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Reviews for Beautiful Miscommunications

By : nena
  • From loretta537 on March 11, 2008
    hi again! well in just over 24 hours i have read all of your stories and I love all of them. This was a great story and you make all of the stories very believable. I hope you write more stories like these soon.
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  • From ANON - The Empress on August 13, 2007
    LOVED IT.! I so thought that boy and girl was kags and miro but hten I thought, naw, it couldn't be. They are too nice and holy. You kept me guessing at the plot twists. Great on ya. You never lost track because of the many turns and loops. I swear if this was a rollercoster I would have heaved by now...lol But I LOVED the story. Congrats. You definatedly developed your characters well. *Throws brownies at author and betas* Free brownies for all!!
    Empress
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  • From ANON - Kags on October 20, 2006
    hey just to say theres a prob with chapter 10:( like theres a missing scene or sumthing ie--> *-*-*-*-*

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    im gonna read on cause i cant stop but i hate to miss out so like hopefully u'll add whatever was missing
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on October 04, 2006
    Just wanted to let you know that this is one of those fics that I have read more than once and will probably read again...like right now. ^_^

    Snow
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on August 26, 2006
    Ach! I missed two chapters! *gasps* You scared me there for a minute, pretending to be ending the story. Bad author, bad author! Great battle scene. Adding Kagome's father to the mix was great. The end of the chapter is quite baffling. Heheh...the mile high club. I like how you have stuck close to the original series concerning all of the characters. It annoys some people, but I truly enjoy it. Is Kagura going to be alright? Please say that she will. That whole thing with her and Sesshoumaru is just so romantic. If you kill her off, I'll be really upset. *pouts* Overall, this has been a great fic. I love mystery, intrigue and action. And on top of all that, the wonderful lemons. I can't wait to see how you end it. On a side note, Kagura and Sesshoumaru's sex life is something to envy. Whew! Turn on the A/C!

    Snow
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  • From ANON - rita on June 03, 2006
    YOU MUST UPDATE!!!! ive patiently waiting for a year and still no update. .........
    ...... i know your really busy or must be having writers block but it just makes me feel better to demand an update.
    and if that sentence made no sense at all..dont worry, im in the same boat.
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  • From ANON - Ikiwi on January 23, 2006
    Woo hoo! Another amazing chapter. Keep it up; the story just keeps getting better and better. I'm in love with it.. try to update again ASAP too, but no pressure of course!
    - Ikiwi, eagerly anticipating the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - TricksterGoddess on October 27, 2005
    That was an awesome chapter^^ Let me guess, the Shikon no Tama is inside of Kagome... Please update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!
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  • From fallenangel7583 on October 26, 2005
    by the gods...i think i got it!!! 524663....it's a locker combo! am i right, am i right? ::lmao:: i jus sat down to check my messages before going to work and i glimpsed at the scratch pad i had written all of the attempts to figure this out on and read the numbers in sets. then it dawned on me. it's my best guess...can't wait for you to update!
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on October 25, 2005
    OMG! I was just reading back through your fic and if the problems with it were caused by the site's database, the technicians need to know about it immediately. This is a serious problem and could be an indicator. Please, visit the problems group. I'll make sure it gets the attention it needs. Also, if you are considering reposting, you can insure that the errors do not recur by adding 'pre' incased in the greater than and less than signs at the very top of the page. Do the same at the bottom, only put a slash before the 'pre'. Use the copy and paste option to load the chapters. Please, if the mess was caused by the database, it is imperative that you inform the administrators.

    Snowfall
    Moderator
    AFF Problems Group
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  • From ANON - anonymous on October 25, 2005
    524663 translates to kagome, doesnt it? from on a phone. anyway i love your story, the detail, your potrayal of the charaters. awesome.
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  • From ANON - fallenangel7583 on October 24, 2005
    so i've sat here for the last twenty minutes trying to figure out just what the hell 524663 means. i've tried adding the numbers togetehr, i've tried mixing the letters coordinated with teh numbers into other prominant words of the fiction and i'm stumped. you got me. so you have me hanging patiently waiting to see just what's going on. can't wait to read more!! ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on October 24, 2005
    WooHoo! *snoopy dance* You updated! Yay! Oh my, Sess and Kagura. What a perfect place for a lemon. Snot, you left it out. I'm so happy that Kagura has her heart back. Now if we can keep Naraku from killing her some other way. Man, those two are missing out on all the outside action. Course, there's plenty going on inside, ne? I just loved how you involved the mural. It is so creepy. *shivers* Inuyasha was such an idiot. Let's hope he makes up for it. Hihi. Sango sure does have a violent streak, and I like it. And Miroku has one to match when it comes to his sister. Kaede sure is smart. It's nice to see them all on the same team. Nice twist that the whole accident event was a set up to get Kagome captured. Let's let her suffering draw out Inu's demonic blood. That would be too awesome.

    Once again, great chapter! If you ever need any plot bunnies, I'm your girl.

    Anxiously awaiting your next update.

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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  • From fallenangel7583 on September 20, 2005
    i'm not sure if i have yet to leave a review for the story. with the slim time i've had over this past week, i have been hopelessly addicted to reading this story. it's amazing, to state the obvious. the characters you have developed are wonderful and their personalities are believable. this is one story that i can see going many places; i am happy that it won reconition through the guild, congrats! you know, and i'm not sure if you should take this as an overrun college students dillusions (or lack there of sleep) but when you had kagome report to check the website for names of children hurt, i nearly did. (and i'm honestly not sure why). persusavie writing, i'll give it that. i have been dealing with the thought of Sango being killed and now that it has happened (or has it?) i'm near tears. a girl good at her job faces death because of it? oh, the injust way of life. ::sigh:: and kagome...tragic hero? maybe. she didn't acheive greatness though and nor did she work her way up to acheive nirvana (i really forget the real term for it, but basically to the highest she could be. had she of, she would have not been an agent). but she can, however, be a victim of the system. i think though her death would subtract from the plot and the defeat of Naraku. as so elequentiy stated (and i loved it), sesshoumaru is to busy between kagura's legs to get to naraku in time (though i have learned to trust the fluff) and inuyasha...well...it's inuyasha. not to mention, miroku's gonna die if he really killed sango by either inu or sesshiles hand. man, the drama circles only elongate in life, ne? GREAT story, keep it up!!!!
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  • From fallenangel7583 on September 14, 2005
    so this story is amazing. simply amazing. i kept seeing it sneaking up with more chapters but never got the time to actually read it. so i'm on chapter 7 and i just got to say your writing style is superb. the personifications, smilies and metaphores are amazing and the character developments is stunning. you have such great humor behind miroku and sango that i think it more well written then the series. i laughed, nearly cried even, when miroku ended in the car with sango and twisted her words to manipulate his way with her. amazing. you are most definitly a wonderful writer with a strong career ahead of you. keep it up!
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