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  • From ANON - Trommy-chan on September 27, 2004
    I shoulda freakin' known. Random youkai walking around and is TOTALLY green XP! .... This is a rather sad fic I'd have to say... cause... reaif Sif Sesshomaru ever KNEW about the fact that that WAS Jaken, I think he'd just have a heart attack and die! Though it would be humorous you have to admit.

    Jaken: Sesshomaru-sama... you know that wonderer that you told me about in the woods?

    Sesshy: What about it...? ::glare glare::

    Jaken: ::blush:: that was... umm... me... ::pokes his little fingers together::

    Sesshy: ::freezes in place, and eventually starts shaking::

    hours later

    Rin: What's wrong with Sesshomaru-sama? Jakken! What's wrong with Sesshomaru! he's been lieing down for hours mumbling to himself, and has been crying. JAKKEN! ARE YOU LISTENING?!

    Jaken: ::gets a flower, starts picking little pettles:: He's gonna kill me, he loves, he's gonna kill me, he loves me... oh no! He's gonna kill me! ::runs away::

    Though would be so terrble... and it would be such great blackmail for Inu-Yasha XD. I like your style, though I am curious as to why you put the little sceen change thing in there, un it it was just there for style. Course... I normally don't read this kinda stuff.. I was silly and desided not to read the description so it's my own damn fault 6.6;;.

    ::hears a loud thud in the back ground::

    What the holly?

    Rin: ::runs up to Trommy-Chan:: Sesshomaru-sama! He's DEAD!

    Holy crap I was only kidding o.O;;!
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