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By : Vyncent
  • From ANON - RED HAT on November 02, 2004
    SHIT!! How could U leave us hanging like this!!! WORRRRRY!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sonya on November 02, 2004
    This story is great. I hope to read more. Keep up the awesome work. =)
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  • From ANON - wyldwolfrose on November 01, 2004
    THE ONLY THING I CAN SAY IS "HOLY SHIT!!!" YOU HAVE REALLY PUT TOGETHER A MOST CAPTIVATING STORY!!! I SOOOOO LOVE IT AND HOPE THAT YOU CONTINUE!!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - RED WOMAN on October 30, 2004
    GREAT Story!!!!! Where is Sesshoumaru's castle???? I mean he is a Lord, why has he not taken Kagome to the castle? Im sure the others will go with them!!
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  • From ANON - Nefra on October 30, 2004
    Another masterpiece wen fen for all to see. This is by far one of the very best stories I have ever read. Oh, I loved it when Kikyou got caught, getting her just desserts. Talk about psychological warfare, or attempted at least anyway. What in the hell did she think she was going to get away with? Did she believe that me wme would suddenly try to kill herself or what? Personally I think she was petty enough to just sit back and enjoy Kagome's silent torment. This fic is definately showing a side of Kikyou that could very well exist. But I just want to know when Kagome is going to stop being so paranoid. Has it truly registered that she is mated to Sesshoumaru yet? Or that she is pregnant with his pup? I actually feel sorry for Inu because now he's seeing exactly what he had right in front of him. But hindsight is twenty-twenty. Looks like Kikyou isn't the only one who's gonna have to live with the choices they've made. Well, keep writing and update quickly.

    Ja ne!

    Nefra aka Jaxxia7
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  • From ANON - snowfall on October 30, 2004
    Glad you updated. I'm enjoying this very much and look forward to the next chapters.pe Kpe Kikyou's words did not hurt Kag.
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  • From FieldsofHeather on October 28, 2004
    LMAO at Jaken getting tossed around like a football!!! Although I was hopeing he'd end up in the lake, but then he might have drowned and Sango wouldn't hava had fun scareing him like that.

    *wipes drool off her chin*

    Update soon please!!!!! :D
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  • From ANON - Nefra on October 28, 2004
    Jaken is such a pathetic idiot! I am so happy that you're updating as quickly as you are, and with such detailed chapters too. I guess Inu Yasha is finally getting his just desserts by realizing how badly he actually treated Kagome. I guess he just had selective sight. And the way you've portrayed Kikyou in this is absolutely stunning. The scene with her drooling over a nude Sesshoumaru was priceless. I laughed so hard. Sango going ape on, not only Kikyou but Jaken too was a well placed move. It's something she probably secretly wants to do to Inu Yasha every time he hurts Kagome. Poor Miroku, trying to take everything in stride but just can't help his lecherous ways. I guess some habits will be a little too hard to break. What I'm realookiooking forward to seeing though, is Midoriko's words to come to pass concerning Kikyou's fate. Kikyou is hoping to meet a wealthy or a rich man and marry h Sou Sounds like a few people I used to know but that's beside the point. I wouldn't be a bit surprised if she tried to make a move on Sesshoumaru, being the obvious idiot that she is. What's definately going to be the icing on the cake is seeing Kikyou's reputation preceeding her and making her plans of a normal life all for nothing. And her chances of killing Kagome are not even considered as far as I'm concerned. Regardless of how much Inu Yasha used to love her, I think now he'd kill her in an instant if she tried to even breath the same air as Kagome. This story has been beautifully written and I hope you keep updating as quickly as you have . I. I definately recommend this story to anyone and everyone. Want to see that update quickly.

    Ja ne!

    Nefra aka Jaxxia7
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  • From ANON - snowfall on October 28, 2004
    Thank you for updating so soon. I am enjoying this story very mund and am very interested in how Inuyasha is going to come out in all this after he learns that Kikyou shot him with an arrow.
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  • From FieldsofHeather on October 27, 2004
    Whoooo Hoooo!!! Go Sango!! Do us all a favor and kick Kikyou's butt to Hell and back!!!

    *finds some nicely rotten fruit and lobs it at Kikyou*

    Boooo!!!! Hissssss!!!!

    Keep going, I can't wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - Saphir Kitsune Youkai Girl on October 27, 2004
    I mostly read your story on the 'A Single Spark' site,
    but I don't really have any e-mail adress, so I'll just
    put my review on this one. I just LOVE your story, your
    writins style and vocabulary make me envious of your
    skills. I just love how you made Kikyo pay for her
    mistakes. Also, will you include Kouga in your story line?
    I can't wait to see how the others will react to the depress
    Kagome. Anyway, update as soon as you can!!!!
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  • From ANON - ejqHorseLady on October 27, 2004
    This is an amazing fanfic. It easily slipped into my favourites catogery. I'm glad you get so many chapters up at one time. I can't wait for your next update. May I make a suggestion? Have Kagome bow down before Inuyasha and ask for his forgiveness. Then he can truly see the damage he has done. I hope you update again soon. I'm going to leave this review at A single spark as well. I will be following the story there.
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  • From ANON - snofall on October 27, 2004
    Excellent story. You delve quite a bit into the ice king's psyche and Kagome finally reacts to all of Inuyasha's idiocy. Hope she doesn't make a stupid wish. Look forward to the next chapter. BTW, excellent grammar.
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  • From ANON - Saphir Kitsune Youkai Girl on October 25, 2004
    I'm surprised you haven't gotten more reviwes
    'cause your story is awesome. I absolutely love
    it! I can't wait for an update, soooooo do one
    as soon as you can! I'll be waiting! And of you
    don't get a review from me, it's only because
    I'm too lazy to do one...-_-;...
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on October 25, 2004
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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