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Reviews for Helpless

By : YukiShirogane
  • From ANON - aaaaa on August 26, 2005
    intresting i hope the monk gets killed by inyuasha this should be fun
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  • From ANON - fox_demon_hotti on March 19, 2005
    this was ok. the text is alittle confusing. when someone is speeking, pleasa use quotation marks("lalala")
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  • From ANON - animechick on February 27, 2005
    i never thought that miroku could do that but keep going
    i want to knoe what is inuyasha going to do
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  • From ANON - Kiggio on January 12, 2005
    That was simply awful.
    You need some serious grammatical help and a much better plot.
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  • From ANON - TwanG on December 10, 2004
    It was terrrible.
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  • From ANON - Rikku-sama on September 26, 2004
    Okay, you need to be slapped. That was just awful.
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  • From ANON - I really dislike "Sues" on September 22, 2004
    I've got to go with the previous reviewer. I couldn'll wll who was talking and who wasn't. Please get a beta reader before putting stuff like this up there, especially if its a "Sue" character (Everyone wants a peice of Sue, even Inuyasha, which I find very hard to believe. Sue characters are fine, but they get irratating when they push their way through to where She's the smartest, prettiest girl out there and everyone wants a peice of her and she knows it)
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  • From AriannaTrianash on September 21, 2004
    You need some real help in this. Seriously. They don't say stuff like boob. when you write a fic you gotta get into the speech of the day. I mean, saying ass is ok, its sounded good in the other Inu fics I've read. Boob just kinda threw me off, and the grammar needs work. It would be a wonderful story if you gave it a bit of a rewrite. Get more into it, get a little more descriptive. read some of the highly rated inu stories to see what I mean about talking. Otherwise, nice.
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