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Reviews for Fugue

By : Resmiranda
  • From ANON - flowers on July 01, 2005
    I read this story on media miner when you posted a link a few weeks ago. I have to say, you've left me shivering and stunned. Having written a modern era fic myself I thought I would check this out, I guess to compare. No comparison. This was haunting, captivating, with just the right amount of backstory to balance the newfound relationship. You were so IC it makes my teeth hurt. You have achieved what I strive for. You are the buddah to my zen of IC. I have learned from you and I respect that greatly. Your fic has been the first I've read in over a year, feeling very tired of fanfiction altogether. Inspired by you I am writing again. Thank you, thank you. You are a great writer and I hope to see more from you. I also hope to see more of you around mediaminer forums. I love speak with people I can learn from. Shit, you should write a fic about HOW to write a fic. I could go on forever but I will leave you, hopefully, to your writing.
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on June 26, 2005
    It occured to me that you show us what the past truly is and the damage it can do to our lives if we dwell on it too frequently. You show us what living in the past is and how it can hurt our ability to live in the future. Who are you to have so much wisdom/insight. How old are you? So intelligent and able to express so eloquently what some of us realize in some small part of our brain, but are unable to bring into view in such a way that it can be truly meaningful. You truly amaze me.

    Snowfall
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on June 25, 2005
    This is a truly excellent story. The writing style flows. You give us pictures, not just words. Such sadness and angst. Even under the happier moments, there is a visible current of loneliness almost to the point of despair. You took the time to allow us to get to know the characters. I like how you gave Sesshoumaru insight into Kagome's needs. I guess the answer that Sesshoumaru had given Kagome at the end of the story was that he had been courting her. Am I correct? The lemons were absolutely wonderful, not mechanical or completely emotional. There was an intensity of desire. It was very fulfilling. The small touches and glances were enthralling. Sesshoumaru seemed to know what would seduce Kagome and to have taken measured and calculated steps to do so. I read the story more than once and most likely will do so again. So, he fell in love with her on the side of a mountain. That tugged my heart strings. His casual voicing of deep truths that many of us do not even consider was very interesting as was his character.

    Kagome's character was sad indeed. She tends to have problems with keeping her hope alive. Of course, her experiences didn't helped very much. It was refreshing that you didn't make her a virgin and you didn't make an allowance for her to live as long as Sesshoumaru. It was heartening at the end that she had finally taken the reigns of her own heart or at least had determined to do so and that Sess revealed that he loved her.

    It was a lovely fic that I'm sure I will enjoy time and time again.

    Snowfall
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  • From ANON - SHADOW. on June 22, 2005
    I GIGLED, I CRYED...I EVEN FELT UNBRIDLED SPRIT JOY...I TRULY LOVED THIS BEAUTYFULL STORY....I TOTALY LOVE YOUR WRITING STYLE, AND I HOPE THAT YOU WILL ONLY KEEP UP WITH THE GOOD WORK....I TRULY HOPE THAT YOU'LL WRITE MORE FIC IN THE FUTURE, SO KEEP WRITING O.K.
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  • From ANON - starredeffect on June 14, 2005
    Six-thirty in the morning and I've been reading your stories for hours and hours. A simple story has never moved me this much. I don't know what of the pain, the love, or the utter torment had by these two people (not characters: you gave them life) moved me the most, but your words have definitely left an impression.
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  • From ANON - Kjinuyasha on June 13, 2005
    That was an excellent story. I reall enjoyed it. Sequal!!! Will he leave and come back or will he leave. You left me wanting more. What will happen next. Will he claim her. Tell her he loves her. Will she die and will he be left lonely for the rest of eternity?


    I really did like it.
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  • From ANON - karlina on June 01, 2005
    wow...no other words for it.
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  • From on May 29, 2005
    so beautiful. im addicted ^-^
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  • From ANON - Mys C on May 11, 2005
    I hate you...U made me cry...I love you...U made me cry...Ur story rocks on too many levels to explain...This was well written and soo emotional...Damn You..My nose is stuffed n my eyes r puffy...I blame you...Damn It!!! I love this...WHY!? Why do u have to make me cry...This rocks my socks...I love how she pinned him to the tree...Why does Sesshoumaru keep living, even with a youkai mate? So he lives forever...Mahn, I hate that thought that Sesshoumaru would have to go on alone without Kagome, probably empty...This is too good to end though...It ended with a bang...Keep it up...I want to read more stories from you, ur extremely talented at making people cry...With the first two chapters, i was just sad and my heart felt like it was being poked...But nothing made me cry harder than the last chapter...Damn You...My eyes hurt...I love you...Keep it up...
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  • From ANON - Weyrd Kat on May 05, 2005
    Resmiranda,

    Hi. This is the first time I review your story, and I must say, there is not much I could write here that would capture the feeling you capture in your piece. I was forwarded to your story by an Inuyasha list member, namely, Numisma. I'm not much for pairings outside of the canon, but the emotion and sometimes lack of makes Sesshoumaru seem real, as if he is waking to himself for the first time. Kagome is confident and uncertain all in the same breath and it comes out beautifully. Everything seems so natural as it happens, that I found myself cursing sleep because I wanted to finish just one more line, one more paragraph. i applaud your skill with the English language, something most people struggle with and I look forward to reading another piece, time permitting.

    Ashli/Heather/Weyrd Kat
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  • From SirenicSprite on April 29, 2005
    This is honestly one of the best sess/kag stories I have ever read. Actually I first read this on A Single Spark. I have a short attention span, so I usually read very long fics in sections. But, yours I read in one sitting. A relationship between the two of them is very far fetched. Many authors try to create a story around them coming together, and fail miserably. But, reading your fic, you can actually see this happening. Awesome!
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  • From ANON - lil_penguin on April 22, 2005
    That was a very well-written story. It put me through the wringer, the way it pulled emotions from me. Great job with this. -Amanda
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  • From ANON - dun-kin-nut on April 21, 2005
    Awww, that was a touching ending.
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  • From ANON - Nicolle on April 02, 2005
    Amazing. It's real, and beautiful, and painful, and everything that a kagome/sesshomaru fic should be. I hate Sess/Kag when Kagome just decides that Sesshomaru is better and dumps Inuyasha on his ass. Because that wouldn't happen. This would happen. Kagome still loves Inuyasha with everything that she is, 10 years later, and is still living in the past. It's so realistic. And Sesshomaru is in character every moment. I loved it, and I love your writing. Thank you so much for writing this. You are truly gifted.
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  • From ANON - Lauren on March 16, 2005
    That was so sad.......It took forever to read and I cried........This happens to be the first review I have done on this site and that is because I cried just now.... I mean...it was just so........
    Anyway I think you did it brilliantly and You had me hooked at least. It was soo sad
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