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Reviews for Beautiful Miscommunications

By : nena
  • From ANON - kat8125 on March 22, 2005
    Is there anyway we can convince you to bring the next chapter out just a little bit early? Pretty Please?! Anywho, nice chapter. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - snowfall on March 22, 2005
    What have we here? Just what kind of life has Miroku led? I have never seen the episodes
    with Jakotsu, but you did him up nice and what a wonderfully unexpected come back from
    Sango! The mural is such a cool idea. Where did you come up with it? An old Hitchcock movie?
    Oh, Rin is so cute. I like how you have Kagura enjoying Rin and Sess 'enjoying'
    Kagura's presence. I think I would be just as indignant as Kagura if I found out that some-
    one was inspecting my body while I was out of it. Oh, the dark promise in his remark! But, he's
    no fool. If she's up to something, he knows. Sometimes, I think someone should just shake
    the daylights out of Kag and Inu. They have more personal hangups than...let me think.
    You've made Shippou such a cutie too.

    I always look forward to the next chapter.

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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  • From ANON - snowfall on March 17, 2005
    I have already given you a technical review. It's all childishness from here on our. Poor Inu and Kags. Wow, the mural. Who would've thought. You're good. WooHoo. Sess and Kagura. What's the witch up to? Hope she isn't setting up Sess unless it's to kill Naraku. Still love the numbers. Finally, the wind tunnel. I wasn't sure if you were going to use that. Aaawww. Miroku is so worried about his sister. I hope Akago bites the dust. Rin is so cute. I hope she has a bigger part to play. What is old six arms up to? Or was it eight? Wonderful chappie. Keep the numbers coming.

    Snowfall
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  • From ANON - wlfhund on March 17, 2005
    I have been following this for quite some time. this is the first time i have reviewed. sorry for that.
    But, I just have to say... I LOVE THIS CHAPPIE. I have really enjoyed the story. but, the moving mural
    and the dream scene for yasha were great, the realization that the mural moved in reality was fabulous.
    Knowing who Kagura's contact is, is even better! Really Great Chappie!
    Wlfhund
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  • From ANON - BrethlessM on March 17, 2005
    Woo-hoo! Happily waiting for citrus! I'm very excited about the interweavings of the manga plot within your story. Hope to read more soon!

    Kimberlee
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  • From ANON - ish on March 17, 2005
    aww, a tiff between inuyasha and kagome. not what i was expecting for them. but oh well, the plot thickens!!
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  • From ANON - aleaha on March 14, 2005
    524662 524662 524662...you know I never really noticed until this chapter that, that number was repeated inbetween prospective changes...now I'm dieing to know what the hell 524662 means...I don't think I've ever read anything like this...compleatly unique I'll be standing in line until the next chapter...*preys muse dosn't leave you*








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  • From ANON - ish on March 14, 2005
    I forgot to mention how much i liked the chapter, and i realized i typed the code wrong! but then again, in the last three lines of the chapter, so did you! but we all know that its 524663. :) I hope I didn't inadvertently reveal something or your next chapter. if I did, I'm really sorry!!
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  • From ANON - ish on March 14, 2005
    524662 stands for KAGOME when you use a telephone keypad!!! do i get a prize?! say, maybe an update?!
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  • From ANON - snowfall on March 14, 2005
    Absolutely wonderful. The plot is coming together nicely, the characters pairing up with nice timing. The insertions with the numbers adds anticipation. Well done! Oh, how do you come up with Miroku's lines. They are absolutely wonderful. And, the comment Sess made thanking Naraku for not letting Kagura wear pants made me laugh my ass off! It just keeps getting better. The dream and kiss between Kag and Inu was so sweet. I like the fact that I cannot figure out what the deal is with the old Miko and twins. It's not easy to write a story that doesn't give itself away. Great job. A truly excellent chapter.

    Snowfall
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  • From ANON - BrethlessM on March 11, 2005
    Yeah! More! I've never been a fan of AU until I started reading yours. Now I'm searching for the good ones. It's not easy! I've got one in mind to write after I finish my current story. Can't wait to see what's next! I'm so glad Kagura didn't die! I know I'm not the first to review, but I'm asking a question anyway. ;) Are the twins linked in the anime? I mean, are they two unrelated characters or two characters we are used to seeing together?

    Kimberlee
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  • From ANON - aleaha on March 10, 2005
    lets prey that writers block is on an extended vacation...this was a great chapter...its nice that Kagura lives at least in the storys *takes a moment for the dearly departed* I really love the Sesshomaru Kagura pairing

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  • From AngelEvie on March 10, 2005
    I just wanted to let you know that a part of chapter ten is missing. But other then that, I love it!
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  • From ANON - Ikiwi on March 10, 2005
    Wow! another great chapter! and you updated so fast! thanks so much! have i mentioned before that i absolutely love this story? i just thought i would make that completely clear, in case u didn't pick up on it before. well, thanks for the chapter! keep it up and update soon!
    -ikiwi
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  • From ANON - snowfall on March 10, 2005
    I couldn't help myself. I read the story straight through. Compliment one. Two, I like your writing style. I laughed in several places. The dog making a pig out of himself. LOL. You are so witty. Three, you have angst without it being too sad. Four, the nightmare scenes are sprung on us suddenly and a great addition giving the story great body. Five, your style is fun. Six, action, action, action...ah... Seven, oh the intrigue! Eight, the characters are so in character. Excellent job. Nine, awesome plot. Oh, yeah. Your characters have a lot of depth. That was ten. Eleven, I love how you chop it up weaving a treacherous trail for us to follow. Twelve, very colorful and descriptive writing. Thirteen, original pairings. If I told you every detail that I enjoyed, I would have to repeat nearly the entire story commenting on everything.

    I'm sure I will think of more later. I love every bit of it. You do need some editing done, but it is worth overlooking to read such a great story. I will ask no questions as I love surprises. I hate knowing what is going to happen next. Keep your mysteries. I hope you update regularly. I anxiously await your next chapter.


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