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Reviews for Beautiful Miscommunications

By : nena
  • From ANON - Midnight_Sparrow on December 05, 2004
    Just started reading this...but AFFN has corrupted some of it, making it a bit confusing. Still, liking it so far.
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  • From ANON - Nadene on November 18, 2004
    Um... I think some of your story was deleted or something.... Like this paragraph :

    Kagome nervously took a sip of her lemonade, trying to hide the tears that were threatening to fall. The hospital… “When I woke up, I was really disoriented. Then I heard someone say he-he was Souta…I thought I was dead and he had come to help me cross over.” A tear escaped her eyes. “When I saw the man talking was not a little boy, I realized something was w. “I could have gotten her to confide in me…I know she wants to tell someone… to ask for help, but she doesn’t know who she can trust.”


    Is there something missing from it?? And the two chapters before it... seemed to end quickly... the second one where Sesshoumaru stated that Sango gets paid more then myouga and then said her name. Is that the real ending to the chapter or is my computer not loading it all the way up. Im not complaning about it... I just noticed that your other chapters are longer then the first two and I wondered if my pc wasnt loading them up.
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  • From ANON - Skoo on November 04, 2004
    Hoorah! Great story! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - YoukaiFate on November 04, 2004
    This story is hilarious and engaging. I love the intereactions between the characters, and the little details make it a great read. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Jake on November 02, 2004
    hey great i cant wait till u update next. i wish it didnt have to be tw weeks though. lol. but i can wait that long i guess. lol
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  • From ANON - Lady Sethia on November 02, 2004
    You definately have me hooked that's for sure! Very very nice read I must say. It's hard to find good stories like yothatthat actually have plot and aren't mindless bits of porn (not that I mind that sometimes but damn I want to entertain my brain too lol). I love how you bring the characters to life within the minds eye. The story constantly has me askin "who's is on who's side" and "what in the hell is going on", not to mention I've spent the last two hours (I'm a slow reader lol) on the edge of my chair as I read. Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent and I will be watching in two weeks for your next chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Till then ....


    Lady Sethia
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  • From ANON - Manda - Devoted Fan on November 02, 2004
    Great chapter, as always. I feel so bad for Miroku after reading this, you showed how he really does have a deeper side to him. I'm a little confused though - did his first love die because of those terrorist who want to kill him, or is it some conncetion with his cursed hand it' it's the former, then why didn't they just kill him instead? I agree, where ARE all the nice (straight) guys?? They have to exist, righ??? Sometimes it feels like all the decent guys are dating each other, doesn't it? Which leaves us girls with....well...let's not go into what kind of guys we're left with, hm?
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  • From ANON - Mandy on October 28, 2004
    I always enjoy reading your fics, and I love that you actually update them (and quickly!) It drives me insane when someone starts to write a great fic, stops writing for a such a long time,t yot you forget all about it! (let that be a lesson to you authors out there that like to take your time! Readers will forget about you!) Ok, now I'm off my soap box. Yeah, great story, great writing. I love that you actually have a plot and devolped characters, so that they seem like real people (or youkai or hanyou). By the way, who or what is Hououza?
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  • From ANON - Jake on October 28, 2004
    hey great. but why would u kill kagome. and if u do than breing her back to life. she need to be in the story for it to play out. at least right now. in my opin9ionshe is an important charecter in this. i would prefere if u dont kill her but do what u want i guess. update soon.
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  • From ANON - Hello Betty on October 27, 2004
    i vote for Kagome to come back to life.
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  • From ANON - Hello Betty on October 27, 2004
    i vote for Kagome to come back to life.
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  • From ANON - Hello Betty on October 27, 2004
    i vote for Kagome to come back to life.
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  • From ANON - Kiwichan on October 27, 2004
    In chapter 8, when i was reading the part about the park, all that went through my head was......"They paved paradise, and put up a parking lot" he he anyway, excellent story, keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - OBSESSED FAN!!! on October 22, 2004
    NO!!! You can't kill Kagome!!! newayz, I was wondering if you could answer me a few questions.

    1. Is kagome really an assasin? I get the feeling that she is.

    2. Will Inuyasha become part of the mob, too?


    um... I guess that's it. Love the story, and don't hesitate to e-mail me the answers to my questions... or not. You cant' just say, "Ah ah ah you didn't say the magic word!" and the tell me to wait, just like everyone else. Great Story and Keep up the Great Work!!!

    *starts chanting update update update*
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  • From ANON - Annetta on October 21, 2004
    Great story! I really love it! Keep up the great work! Update soon!!!!! *hugs*
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