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By : chevonne

From ANON - Spud on October 10, 2004
If she has so much pent-up frustration, why don't you help her get rid of it with Inu-Yasha? *hint hint* Pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaase???? I know how Kagome feels right now! And, to add to my frustration, the review buttons bitched out on me when I had a really good review! BAH! Does the horribleness in my life never end!? The sad part is, I already know the answer to that. x_x Yeah. I can't write the review right now, but I will for the next near-lemon. Although, the part where she saw Inu-Yasha's back muscles (I don't know if that's spelled right...*giggles nervously*) ripple WAS kind of a turn-on. *shudders* Update soon!!!!! (You owe me a helllottlotta lemons for MY pent-up frustration now...*smirks evilly*)
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From ANON - Spud on October 09, 2004
I just found out that the review buttons might be working again! If this gets through, then obviously. I would have e-mailed you, but it doesn't work right now for some reason. *mumbles incoherent swear words* Anyway, you MUST update soon! *looks over and sees untangled rope where sister should have been* Oh for the love of God...
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From ANON - Spud on September 30, 2004
I'm trapped in the bathroom again! THIS IS YOUR FAULT! BAH! *looks out through crack in door* Wait... *gasp* She's dropping! *finds out you don't finish lemon and sister gets back up* "..." *eye twitches uncontrollably and neck gets so tense it cracks* WHAT. THE. FUCK. Can't you see the crisis I'm in? Do you live in a hole you bitch?! ( I don't mean that ) *starts crying* I get it. You just don't like me. Is that it? YEAH! I KNOW IT IS! You'll never finish the lemon just to see me suffer! *reads next chapter*

Don't... say... a word... @$?#!%

P.S.- Thank you so much for forgiving me! Great chappies! Update soon!
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From ANON - Spud on September 26, 2004
Whoa... Umm... Sorry, my review wouldn't load, so I got frustrated and kept pressing the review button over and over... I'm really embarassed right now. Please forgive me. Bye.
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From ANON - darklady on September 25, 2004
lol this is a frustrated fic lol but its great keep updateing!
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From ANON - Spud on September 25, 2004
*looks at sister through crack in the door while going insane listening to opera* YES! Yes, my sister can't take the heat! *finds out you didn't finish the lemon* WHAT!? (I don't mean ANY of this) I HATE YOU! I HOPE YOU DIE AND BURN IN HELL! Because of you, I am a mass of goo on the floor, looking at my sister through a crack in the door to see if I have ANY chance of not getting murdered, and because you didn't finish the fucking lemon, there isn't!! (Okay, maybe I mean THAT particular sentence... ~_^) GASP! My body is re-shaping and cooling back into my original HUMAN form! Yes, that gives me a bigger chance at escaping, but that means that it's getting cooler! NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sees gettgetting up from death-litatetate and sister suddenly having a mood swing toward me* "I'm not gonna kill you anymore sis!," she says. *snort* Yeah right. But I'll chance it. *turns knob* You're not gonna kill me? Really?" *sister puts cat own gently* "Course not big sis!" *evil smirk crosses Tomi's (sister) features* "At least not in the next LIFETIME!" *Tomi grabs kitchen knife, raises above head and rushes at me, and I turn and run* "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Let the fact that this is your fault overwhelm you. Drown in the tidal-wave of guilt as it washes over you. Anyway, great chappie! Even if there's no lemon. But you HAVE help me beat Tomi! Big, juicy, sour lemons!

P.S.- I actually didn't mean to post that last 'review'.I just wrote it for fun even though I meant it. ~_^ But I accidentally pressed review. Sorry this is so long. Do you mind? Do you want me to stop? Or are you even reading anymore? I'll shut up now. Update soon!
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From ANON - Spud on September 25, 2004
*looks at sister through crack in the door while going insane listening to opera* YES! Yes, my sister can't take the heat! *finds out you didn't finish the lemon* WHAT!? (I don't mean ANY of this) I HATE YOU! I HOPE YOU DIE AND BURN IN HELL! Because of you, I am a mass of goo on the floor, looking at my sister through a crack in the door to see if I have ANY chance of not getting murdered, and because you didn't finish the fucking lemon, there isn't!! (Okay, maybe I mean THAT particular sentence... ~_^) GASP! My body is re-shaping and cooling back into my original HUMAN form! Yes, that gives me a bigger chance at escaping, but that means that it's getting cooler! NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sees cat getting up from death-like state and sister suddenly having a mood swing toward me* "I'm not gonna kill you anymore sis!," she says. *snort* Yeah right. But I'll chance it. *turns knob* You're not gonna kill me? Really?" *sister puts cat own gently* "Course not big sis!" *evil smirk crosses Tomi's (sister) features* "At least not in the next LIFETIME!" *Tomi grabs kitchen knife, raises above head and rushes at me, and I turn and run* "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Let the fact that this is your fault overwhelm you. Drown in the tidal-wave of guilt as it washes over you. Anyway, great chappie! Even if there's no lemon. But you HAVE helpbeatbeat Tomi! Big, juicy, sour lemons!

P.S.- I actually didn't mean to post that last 'review'.I just wrote it for fun even though I meant it. ~_^ But I accidentally pressed review. Sorry this is so long. Do you mind? Do you want me to stop? Or are you even reading anymore? I'll shut up now. Update soon!
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From ANON - Spud on September 25, 2004
*looks at sister through crack in the door while going insane listening to opera* YES! Yes, my sister can't take the heat! *finds out you didn't finish the lemon* WHAT!? (I don't mean ANY of this) I HATE YOU! I HOOU DOU DIE AND BURN IN HELL! Because of you, I am a mass of goo on the floor, looking at my sister through a crack in the door to see if I have ANY chance of not getting murdered, and because you didn't finish the fucking lemon, there isn't!! (Okay, maybe I mean THAT particular sentence... ~_^) GASP! My body is re-shaping and cooling back into my original HUMAN form! Yes, that gives me a bigger chance at escaping, but that means that it's getting cooler! NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sees cat getting up from death-like state and sister suddenly having a mood swing toward me* "I'm not gonna kill you anymore sis!," she says. *snort* Yeah right. But I'll chance it. *turns knob* You're not gonna kill me? Really?" *sister puts cat own gently* "Course not big sis!" *evil smirk crosses Tomi's (er) er) features* "At least not in the next LIFETIME!" *Tomi grabs kitchen knife, raises above head and rushes at me, and I turn and run* "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Let the fact that this is your fault overwhelm you. Drown in the tidal-wave of guilt as it washes over you. Anyway, great chappie! Even if there's no lemon. But you HAVE help me beat Tomi! Big, juicy, sour lemons!

P.S.- I actually didn't mean to post that last 'review'.I just wrote it for fun even though I meant it. ~_^ But I accidentally pressed review. Sorry this is so long. Do you mind? Do you want me to stop? Or are you even reading anymore? I'll shut up now. Update soon!
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From ANON - Spud on September 25, 2004
*looks at sister through crack in the door while going insane listening to opera* YES! Yes, my sister can't take the heat! *finds out you didn't finish the lemon* WHAT!? (I don't mean ANY of this) I HATE YOU! I HOPE YOU DIE AND BURN IN HELL! Because of you, I am a mass of goo on the floor, looking at my sister through a crack in the door to see if I have ANY chance of not getting murdered, and because you didn't finish the fucking lemon, there isn't!! (Okay, maybe I mean THAT particular sentence... ~_^) GASP! My body is re-shaping and cooling back into my original HUMAN form! Yes, that gives me a bigger chance at escaping, but that means that it's getting cooler! NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sees cat getting up from death-like state and sister suddenly having a mood swing toward me* "I'm not gonna kill you anymore sis!," she says. *snort* Yeah right. But I'll chance it. *turns knob* You're not gonna kill me? Really?" *sister puts cat own gently* "Course not big sis!" *evil smirk crosses Tomi's (sister) features* "At least not in the next LIFETIME!" *Tomi grabs kitchen knife, raises above head and rushes at me, and I turn and run* "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Let the fact that this is your fault overwhelm you. Drown in the tidal-wave of guilt as it washes over you. Anyway, great chappie! Even if there's no lemon. But you HAVE help me beat Tomi! Big, juicy, sour lemons!

P.S.- I actually didn't mean to post that last 'review'.I just wrote it for fun even though I meant it. ~_^ But I accidentally pressed review. Sorry this is so long. Do you mind? Do you want me to stop? Or are you even reading anymore? I'll shut up now. Update soon!
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From ANON - Spud on September 25, 2004
*looks at sister through crack in the door while going insane listening to opera* YES! Yes, my sister can't take the heat! *finds out you didn't finish the lemon* WHAT!? (I don't mean ANY of this) I HATE YOU! I HOPE YOU DIE AND BURN IN HELL! Because of you, I am a mass of goo on the floor, looking at my sister through a crack in the door to see if I have ANY chance of not getting murdered, and because you didn't finish the fucking lemon, there isn't!! (Okay, maybe I mean THAT particular sentence... ~_^) GASP! My body is re-shaping and cooling back into my original HUMAN form! Yes, that gives me a bigger chance at escaping, but that means that it's getting cooler! NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sees cat getting up from death-like state and sister suddenly having a mood swing toward me* "I'm not gonna kill you anymore sis!," she says. *snort* Yeah right. But I'll chance it. *turns knob* You're not gonna kill me? Really?" *sister puts cat own gently* "Course not big sis!" *evil smirk crosses Tomi's (sister) features* "At least not in the next LIFETIME!" *Tomi grabs kitchen knife, raises above head and rushes at me, and I turn and run* "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Let the fact that this is your fault overwhelm you. Drown in the tidal-wave of guilt as it washes over you. Anyway, great chappie! Even if there's no lemon. But you HAVE help me Tom Tomi! Big, juicy, sour lemons!

P.S.- I actually didn't mean to post that last 'review'.I just wrote it for fun even though I meant it. ~_^ But I accidentally pressed review. Sorry this is so long. Do you mind? Do you want me to stop? Or are you even reading anymore? I'll shut up now. Update soon!
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From ANON - Spud on September 25, 2004
*looks at sister through crack in the door while going insane listening to opera* YES! Yes, my sister can't take the heat! *finds out you didn't finish the lemon* WHAT!? (I don't mean ANY of this) I HATE YOU! I HOPE YOU DIE AND BURN IN H Be Because of you, I am a mass of goo on the floor, looking at my sister through a crack in the door to see if I have ANY chance of not getting murdered, and because you didn't finish the fucking lemon, there isn't!! (Okay, maybe I mean THAT particular sentence... ~_^) GASP! My body is re-shaping and cooling back into my original HUMAN form! Yes, that gives me a bigger chance at escaping, but that means that it's getting cooler! NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sees cat getting up from death-like state and sister suddenly having a mood swing toward me* "I'm not gonna kill you anymore sis!," she says. *snort* Yeah right. But I'll chance it. *turns knob* You're not gonna kill me? Really?" *sister puts cat own gently* "Course not big sis!" *evil smirk crosses Tomi's (sister) features* "At least not in the next LIFETIME!" *Tomi grabs kitchen knife, raises above head and rushes at me, and I turn and run* "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Let the fact that this is your fault overwhelm you. Drown in the tidal-wave of guilt as it washes over you. Anyway, great chappie! Even if there's no lemon. But you HAVE help me beat Tomi! Big, juicy, sour lemons!

P.S.- I actually didn't mean to post that last 'review'.I just wrote it for fun even though I meant it. ~_^ But I accidentally pressed review. Sorry thisso lso long. Do you mind? Do you want me to stop? Or are you even reading anymore? I'll shut up now. Update soon!
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From ANON - Spud on September 25, 2004
*looks at sister through crack in the door while going insane listening to opera* YES! Yes, my sister can't take the heat! *finds out you didn't finish the lemon* WHAT!? (I don't mean ANY of this) I HATE YOU! I HOPE YOU DIE AND BURN IN HELL! Because of you, I am a mass of goo on the floor, looking at my sister through a crack in the door to see if I have ANY chance of not getting murdered, and because you didn't finish the fucking lemon, there isn't!! (Okay, maybe I mean THAT particular sentence... ~_^) GASP! My body is re-shaping and cooling back into my original HUMAN form! Yes, that gives me a bigger chance at escaping, but that means that it's getting cooler! NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sees cat getting up from death-like state and sister suddenly having a mood swing toward me* "I'm not gonna kill you anymore sis!," she says. *snort* Yeah right. But I'll chance it. *turns knob* You're not gonna kill me? Really?" *sister puts cat own gently* "Course not big sis!" *evil smirk crosses Tomi's (sister) features* "At least not in the next LIFETIME!" *Tomi grabs kitchen knife, raises above head and rushes at me, and I turn and run* "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Let the fact that this is your fault overwhelm you. Drown in the tidal-wave of guilt as it washes over you. Anyway, great chappie! Even if there's no lemon. But you HAVE help me beat Tomi! Big, juicy, sour lemons!

P.S.- I actually didn't mean to post that last 'review'.I just wrote it for fun even though I meant it. ~_^ But I accidentally pressed review. Sorry this is so long. Do you mind? Do you want me to stop? Or are you even reading anymore? I'll shut up now. Update soon!
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From ANON - Spud on September 25, 2004
*looks at sister through crack in the door while going insane listening to opera* YES! Yes, my sister can't take the heat! *finds out you didn't finish the lemon* WHAT!? (I don't mean ANY of this) I HATE YOU! I HOPE YOU DIE AND BURN IN HELL! Because of you, I am a mass of goo on the floor, looking at my sister through a crack in the door to see if I have ANY chance of not getting murdered, and because you didn't finish the fucking lemon, there isn't!! (Okay, maybe I mean par particular sentence... ~_^) GASP! My body is re-shaping and cooling back into my original HUMAN form! Yes, that gives me a bigger chance at escaping, but that means that it's getting cooler! NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sees cat getting up from death-like state and sister suddenly having a mood swing toward me* "I'm not gonna kill you anymore sis!," she says. *snort* Yeah right. But I'll chance it. *turns knob* You're not gonna kill me? Really?" *sister puts cat own gently* "Course not big sis!" *evil smirk crosses Tomi's (sister) features* "At least not in the next LIFETIME!" *Tomi grabs kitchen knife, raises above head and rushes at me, and I turn and run* "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Let the fact that this is your fault overwhelm you. Drown in the tidal-wave of guilt as it washes over you. Anyway, great chappie! Even if there's no lemon. But you HAVE help me beat Tomi! Big, juicy, sour lemons!

P.S.- I actually didn't mean to post that last 'review'.I just wrote it for fun even though I meant it. ~_^ But I accidentally pressed review. Sorry this is so long. Do you mind? Do you want me to stop? Or are you even reading anymore? I'll shut up now. Update soon!
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From ANON - Spud on September 25, 2004
*looks at sister through crack in the door while going insane listening to opera* YES! Yes, my sister can't take the heat! *finds out you didn't finish the lemon* WHAT!? (I don't mean ANY of this) I HATE YOU! I HOPE YOU DIE AND BURN IN HELL! Because of you, I am a mass of goo on the floor, looking at my sister through a crack in the door to see if I have ANY chance of not getting murdered, and because you didn't finish the fucking lemon, there isn't!! (Okay, maybe I mean THAT particular sentence... ~_^) GASP! My body is re-shaping and cooling back into my original HUMAN form! Yes, that gives me a bigger chance at escaping, but that means that it's getting cooler! NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sees cat getting up from death-like state and sister suddenly having a mood swing toward me* "I'm not gonna kill you anymore sis!," she says. *snort* Yeah right. But I'll chance it. *turns knob* You're not gonna kill me? Really?" *sister puts cat own gently* "Course not big sis!" *evil smirk crosses Tomi's (sister) features* "At least not in the next LIFETIME!" *Tomi grabs kitchen knife, raises above head and rushes at me, and I turn and run* "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Let the fact that this is your fault overwhelm you. Drown in the tidal-wave of guilt as it washes over you. Anyway, great chappie! Even if there's no lemon. But you HAVE help me beat Tomi! Big, juicy, sour lemons!

P.S.- I actually didn't mean to post that last 'review'.I just wrote it for fun even though I meant it. ~_^ But I accidentally pressed review. Sorry this is so long. Do you mind? Do you want me to stop? Or are you even reading anymore? I'll shut up now. Update soon!
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From ANON - Spud on September 25, 2004
*looks at sister through crack in the door while going insane listening to opera* YES! Yes, my sister can't take the heat! *finds out you didn't finish the lemon* WHAT!? (I don't mean ANY of this) I HATE YOU! I HOPE YOU DIE AND BURN IN HELL! Because of you, I am a mass of goo on the r, lr, looking at my sister through a crack in the door to see if I have ANY chance of not getting murdered, and because you didn't finish the fucking lemon, there isn't!! (Okay, maybe I mean THAT particular sentence... ~_^) GASP! My body is re-shaping and cooling back into my original HUMAN form! Yes, that gives me a bigger chance at escaping, but that means that it's getting cooler! NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sees cat getting up from death-like state and sister suddenly having a mood swing toward me* "I'm not gonna kill you anymore sis!," she says. *snort* Yeah right. But I'll chance it. *turns knob* You're not gonna kill me? Really?" *sister puts cat own gently* "Course not big sis!" *evil smirk crosses Tomi's (sister) features* "At least not in the next LIFETIME!" *Tomi grabs kitchen knife, raises above head and rushes at me, and I turn and run* "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Let the fact that this is your fault overwhelm you. Drown in the tidal-wave of guilt as it washes over you. Anyway, great chappie! Even if there's no lemon. But you HAVE help me beat Tomi! Big, juicy, sour lemons!

P.S.- I actually didn't mean to post that last 'review'.I just wrote it for fun even though I meant it. ~_^ But I accidentally pressed review. Sorry this is so long. Do you mind? Do you want me to stop? Or are you even reading anymore? I'll shut up now. Update soon!
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