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Reviews for Dance With Me

By : inuyashasgirl
  • From fallenangel7583 on March 17, 2005
    okay, so i'm on chapter two right now and i thought i would leave a review. i like how you put Houjo out to be a bad guy (so to say) so many fics out there have him as a pansy little boy who can't do anything right (not that he has here either, but he has brass balls for what he did to her, i cna only say i hope INU kicks some serious ass). you have a good flow to you words and a well worked out dialougue and background story for the characters. no mind you i'm on two so i say this hesitanty, i like your kikyo character (that hurts to say). i never like kikyo and yours isn't really that bad. so yeah, props on that one. but this is really bugging me, just cuase i'm such a new york chick. you put them living in Manhattan and yet going to New York City??? uhh....manhattan is IN new york city...Juilliard is in Manhattan...rigth across from Central Park. :-/ i guess it can be a common misconception...but there are five burrows (much like the...uhh...band {their name escapes me} just put out) there is The Bronyx, Harlemn, Staten Island, Queens, and Manhatten which is where most of the commerce takes place (ie. radio city music hall, Julliard, central park) you might want to go back through and maybe make thier previous residence somewhere in Jersey, like Jersey City (kind of slummy) or Trenton....or....anywhere around there. but yeah...Manhattan IS New York City, i just thought i ought to point that out. sorry, i really mean no disrespect, i just wanted to inform you to that little quark. i shall continue on reading to see how it comes out. i really like the story.
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  • From ANON - Inuyasha kicks ass on March 16, 2005
    great new ch. By the way are you gona update your other stories they also are good.
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  • From ANON - Zelix on March 16, 2005
    Thank you for finally updating! I was starting to get worried since i haven't heard from you for a while... good thing you're back though, since i'm all eager for more!

    Oh yeah, by the way: Your fanfiction "Loving my enemy" is missing a chapter and some of your one-shots have also been cut and are not whole anymore, i suffered the same when this site crashed a year ago or so... i just thought you should know, see ya!
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  • From ANON - Dragon89 on March 16, 2005
    I sooo losve this story..its really good.I hope u get to write more soon because this is a best-seller.Its such a goood story i love the postion that you put Inuysha and Kagome in its really cute....
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  • From ANON - Gemini on March 01, 2005
    You must update as soon as possible! I love this story-line. Your so good at writing!^_^ I'll be waiting for the next installment. In the mean time I'll go check out your other cool fanfics!
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  • From ANON - A Fan MADNESS on February 25, 2005
    WHY ARE YOU STOPING BORED ALREADY!
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  • From ANON - Zelix on February 11, 2005
    This story is so good... when are you going to update it again? It's been so long since you last updated...
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  • From ANON - dvs on February 06, 2005
    Great story, very detailed. Please post soon.
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  • From ANON - mimi on December 08, 2004
    ........WOW......
    I'M STARTING TO REALLY LIKE THIS STORY ALOT
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON
    PRETTY PLEASE ^_^
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  • From ANON - Zelix on December 06, 2004
    Hehehehehehehehehehe.... yeah, that's a good chapter. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - No Sugar Added (not logged in) on December 04, 2004
    you rule. update soon...can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on December 04, 2004
    I like the overal plot but i just think that Kagome and Inu's relationship is moving way tooo fast. Nice story thought! Ja!
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  • From qtgrl1129 on December 04, 2004
    FINALLY!!!!!!!
    I had been waiting for SO long for you to update!
    This is one of my 10 fave stories!
    (And that's saying alot, because I like a LOT of the stories!)
    Please continue!
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  • From on December 03, 2004
    omg inusgirl your so cool i have u in my profile and i would love it if you reviewd my story well update soon ja ne!
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  • From ANON - timer-Lover on December 02, 2004
    I feel so touch! It's been a long time since I read a good story! Keep it up! Update more often because this is the first time I read it and I haven't been on AFF since I have a formal to get ready for 2morrow! GREAT WORK!
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