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Reviews for Pain of her Heart

By : inuyashagemini
  • From inuyashagemini on August 20, 2008
    hmmmm
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on January 18, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on December 06, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on September 09, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 24, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 02, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on January 20, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From inuyashagemini on January 18, 2007
    oh my what am i'm going to do with this mess
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on December 28, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
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  • From ANON - Mellissa on February 04, 2006
    It seems you are working on it a little at a time because the first chapter is a HELL of a lot better then the last. A couple of words were spelt so incorrectly I couldn't figure them out from context. Good start so far and maybe you should erase some of the negative comments others left that no longer apply (you've gotten rid of a lot of the crap they were complaining about). Good start so far.

    By the way, it's driving me insane: charter = CHARACTER (in your disclaimer)
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  • From ANON - tk on September 13, 2005
    off the chain
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  • From ANON - blue phi on June 17, 2005
    hey baby gurl you are doing good so far when will put the next chapter up come don't keep me waiting!!!!

    i know that not my email i just think of you and all the sexy thing you do
    for all you other people check out http://members.blackplanet.com/blue_fire_2004 or http://members.blackplanet.com/blue_luv1920-14 and see the skill my baby have.
    get it bitch
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  • From ANON - kado on November 20, 2004
    gurl whatis going on where the rest of your story. i like it very much keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Jen on October 24, 2004
    Hey!!! I read the part that you changed and as always i love it. I thinl it's very well wriiten. *gives a rose to the author* I can't wait to read more
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  • From ANON - ANON on October 23, 2004
    You use way too many author's comments- it is very distracting and takes away from your story. You should also work on longer chapters- without the author's notes you only have 1/2 a page of story.
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