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By : Vyncent
  • From ANON - candace peaches on December 21, 2015
    this was a wonderful story. it was well written and i loved reading it. i plan to look for more of your stories here and on doguka.com. i think that giving inuyasha a part in this story was a good idea. i was surprised that you paired him with sango. i hope you write more stories and i hope they continue to just as good as this one. c'ya'
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  • From lara5170 on October 19, 2014
    I really enjoy this story and read it every time I stumble upon it.
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  • From lara5170 on November 06, 2013
    I liked Kikyo's ending & I enjoyed the ending of the story. I would have liked the story to be longer because nobody wants a good story to end.
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  • From lara5170 on November 06, 2013
    This is a great story & I can't believe I've never read it before. I just finished reading the chapter where Kagome & Sessh had been mated for 10 years. It told of all the children that each couple had (Sessh/Kagome, Inu/Sango & Rin/Shippo) but I couldn't help noticing that Sessh & Kagome's pups were referred to as youkai (or inuyoukai), meaning full youkai(?), with the oldest son (10) having the ability to use both youkai & miko powers, and their twin daughters already showing the ability use miko powers. While it mentioned that Sessh/Kagome's pups were full youkai, it mentioned Inu/Sango's pups as hanyou (or were they 1/4 youkai,being a little less hanyou?). I was confused by the descriptions of Shippo/Rin's kits,it mentioned they all had kitsune powers but described the appearance's of each as being different, are they hanyou? Another thing I'm curious about is since Kagome & Rin mated full youkai & Sango mated a hanyou, does this mean that all three of them will age as slowly as their youkai/hanyou mates?
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  • From ClexFanGirl86 on May 22, 2009
    This was an amazing story . I cried and laughed felt pity on Kagome but it was amazing all the same . love how you made Sango and Inuyasha mates , but i feel for the monk , he had no one but he was happy , as for Ah-Un and Kilya brilliant too bad you dont know an artist would have loved seeing the kids as well . And i was wondering about your others stories i tried the link and it didnt work
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  • From savewolf on June 16, 2008
    hi i would like to say this *gets up and doea a full standing ovatin for this pic* loved it i normally dotn like rape but seen as kinky ho was the one raped well...*smiles and smirks like naraku and alucard from helsing when hes gone slightly insiane (the video i have of hellsing the animated series how he smiles showign hsi vampire fangs that kind of sadistic evil smirk yet a teasgn oen ) anyway if you get more ideas liek tis im me ok i would like to ask if we can be friends here and in yahoo you can see my email here oh also can you read in fanfiction.net the story called destined to be mates i wrote that oen its a pairing between sesshomaru and my own mad eup char * you guesse dhe rname savewolf ) hope you like i its rate dm i need advice wethe ror not shoudl i post t here in adult fanfiction maybe you can tell em though an email my email adress is normamourani@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - rowdygirl on December 05, 2006
    i've just finished this story. it was very good. i cried like a baby. i'm still sniffing. and the funny thing is i feel sorriest for Kikyo, she got what she asked for and worst yet, it was deserved. puffs and kleenex thank you too. this was darned close to a 'titanic' in the number of tissues i used.
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  • From ANON - madmiko on September 18, 2006
    I am simply in awe of your amazing ability and talent. I hope you continue to write and post -- I will always be a loyal fan.
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  • From ANON - Shaye on June 15, 2006
    I have to tell you I really enjoyed this story, it's hard to find good Inuyasha fanfics and I think you did a great job. I've also read
    The Poison Of Erised and must say you have a talent! I hope you continue writting Inuyasha fanfics... I'll be looking out for your stories in the furture. ^_^
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  • From Kourui on February 13, 2006
    OK THAT WAS ASOME LOL I can imagen the llook ON Mirokus face when he was talking to Kouga, awsome job on this chapyer I really loved it, hope the next is just as awsome, great job WOOT WOOT!!!!!


    Kourui
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  • From ANON - Kourui on February 13, 2006
    YEAH WOOT WOOT! ANOTHER AWSOME CHPATER! I can't get enough of this story awsome job I lovoe it so so soooo much keep it up!!!


    Kourui
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  • From ANON - Kourui on February 13, 2006
    Oh muct have been bad night for Inuayhsa and SHippou concidering there keen sence of hearing, *Shier* I don't know about them but sghoue wouldn't wan't to hear my brother doing that, lol anyway awsome job I loved this chapter, it took me to new hights awsome job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    Kourui
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  • From ANON - Kourui on February 13, 2006
    WOOT WOOT Awsome job wow Kikyo is finally gone...WOOT! YEAH WOO HOOO OH HAPPY DAYS! LOL Awsome job on this chapter loved, ^_^


    Kourui
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  • From ANON - Kourui on February 13, 2006
    Wow that was an awsome cgapter WOOT WOOT! Great job, wiow doesn't seem like Inuyasha Likes Kikyo that much anymore,...*Does happy dane* YES!


    Kourui
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  • From ANON - Kourui on February 12, 2006
    Ahhhhh awsome chapetr, wow make Jaken get chocked again please, lol anwya awsome job i loved this chapter it was awsome!!!!


    Kourui
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