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Reviews for When Two Paths Entwine

By : Babs
  • From ANON - Rawben on October 28, 2005
    dammmn! this is really good! great chapter! i can't wait till sess finds out!!
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  • From ANON - Em Wolf on October 28, 2005
    This has got to be the hottest chapter ever. I loved the portrayal of the angst and drama. The sexual tension was so thick it was tangible, which inevitably lead to an explosion of physical need that totally had me aroused. Great work babe. I appreciate good stories with a plausible plot as well as incredibly hot sex scenes. Keep up the wonderful work and I hope you update soon!

    Love,
    Em
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  • From catrice on October 28, 2005
    Hello, how is the family, I see that you have put your stories on this website. I am so happy, now maybe we can get an update!LOL!
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  • From ANON - Avid Fan on October 27, 2005
    The story line is just fantastic. Felt such frustration when I came to the end of your last chapter and found out I was left hanging! Can't wait till you update the next chapter. I do hope you are still continuing with this fanfic. For a writier that holds their reader captive and wanting more, you really write very well! Till the next chapter...
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  • From ANON - sessgirl on October 06, 2005
    It couldn't get better than this.
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  • From ANON - TAJE on October 03, 2005
    I know that Sess is insatiable as a strong drug, but WHOA! Kagome sure like to load her life with challenges! Whew! How addicted to each other can you get! Well our girl will have to deal the best she can. Hey! Where's my boy Inuyasha? Guess I'll have to wait next time! Boy Babs, you and your Co-Authors know how to deal! Waiting ever patiently for the next continuing drama of WHEN TWO PATHS ENTWINE!!!!!!!! Peace!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 24, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - sendosha on September 23, 2005
    Poor Sesshoumaru, he doesn´t deserve that, Kags is a coward! Great Chapter, I´m looking forward to the next one
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  • From StoryJunkie on September 22, 2005
    at ch 11 Gawd! my stomach was in knots from all the tension. I feel like someone just ganged up on me and thugged me to death with superior penmanship. My throat is still clenched. >gulps< Well done and well worth waiting for. I think that I'll read the entire story again.
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  • From ANON - techempath1 on September 22, 2005
    AWESOME part! Poor Kagome! I'm sure Kaede isn't as worried about it as Kagome thinks. I can't wait for more! I live for this story. I would love to find out how Sesshomaru finds out!


    Come back soon!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 22, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Brenda on September 15, 2005
    This is a great story,each chapter gets better and better.Keep up the good work and please e-mail me when a new chapter is finished.
    Thanks,
    B.
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  • From ANON - sesshy-koi on August 30, 2005
    Darn you to heck!! Nice cliffie!!;P
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  • From ANON - Della on August 30, 2005
    I absolutely love your story, but if you leave it there for long I will cause you serious discomfort. You could have stopped anywhere else in the chapter, but you chose to stop just when Inuyasha sees the baby... update soon please...
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  • From insomniac247 on August 27, 2005
    I love this story! I had first found it about six months ago after reading When Two Paths Collide. I had really enjoyed reading it, and had been waiting for an update to review. Well, I wasn't disappointed, and might I say you are truly evil for the way you ended chapter 10. It's a good kind of evil, but evil nonetheless. Anyway, love your writing, and love the story. Oh yeah, and I did like When Two Paths Collide also. Keep up the good work!
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