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Reviews for Beautiful Miscommunications

By : nena
  • From ANON - lemjo on October 11, 2004
    I am really enjoying this...especially the elevator scene in ch. 1. You're right, that is definately worth writing a story around! I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Nick F. on October 09, 2004
    Yay, another story by nena!!

    I like the beginning though you sd ged get a beta reader. Just small stuff, like "reported" instead of "reporter" (your summary and along the story) and "violate eyes" which I think you would mean "violet," yeah?

    Why did Kagome take the gun?

    Keep up the good work and more soon, please :)!
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