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Reviews for Dance With Me

By : inuyashasgirl
  • From ANON - Julie on March 27, 2016
    I love love LOVE the story! Please update it soon
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  • From ANON - Sorceress on September 05, 2006
    I would love to read more of this story I turly love it so far so if only for me please I beg you to finish it PLEASE................................................................................FOR ME.
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  • From ANON - Sorceress on July 27, 2006
    Can you Please Update your story you haven't in sooo long and I would love to see it finished.
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  • From ANON - sorceress on May 05, 2006
    PLEASE UPDATE I HAVE BEEN WAITING LIKE A GOOD LITTLE GIRL TO READ THE REST YOUR A GREAT WRITER PLEASE I MOST KNOW THE REST OF THE STORY.
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  • From ANON - SDR on January 12, 2006
    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

    You must update this story...please? Pretty pretty please? It's been so long since you posted another chapter in this story. I'm an art major and a dancer so for me this is like the best story ever. Please write more soon!
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on October 10, 2005
    Hey hon love the story so far I hope you get to finish it.
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  • From ANON - Inuyasha is hot! on August 31, 2005
    LOVE YOU FANCTION PLEASE CONTINUE IT!!!!!!!!!!!AND E MAIL
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  • From ANON - DALENA on August 31, 2005
    I love your story PLEASE make the rest!
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  • From ANON - crazy on July 24, 2005
    wow! i luv that story u better continue it or i will get really mad ok i really want to u to updat plz do it soon plz luv always crazy :)
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  • From ANON - Kari on May 30, 2005
    wow i love the fic so far, i hope u update really soon, i've fallen inlove w/ the story so please, please update soon!
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  • From ANON - ME on May 20, 2005
    this is a good fic very interesting PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

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  • From ANON - blaze on April 28, 2005
    wow this is a very good story so far it has passion and something else that seems to make it special please keep writting this story it is truely amazing UPDATE soon
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  • From ANON - Gemini on March 28, 2005
    Yeah!!!! Dirty, dirty, dirty!...I'm bad...I know (tee hee) Luv ya, Update soon!^_-
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  • From ANON - Stone Dragon Ruby on March 21, 2005
    AHHH! Now I need an update! I've always liked Inu-yasha playing an artist AUs and dancing ones too.

    My only piece of advice is that you work on your conversations. I got lost many times on who was talking when conversations go on for a very long time. It's ok to say every know and then; "The professor loved my drawing," Inu-yasha continued.

    OR

    "I'm still not sure if I'm ready," Kagome told him hesitantly, still trying to avoid his amber eyes.

    This way you have a little more interaction and movement instead of them just standing there looking at eachother. If you would like a beta I would be happy to help?

    Good luck on your next chapter!
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  • From fallenangel7583 on March 17, 2005
    okay, so it's two AM and i'm gonna call it a night on chapter 7. you really have a lot of great description in the story...so much i can see it being acted out, which is great. dont' listen to people who say that description bogs down a story...cause it doesn't. i still love your kikyo character and you Kagome character is a real sweetie. Inu is a littel soft for my liking but you have a believeable character, which is what counts. great story so far...very well put together and thought out. you have intresting restruants picked out with very good interaction, as if they were true places in the city to look for. (oh, and an annotation on my last note, which i feel like a jackass for, Harelmn is not a borrow, Brooklyn is...i was looking at the following chapter and realized i have family in Brooklyn and was wondering how i managed to leave that out. baka me.) ANYWAY, great story and keep up with it.
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