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From ANON - Spud on September 25, 2004
*looks at sister through crack in the door while going insane listening to opera* YES! Yes, my sister can't take the heat! *finds out you didn't finish the lemon* WHAT!? (I don't mean ANY of this) I HATE YOU! I HOPE YOU DIE AND BURN IN HELL! Because of you, I am a mass of goo on the floor, looking at my sister through a crack in the door to see if I have ANY chance of not getting murdered, and because you didn't finish the fucking lemon, there isn't!! (Okay, maybe I mean THAT particular sentence... ~_^) GASP! My body is re-shaping and cooling back into my original HUMAN form! Yes, that gives me a bigger chance at escaping, but that means that it's getting cooler! NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sees cat getting up from death-like state and sister suddenly having a mood swing toward me* "I'm not gonna kill you anymore sis!," she says. *snort* Yeah right. But I'll chance it. *turns knob* You're not gonna kill me? Really?" *sister puts cat own gently* "Course not big sis!" *evil smirk crosses Tomi's (sister) features* "At least not in the next LIFETIME!" *Tomi grabs kitchen knife, raises above head and rushes at me, and I turn and run* "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Let the fact that this is your fault overwhelm you. Drown in the tidal-wave of guilt as it washes over you. Anyway, great chappie! Even if there's no lemon. But you HAVE help me beat Tomi! Big, juicy, sour lemons!

P.S.- I actually didn't mean to post that last 'review'.I just wrote it for fun even though I meant it. ~_^ But I accidentally pressed review. Sorry this is so long. Do you mind? Do you want me to stop? Or are you even reading anymore? I'll shut up now. Update soon!
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From ANON - Spud on September 25, 2004
*looks at sister through crack in the door while going insane listening to opera* YES! Yes, my sister can't take the heat! *finds out you didn't finish the lemon* WHAT!? (I don't mean ANY of thI HAI HATE YOU! I HOPE YOU DIE AND BURN IN HELL! Because of you, I am a mass of goo on the floor, looking at my sister through a crack in the door to see if I have ANY chance of not getting murdered, and because you didn't finish the fucking lemon, there isn't!! (Okay, maybe I mean THAT particular sentence... GAS GASP! My body is re-shaping and cooling back into my original HUMAN form! Yes, that gives me a bigger chance at escaping, but that means that it's getting cooler! NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sees cat getting rom rom death-like state and sister suddenly having a mood swing toward me* "I'm not gonna kill you anymore sis!," she says. *snort* Yeah right. But I'll chance it. *turns knob* You're not gonna kill me? Really?" *sister puts cat own gently* "Course not big sis!" *evil smirk crosses Tomi's (sister) features* "At least not in the next LIFETIME!" *Tomi grabs kitchen knife, raises above head and rushes at me, and I turn and run* "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Let the fact that this is your fault overwhelm you. Drown in the tidal-wave of guilt as it washes over you. Anyway, great chappie! Even if there's no lemon. But you HAVE help me beat Tomi! Big, juicy, sour lemons!

P.S.- I actually didn't mean to post that last 'review'.I jusote ote it for fun even though I meant it. ~_^ But I accidentally pressed review. Sorry this is so long. Do you mind? Do you want me to stop? Or are you even reading anymore? I'll shut up now. Update soon!
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From ANON - Spud on September 25, 2004
*looks at sister through crack in the door while going insane listening to opera* YES! Yes, my sister can't take the heat! *finds out you didn't finish the lemonAT!?AT!? (I don't mean ANY of this) I HATE YOU! I HOPE YOU DIE AND BURN IN HELL! Because of you, I am a mass of goo on the floor, looking at my sister through a crack in the door to see if I have ANY chance of not getting murdered, and because you didn't finish the fucking lemon, there isn't!! (Okay, maybe I mean THAT particular sentence... ~_^) GASP! My body is re-shaping and cooling back into my original HUMAN form! Yes, that gives me a bigger chance at escaping, but that means that it's getting cooler! NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sees cat getting up from death-like state and sister suddenly having a mood swing toward me* "I'm not gonna kill you anymore sis!," she says. *snort* Yeah right. But I'll chance it. *turns knob* You're not gonna kill me? Really?" *sister puts cat own gently* "Course not big sis!" *evil smirk crosses Tomi's (sister) features* "At least not in the next LIFETIME!" *Tomi grabs kitchen knife, raises above head and rushes at me, and I turn and run* "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Let the fact that thisyouryour fault overwhelm you. Drown in the tidal-wave of guilt as it washes over you. Anyway, great chappie! Even if there's no lemon. But you HAVE help me beat Tomi! Big, juicy, sour lemons!

P.S.- I actually didn't mean to post that last 'review'.I just wrote it for fun even though I meant it. ~_^ But I accidentally pressed review. Sorry this is so long. Do you mind? Do you want me to stop? Or are you even reading anymore? I'll shut up now. Update soon!
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From ANON - Spud on September 25, 2004
*looks at sister through crack in ther whr while going insane listening to opera* YES! Yes, my sister can't take the heat! *finds out you didn't finish the lemon* WHAT!? (I don't mean ANY of this) I HATE YOU! I HOPE YOU DIE AND BURN IN HELL! Because of you, I am a mass of goo on the floor, looking at my sister through a crack in the door to see if I have ANY chance of not getting murdered, and because you didn't finish the fucking lemon, there isn't!! (Okay, maybe I mean THAT particular sentence... ~_^) GASP! My body is re-shaping and cooling back into my original HUMAN form! Yes, that gives me a bigger chance at escaping, but that means that it's getting cooler! NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sees cat getting up from death-like state and sister suddenly having a mood swing toward me* "I'm not gonna kill you anymore sis!," she says. *snort* Yeah right. But I'll chance it. *turns knob* You're not gonna kill me? Really?" *sister puts cat own gently* "Course not big sis!" *evil smirk crosses Tomi's (sister) features* "At least not in the next LIFETIME!" *Tomi grabs kitchen knife, raises above head and rushes at me, and I turn and run* "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Let the fact that this is your fault overwhelm you. Drown in the tidal-wave of guilt as it washes over you. Anyway, great chappie! Even if there's no lemon. But you HAVE help me beat Tomi! Big, juicy, sour lemons!

P.S.- I actually didn't mean to post that last 'review'.I just wrote it for fun even though I meant it. ~_^ But I accidentally pressed review. Sorry this is so long. Do you mind? Do you want me to stop? Or are you even reading anymore? I'll shut up now. Update soon!
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From ANON - Spud on September 23, 2004
Yo. I'm still trapped in the bathroom. I feel horribly alone. You're probably wondering why my parents haven't interfered. I'm taking care of the triplets while my parents are away on their wedding anniversary. I call the boys twins because they don't even wanna be related to my sis. At this point, neither do I. WAIT! The boys! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Save yourselves!!!!!!! *immediately calms down as if nothing happened* I'm writing while listening to the radio. There's a speaker in the upper corner of the bathroom. The main control is in the kitchen. Wich my sister has access to... *freezes while listenig to what's coming from speaker* Oh no... no... Please God, NO! *starts tearing at hair* Not OPERA!!!! ANYTHING but that! *gets up and starts pounding on door* Tomi! PLEASE! *starts sobbing* PLEASE!!!! Okay! I give in! The Fat Lady's singing! I get it!
*hears evil maniac laughter coming from down the hall and slumps to the floor* O.O

Sorry this isn't a review. I just wanted you to know that this is YOUR fault!! >_< (best angry face I can muster *grins sheepishly*)
But I'm gonna keep on readn'. Hopefully my SISTER will collapse at some point, either from the heat or exhaustion. Remember this? M MOR MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! ^_~ You MUST save me! Help me beat my sister! PLEASE!
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From ANON - inusgirl on September 23, 2004
WOW!!! Talk about an awesome story! I absolutely love it so far! I love Inuyasha and Kagome stories anyway, but this one is fantastic! Keep up the GREAT work! Update soon!
Inusgirl
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From ANON - hanyou-elf on September 23, 2004
now, that's what i call a good welcome 'home!,' ne? it's great! i don't know how you came up with this idea, but it's a great one and i hope that both of them revel in what i like to call... delayed gratification, ne?

call me about the resume, i'm still waiting, ne sweetie?

great job!

ja!
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From ANON - Spud on September 23, 2004
What?! Do you hate me that much?! Are you trying to get me killed?! I'm typing on my laptop in the bathroom because it's the only door that has a lock. Why, you ask? I'll tell ya. My cat collapsed again. Even with the A/C. As soon as my sister saw it, lying practically lifeless on the ground, she grabbed the kitchen knife and chased me around the house till I finally made it here. She's banging on the door, shouting out what she's gonna do to me. The words accompanying the threats aren't appropriate for a 55-year-old. And do you know how hard it is to type? I have no fingers, so I have to pound on the keyboard with my goo-ish body, hoping to type the right letters! And when my sister was chasing me, I was only saved because she slipped a few times! (I slithered) Anyway, HOT chappie! (as you've probably guessed) Update soon!
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From ANON - MyOwnHappyEnding (not logged on) on September 22, 2004
Awesome story! Can't wait to read the next chapter. I'm glad he didn't take the advances...that would have been weird. O.o;
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From ANON - bibop on September 22, 2004
aaaaahhh I love your way with words.please update soon.this was just as as as your other story..please update both as soon as possible.
just so fucking sexy!!!!!!!!!!1
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From ANON - Spud on September 22, 2004
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm a riot, I'm a riot, I'm a riot... *does little jig and falls out of chair* I'M OKAY!... stupid nail... O.O
Okay! Moving on. *reads chapter* Fucking flight attendant, she can go burn in hell. *reads end of chapter* What?! No lemon?!
Oh well. But that last part shows promise. *evil smirk* Yesterday was sad. As soon as I heard the words, 'Hepititis B' in school last week, the word 'shots' popped up in my mind.What's worse? I was right. BAH! Stupid Liver cancer. (Hepitit) Th) They always say needles don't hurt.
They always lie. Stupid people.
I don't appreciate when they jab a little poky thing in my arm to inject a fluid that makes me feel woozy. They're so MEAN!
If you're a nurse or a doctor, or somebody in some way that connects to this, please forgive me. But if you're not, do you agree with me? Truth be told my arm still feels kind of weird. Why don't they try it to feel how much it hurts?! But they probably do, I know. I don't give a shit. Anyway, GREAT chappie! Update soon!

~your loving riot, Spud~
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From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 21, 2004
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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From ANON - Spud on September 21, 2004
Yep..at dat did it, I am now a puddle of goo on the floor. And Kagome did that on her own! And plus, you haven't even finished Unleashed Desire yet. I'll have evaporated next chapter you post on either fic. Damn you. I'm afraid of what will happen when Inu-Yasha and Kagome get home... more specifically in the bedroom... *shudders* You must make lemon REALLY juicy and sour! PLEASE! *gets down on knees and hugs your legs* Please! *gives you 'The Face'* Please? *whimper*

Update soon on either and both fics!
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From ANON - kinky kitty's leash holder on September 21, 2004
"I... I miss you!" what better way to prove that you miss somebody you love get getting off at the sound of the voice when they are forever away and can't do anything to you? although, at least she's getting that release, ne? and that's important too! as always, you've written a very good, hot chapter and i can't wait for inuyasha to get his claws in kagome... ^.~ (know what i mean!) and even if she can't get some gratification from inuyasha, she should get a toy to help her out, ne?

great job and i can't wait for more.

oh! i'm available for nterviews in the mornings and i love to have some one on one time... ^.~

ja!
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From ANON - M on September 21, 2004
Update please!!!
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