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Reviews for Fragments of Broken Pride

By : Areitus
  • From ANON - ladykaa28 on May 10, 2004
    Ok now I can see the whole Kagome/Sess thing starting. Now just some for the Inu/Sess thing to start and it will be perfect.I can see thginnginning of it with the two of them.. Are you going to write a part in about how this will effect Rin? She is a part of Sess's life and with two new people so to speak coming into the relationship that they share this will effect her in some kind of way. Shippou will be in the same situation. The both of them have lost their family and look to the inu brothers as fathers and Kagome as a mother (well Shippou does). It was just some thing that occured to me when I was reading this. Oh I forgot I like this fic very much.
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  • From ANON - youkai_sesshoumaru on May 10, 2004
    thanks for all the positive reviews everyone ^-^ I shall continue to write more as soon as i think of something ^.^; eh-heh...
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  • From ANON - golden on May 09, 2004
    ooohhh!!!! I love this fic!!! It's so much fun to read and it is so dramatic!!!! Wee!!!!!!!! ^_^ You must wrmoremore!!! Yes more more more more more!!! Wee!!!! *spins around in her computer chair* WEE!!!!! Otays! Can't wait until ya update again! And I feel sorry for ya ;-; I've never hurt ma foot... So I really donno how you feel, but however it feels, I hope you feel better soon!!!! *huggles* Otays, I shaeaveeave ya alone now. Feel better soon!!!
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  • From ANON - hello there on May 09, 2004
    Ouch, broken feet suck. A good story, update soon, when your foot is better.
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  • From ANON - Someone Out There on May 09, 2004
    Loved your chapter (4). Maybe after you write the chapter, you might also save it under .hmtl It doesn't indent but it spaces paragraphs. I had trouble too in the beginning, but I use this and it works ok for me. Anyway... thought you brought everything nicely through with a goodw, ew, even the rape scene. Sometimes you don't plan on things in a story, but then sometimes as you're writing things lead into a different course than you expected. I do HOPE that the story remains as how prideful, mean Sesshoumaru (don't get me wrong, I love him too) continues to develope into more of the brother and 'friend' of the others. You are the author and the story is your idea of how you want it, but I just hope this doesn't turn out to be a 'betray the hanyou' Sess/Kag story. I like the idea of his broken pride being how his character gets changed -- kind of like your doing now and I love it! I like fic with Sess getting to be a 'decent' demon-person. Please keep up the nice work. I'll be checking in to read you later....
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  • From ANON - Kittie-Nova on May 09, 2004
    Great story so far! I can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work, and I hope you update again soon!
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  • From ANON - sutlesarcasm on May 08, 2004
    In answer to your AN, I do like it, I like it very much. It's not in the usual style, and yet doesn't seem to be OOC. I keep looking back his his story, and hoping for updates. If this were MediaMiner, I would add you to my favorite Author'st, st, and this story, in particular, to my favorite story's list. Please let me know when you update again.

    Thanx
    Sutlesarcasm
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  • From ANON - greaterbeast_xellas on May 04, 2004
    update soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - chaoticspecter on May 04, 2004
    this is a really good fic. i love what you have so far and am anxiously awaiting more.
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  • From ANON - The Dragon on May 04, 2004
    You mean, I didn't reply after reading 2nd chapter? *goes back to look* Holy crap, I didn't! Forgive us unworthy readers, for we are stupid and forgetful! ( ;) ) We love you, really, we do!... At least, _I_ do anyway... You're doing very well at portrating the characters personalities, kudos to you! :D
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  • From ANON - Someone Out There on May 03, 2004
    Hey, just had to write another review for you. Can't get this story out of my head. I love Sesshoumaru and I really like how you have him connecting with Inu and all. I know in the (main) story he's been 'mean' but I always seem to feel that there was something more about him than being a villian. I've got up to Part 9 (Japanese version) and even though there's still the I will kill you, Inu in there, there are more 'deeper' moments between the two than either wants to really completely admit. SOoooo.... that's why I love this story so much. I really hope that you stick with this fic, because I most certainly would love to read more....Ok?
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  • From ANON - Babbit on May 03, 2004
    Well, I honestly must say this is one of the best Inuyasha fics I've ever read, not only because you took your time to let things go slowly, but also because I think you've flashed sesshoumaru's character out really well, and he's an extremely hard character to write, IMHO. Please keep up the good work, because I'll be looking out for more of this fic! Gambatte!
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  • From ANON - Stacerue on May 03, 2004
    I really like the story. It's very interesting and I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 03, 2004
    Wow great story! I haven't seen a fic as good as this in a while. It's as good as a book. I canwaitwait to see more. I love anything that has Inuyash/Sesshoumaru and of course Kagome too. There just aren't enough stories about this tro out there. So hurry up and write more already. And don't even think about abandoning this fic. You really won't like the consequences. I'd tell you what they'd be but it's going to take me a little while to figure out something suitably horrible. (Like 5 seconds after I find out it's been abandoned.)
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  • From ANON - Hanyou Slave on May 02, 2004
    I love this story! you had br ker keep writing. Please?
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