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Reviews for Dangerous

By : TheKagome
  • From ANON - kagome1312 on December 22, 2005
    i liked plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - L.A. on January 15, 2005
    that is a great story, reminds me of an old fashioned romance. I love it, please continue!

    L.A.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 23, 2004
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From WriterLady1031 on September 15, 2004
    Interesting...just remember to use proper spacing in between paragraphs. Other than that, you've got some good ideas with this story. Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - sublimetrickster on September 14, 2004
    Good start, I look foraward to seeing where you're taking this story. You've got great description and a feel for the sensual. There were a few grr anr and spelling mistakes, along with a missing word here or there. Try going over your writing very slowly, sentence by sentence to be sure you haven't missed fixing anything after you've got it all down. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - catt on September 14, 2004
    OH MY GOD WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!OOOOOOOO SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!HEHEHEHEHEH SORRRY PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!^_^
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  • From ANON - Spud on September 14, 2004
    OH. MY. GOD. ou dou don't update soon, I am going to perform suicide. Okay, I'm not really going to, but I'll do something that EVERYBODY will regret! Wait, no, that already happened in the form of my birth...
    *rubs back of neck* Okay then! Moving on! PLEASE update soon! PLEASE!!

    Bye! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 14, 2004
    Soo we gonna get more?? Please???
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  • From ANON - drake220 on September 13, 2004
    you naughty tease! i want the rest!!! update!!
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  • From ANON - ;_; Crying on September 13, 2004
    Thats mean! Its seems like a sexy story fic!! I love it keep on keep on -gets on knees and begs- PLEASE Continue!!!
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