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Reviews for You Look So Fine

By : Danny
  • From ANON - drake220 on September 18, 2004
    can you hear the crwod screaming, chanting a mantra? "two shot two shot two shot!!!'- i think they want another chapter too
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  • From ANON - ME on September 18, 2004
    Ooh! Ooh!!! YES, PLEASE!!!!! *waves frantically* lemon over here!!! Great beginning--loved it--just needs a lemon to make it perfect, if I do say so myself ^_^ UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....please??
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  • From ANON - kagokitty on September 17, 2004
    I really enjoyed this...ended really sweet and hot...hopefully there'll be more soon...?
    much love,
    =^-.~^=
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  • From ANON - Kaye on September 17, 2004
    If you don't finish this I will hunt you down and hurt you! I don't make threats often, rarely really. But my goddess that was good. That was just really well written very good. Love it. Please continue!
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  • From ANON - Da Meza on September 17, 2004
    MAKE IT A 2-SHOT! Come on! I love it! We need some lemon action! ::nods::
    ::whisper:: TWO-SHOT.

    Great Job.

    -DM
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  • From ANON - Forever_Illusi0n on September 17, 2004
    OMG I luved it! ::squeals:: Update it soon, cuz I just luv fics with Inu and Kag hookin' up in the club, Ima total trance/rave gurl all the way and these fics just go along with my interests. So I NEED MORE!! Blah! lol.
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  • From ANON - katt_jam on September 17, 2004
    this was great but ya it really need the lemon. please at least add that but I think you really should keep going .
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  • From ANON - sublimetrickster on September 17, 2004
    Very well written and enjoyable. I say go for the two shot if you can, I'm sure I'll read it.
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  • From ANON - black_n_pink on September 17, 2004
    This story is great plz update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - richonyx on September 17, 2004
    I loved it! Perfect amount of angst n' cussionlyonly thing that could've made it better was a big, juicy lemon..But I'm not complaining! Great, great story! If you're wondering if you should update, please do--I'd love to see where it could go!
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  • From ANON - ghettoside_gangsta on September 17, 2004
    Please please continue this story! It was so hott!
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  • From ANON - littlehanyou on September 17, 2004
    Cool, the way you described what kagome and inuyasha were wearing made them sound really hot. Nice words, nice job
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