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  • From ANON - jen on December 06, 2004
    Hey I just got off of work and i'm alittle behind with reading stories and writing mine and i saw that you updated so i checked it out and i loved it very much!!! Very much so and i can't wait to read more!! Going to bed i'm beat. Later!!! And don't forget post more soon!!
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  • From sakepolitan on December 05, 2004
    I have to agree with RaptorChicky on that one. Pleeeeease have kagome discover inuyasha's identities by something other than a kiss. Too batman forever AND spiderman. I love your story and update soon!

    ps i added u to my reccommended reading list!
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  • From ANON - RaptorChicky on December 04, 2004
    -squeals like a stupid school girl at the site of an update-
    God damn alarm clock!! I'm honestly surprised Kagome didn't kill that blasted device (god knows, I've destroyed a few of mine...).
    Hmmmm...and what exactly are those 2 trouble makers (Inuyasha and Miroku) going to up to later in the evening?? Oh, and I like it that you have Miroku 'on the inside'--rather helpful for The Hanyou, ne? And one more thing before I forget--PLEASE don't let Kagome find out that Inuyasha and her silver-haired obsession are one and the same through a kiss! I found it rather lame when Schumacher pulled that junk in "Batman Forever"--I KNOW you're more creative than him!
    -insert cliched demand for more here-
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  • From ANON - catt on December 04, 2004
    OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO PLEASE WRITE MORE ME LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Zelix on December 04, 2004
    Hehhehe... good one, 'If he kisses all the damsels he saves, i'll castrate him' that's a good one... the plot keeps thickening huh? I'm impressed and it will be extremely interesting how the character relationships will go, keep it up and update soon.

    Oh yes, i read that review you gave me, thanks for that one, i also have two other fics you might just find interesting:

    1. Loneliness of the Free Wind, which is a one-shot but VERY long one at that, in this fic we will follow the life of Kagura after Naraku is dead, will she really be free or will she never escape his influence? We will also meet my OC who is a total masterpiece, he really is.
    2. Time Soul Exodus, the sequel to Loneliness of the Free Wind, takes place 1 year after the previous storys events... let's just say that fate is never a simple thing, especially when the well, Youkai and magic are involved, an excellent fic with a intense, deep plot.

    Hope you read and review those as well, if you're interested that is.

    - Zelix, see ya again!
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  • From ANON - drake220 on November 18, 2004
    darlin' that was a fabulous kiss! loved every minute of it! i see a total superman/lois lane/ clark kent triangle thing happening here and so i'm going to warn you- PLEASE let Kagome figure it out!! it was always one of my biggest complaints with the Superman franchise that he works with reporters-people who find this sort of stuff out for a living- but because he wears glasses, noone recongnizes him! It was so_friggin'_stupid!! kagome's a detective- give her some clues so that she-unlike lois lane- will not be some idiot woman pining away for someone who is RIGHT THERE. and Kaogme and inu should kiss again, this time as inu. i mean, kissing a hero is cool but nothing beats frenching with the sexiest of them all, inu as himself. yummy yummy. oh adn i ADORED that description of inu-chan in his boxers...makes a girl want to go to a bar, drink to much adn use her imagination.....that sounded weird but i'm too hyped up to change it. update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Hello Betty on November 10, 2004
    Let me guess.....Bad tempered captain=Sango ( so is there gonna be some Sango/Miruko? My, I'd love to see how hard he gehit hit since the lady plays such a strong position.)
    ...partner=Our lovely Kagome. Is there gonna be a love triangle ofInu/Kag/Kou? * Rubs hands together and grinning evilly* I simply adore those kinds of fight scenes.
    But your the author, you do what you think best, I trust you.
    Is there gonna be Shippou? Not a demand, just asking.
    Oh, and that kiss was posatively BRILLIANT!!! Absolutely melting how Inuyasha asked for a 'fee' from our leading lady!!
    Please Please put up more chapters soon!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jen on November 10, 2004
    Yes, Yes That was a good kiss. I wanted to know and i wasn't disappointed. I love it!!!! And i can't wait to read more. More More More
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  • From sakepolitan on November 10, 2004
    You have a new fan! I absolutely love this story. I must admitt though, I was a little tentative to read it just by looking at the summary, but i figured everyone's suck and I might as well give it a try - boy am I glad that I did! I really enjoy the comic book aspect of your story its very interesting to see how you incorporate all that into the world of Inuyasha. Keep up the good work!
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  • From Zelix on November 09, 2004
    I've officially fallen in love with this story... i really have, the plot, characters, humour and everything in between is simply superb... hey, this is just a suggestion but do you want to compare plots? I have two stories out of so many of my others that have a VERY complex plot in it, if you're EVER interested, here's what they're names are:

    1. Silver Winds of Passion
    2. Dark Soul of the Future, White Heart of the Past (Don't let the name fool you, it's good.)

    Well, see ya and thanks again for this wonderful fic and i hope you'll update soon!

    - Zelix
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  • From ANON - RaptorChicky on November 09, 2004
    Dare I say that this story gets better with each chapter? Yes! I dare, I dare! I thouroughly enjoyed that little encounter between Kagome and her dashing hero and I really enjoyed the banter between Kouga and Inuyasha--definitely want to see more of both. I am split on how Kagome's character is being handled, though: part of me enjoys that she's on the Hanyou's side (yeah, there's gonna be little debates between her and her partner--wonder who he's gonna be???), but another part was wishing that there'd be more...tension between them, that she wouldn't be on his side, but then again, wouldn't really be against him. It would make the "courtship" between the 2 just that much more interesting. But, its your story, and its prolly was too late to make changes.
    And now, I'm going back to read Chapter 3 again...heeheehee....
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  • From ANON - Jake on November 08, 2004
    i enjopyed the chpater. it is great. and i know who kogas partner is. but damn i hate him. lol. kill him off in theis story please.i want to see him dead in one story at least. lol. please update soon.
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  • From ANON - RaptorChicky on November 01, 2004
    No, no, no, no! You better not be planning on being a bastard and letting me hang from this oh-so-delightful cliffie you have created! This chapter was great!! Believe me, I was bouncing around in my chair in a display of joy when I saw that you had updated this interesting story! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Jen on November 01, 2004
    Hi, Like before i like it, and to me it just keeps getting better. Who getiing Kissed!!!!!!!!!!?????? I want to know you better tell me *glaring and shaking fist*. Haha just kidding, i won't yot you. But please post more soon. I can't wait to read it
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  • From ANON - Hello Betty on November 01, 2004
    *Raises eyebrows* My, they're quite strongly attracted to each other on a first meeting.( But that certainly is a good thing)
    How can you end it like that and tell me theres a kiss in the next chapter???!!! I wanna see it now!!!!
    Anyway, did you purposely switch things around by making the human Inuyasha dislike the demon part? Cos its usually the other way round.
    Yes, I certainly enjoyed their meeting especially with the electrifying atmosphere. Looking forward to more action next chapter!!!
    PLease Please PLleas and PLease place more chapters on!!!!!!
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