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By : Fairia13
  • From ANON - Cassie on October 31, 2004
    Oh man this is good stuff I really loved the lemon and the rest of the story, could you do a favor for me. Can you please have Rin with Sesshomaru when they find out with that bitch and her general were doing to Rin. And to let Rin slap the bitch after that and makeshomshomaru kill both the bitch and the her general. This is the only favor I ask of you. Please update really soon ok. Can't wait to read next chapter. Please don't keep us waiting.
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  • From ANON - Saavnnah on October 31, 2004
    MORE!MORE! I need MORE! That is an awesome piece of work. I loved it and highly recommend it to everyone. pLZ update soon!
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  • From ANON - RFW on October 30, 2004
    Wow, wow, wow. What a chapter this was(7). So many good parts. How typical of Rin to apologize to Sesshomaru for biting him, though. I burst out laughing at that part because it's just so silly yet so Rin-ish. And the next morning with poor Jaken was just so hilarious. If Sesshomaru wasn't so controlled he would have probably willingly chased that toad down. Then again, it is more fun to let Rin handle the situation.

    Speaking of situations, damn it, I want to see what Sess is going to do to Miss I Can't Let Go. I have a funny feeling some people in the room are going to lose their heads and no one will really miss them all that much. I just hope that Sess gets to Rin in time before she does something drastic.

    And Rin should have known better. I thought Alina's general forced Sess's speaking manner too much. He was overly cold and overly forceful, you think she'd tell the difference but then again being as surprised as she was probably took her by surprise.

    I just don't think Alina gets it. She's not "only human" that's obvious how Rin knew what Sess was feeling when she wasn't in the same room as him and the like. She must have someg thg that is more than just being a plain old human, no matter what Jaken says. Who knows what all changed in her when Sesshomaru brought her back with Tensegia. I don't think that's ever been truly investigated. She didn't become a demon but I don't think she's remained an ordinary human either.

    And in final response: MORE story SOON

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  • From ANON - darklady on October 30, 2004
    ATOKI IS SO FUCKING COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg he's awsome! and yay the bitch is going down and he will fix everythign! :jumps around happily:
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  • From ANON - essie on October 30, 2004
    kick there asses please update soon
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on October 30, 2004
    The lemon was PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!!! Not every detail must be told, I was very happy with the story.....I can't wait how Sesshomaru killing that bitch and her general......it's going to be sssssooooo good!!!!!!!!! update, UPDATE< UPDATE!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - New Fan on October 30, 2004
    Can we say kill Alina and her general. I think that Sesshoumaru will do just that once he hear of the
    plot against Rin and himself. Poor Rin, she does not deserve that. I just hope that she will listen to Sess
    and forgive him. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Cassie on October 29, 2004
    Oh wow, I really love thiory ory and do us all a favor and KILL OFF THAT BITCH ALINA, I can't wait for chapter 7 and hopefully the title of that chapter will be (Capture and Conquer ) or (The Willing Prey) or (Finally United) please don't keep us in suspense any longer.
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  • From ANON - violett407 on October 28, 2004
    Great fanfiction, keep the chapters coming!
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  • From ANON - Paranoid on October 28, 2004
    I like your story idea so far and have enjoyed reading it. You are keeping the characters in check, the relationships are belivable and the attention to detail is nice.


    I have a couple of problems with some descriptions you have though.

    When Sesshomaru becomes aroused, you said his groin hardened. That sounds painful because the groin encompasess the entire area from one hipbone to the other, from the lower abdomen to just under the scrotum. Maybe you could try being a little more specific? What would Sesshomaru call his body parts? One thing to keep in mind is who he is, our lovely Shesshomaru.

    The other description was when the maid became aroused for Sesshomaru. You wrote 'the hair nestled between her legs glistened.' Paraphrasing here but the hair that far up does not get wet that early. You may wish to move the reffrence of the glistening lower.

    These are just sugesstions for the next time you write. Please keep it up.

    Sincerly
    Paranoid

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  • From ANON - Polarkitty on October 28, 2004
    I want the next chapter by tonigh........please? I'm dying in suspense here, what happens??????
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  • From ANON - Meres on October 28, 2004
    Evil, evil, evil cliffy! You ought to be ashamed! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 28, 2004
    More!! More!! I need more of this story!!! It kicks ass
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  • From ANON - vashta on October 28, 2004
    Ok, I like this fic, it is pretty original.
    most of them are the same old story rewritten.
    Please don't let her get scared, or that woman
    mess them up to bad!
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  • From ANON - dawn on October 28, 2004
    That was awesome!!! Oh, and I want to correct a mistake in my earlier review, chp. 4 wasn't the best chp., it HAD been chp. 3, but now it's chp. 6. Whew, glad that was all straightened out! Anyway, I can't wait for the next chp!
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