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Reviews for The Hanyou

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  • From ANON - Jake on October 31, 2004
    its awsome im glad its not your useuall story line. and not your useuall superhero story past thing. i like it alot. its awsome. plz update soon. thanx.
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  • From ANON - RaptorChicky on October 16, 2004
    Yes, I did enjoy this chapter, and I didn't find it boring at all--its called "character developement" and is a very good factor in good stories, so keep that stuff up! Let's see...what else...? Ah, yes, you pretty much passed the biology exam (I have Bachelor's in Biology, so I tend to be a little picky on this kinda thing...), especially the mitosis junk, well as much as I can remember anyway... :D And why the hell can't I ever wake up to find that (Inuyasha) in my bed?!?? That would QUICKLY turn me into a morning person!
    One bit of advice though: I caught a few spelling errors, and some possible missing words, so I suggest you get your hands on a beta reader (hell, I'LL do it if you can't find anybody), or go through your works with a fine-tooth comb before submitting any updates. A story could be Pulitzer worthy, but if it has too many errors, its pretty much flushable.
    May the muses bless you!
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  • From ANON - Jake on October 15, 2004
    hey great i love this. a superhero story kool. update soon please.
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  • From ANON - blackshadowfox on October 15, 2004
    i must say these 2 chapters have intrested me so much, i ask that you continue this awesome story.
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  • From ANON - Jen on October 15, 2004
    No no it's not boring at all. I love it . Please write more s!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Very soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Hello Betty on October 15, 2004
    This is great, you certainly update faster than most people! (So is it really gonna be daily!!??)
    I'm being honest here, the chapter was NOT boring,founfound it facinating how you went into all that biological decription of Inu's transformation. God, I almost died reading through his 26 year old phyisque.
    Yipppeeee!! Kagome is in the next chapter!!!!
    By the way, is Kikyo the one who broke his heart??? (Sorry to say, but I don't like her at all)
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  • From ANON - Wrath on October 14, 2004
    Not a bad start. Keep with it ^_^
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  • From ANON - magiclover56 on October 14, 2004
    Hey this is an awsome beginning. I don't think I've read a story yet where Inuyasha wasn't naturally a Hanyou. Keep going with my full support. Oh, and I've aslo been following your other story for some time now. That one's great as well and I hope you finish it sometime soon.
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  • From RaptorChicky on October 14, 2004
    Kewl... Definitely caught the Batman and Spiderman influence in that 1st chap. I was wondering when somebody would take the "superhero" route with the Inuyasha characters and I'm glad you did! I hope I'll be seeing new chapters to this interesting story sometime in the recent future!
    Makes women swoon at the sight of him, huh? So, is Inuyasha going to be giving Nightwing a run for the "Mister Damn Fine" award? (I'm not kidding--this really exists)
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  • From ANON - Hello Betty on October 14, 2004
    WOWWWEEE!!!
    That was brilliant. The idea of comic book heros living two lives.
    PLEASE PLEASE update soooooon!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - catt on October 14, 2004
    OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!U ROCK!!!!!Ooooooooooooooooo update sooon hurry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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