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Reviews for Dance With Me

By : inuyashasgirl
  • From ANON - yune-chan on December 02, 2004
    OMGGGGGG!!!!! did u see that type-o in ch. 6 when u called InuYasha Natasha when kagome was talking to kikyo!?!?!?!? if u didnt i just wanted to let u no about it. thanks for listening =D and by the way ur story is great!!!!!! i love it so much i cant wait for u to update!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Zelix on December 02, 2004
    Goodie, good chapter, keep em coming and soon!
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  • From ANON - catt on December 02, 2004
    oh my god awesome chappie. I really love it!!!! Yes make it very interesting, inu seeing kaggie naked hehheheehehehe. Update soon!!!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Zelix (not logged on) on December 01, 2004
    I love this fic, i simply just love it... and yes, it would be very interesting if she said yes about being the model.
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  • From qtgrl1129 on December 01, 2004
    man, this story ROCKS!!!!
    PLEASE continue it!
    this story is, like, my FAVE!
    Yes, Kagome should let InuYasha draw her naked!
    And when is she gonna tell him why she & Hojo broke up?
    and when are we gonna meet sango?
    (yes, yes, i know - so many questions! I'm can be extremely curious and inquisitive at times.
    I'm sorry. It's one of my many flaws.)
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  • From ANON - sizzlinghotcat on November 30, 2004
    I like your story and I think she should say yes.
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  • From ANON - Becky on November 30, 2004
    Hey, This is really cool so far! I just kinda wish Inuyasha could be a dancer, too. Inu in tights . . . mmmm . . .
    I have one note: Manhattan is in New York City, so saying that Kagome isn't from Manhattan when she grew up in New York is a little . . . you get me? But that's really the only flaw I can see. Good work!
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  • From ANON - Platinum-IceFire(Not logged in) on November 22, 2004
    Thanks for answering the question althouhg im not a Kikyo fan i realy like her in this story and her pairing is really unusual but its ok for me. PLZZZ UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Zelix on November 22, 2004
    Another brilliant story from you, you are good with these and i hope you'll update soon again!
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  • From ANON - RavenShadow on November 22, 2004
    I really love this so far, its sweet and romantic. I hope you get a chance to update soon!
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  • From ANON - BrokenDesire on November 14, 2004
    dude! this is so cute! ^-^
    please keep updating!!
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  • From ANON - Platinum-IceFire(Not logged in) on November 09, 2004
    OMG! How can ppl not love that lime it was totally AWESOME!!! Finally they met and such great sparks too!! Plzz update soon all my other fave stories are eitehr on hold or they dont update. YOU WONT DO THAT TO ME WILL?! Yep this is one of my fav stories!!!
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  • From ANON - BrokenDesire on November 08, 2004
    omfg! youve GOTTA update!!
    i have to admit i felt like stabbing
    when you had Hraperape her...lol
    but all is well now that Inuyasha
    has come into the picture!
    please update! *cry*
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  • From ANON - Fang on November 08, 2004
    Don't put all the information at the begining of the story, even if they are just little facts (unless you are doing a police description).
    It's more book-like and doesn't take away the "mistery" if you let them one by one in the course of the story; same thing with the past, I think it's better to reveal memories and past events piece by piece to keep the reader interested.
    Just a tip...take it oave ave it.
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  • From ANON - TLC on November 08, 2004
    I just read this and found it to be pretty good. I look forward to reading more.
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