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Reviews for Human Compensation

By : WhisperingMoon
  • From ANON - lychee love on October 15, 2010
    Oh man, after the review I left for "The Importance of Being (...)" I think I'm all tuckered out to churn another long and detailed one for this! Suffice to say, your work is some kind of addicting. I liked this - a little better paced, still kind of rushed but so action-packed! My only issue was that the girls didn't get to kick much ass here, but that was fixed with the last few chapters (and it's more personal taste anyway!)

    Great job!
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  • From ANON - Adelaide on August 08, 2010
    I loved this story!! It was just so incredible. The story line was awesome and kept me reading, the characters were rendered wonderfully. I read the whole thing in a couple of days. I just love the way you write! Every story I have read by you has left me wanting more.
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  • From ANON - Christi on July 16, 2010
    YOU HAD ME IN TEARS AT THE END!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!
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  • From loretta537 on March 13, 2008
    this was such a good story, but i shouldnt have read it. it's now 2:30 am and i have a 1,000 word paper due at 10 am so i had better get back to my rough draft.
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  • From ANON - Bethy-kun (Not signed in) on October 02, 2005
    Wonderful story, if I don't say so myself! Forty-five chapters- what an amazing accomplishment. Not many authors can stay with one story for a year, even a few months! I congratulate you with that, lol! In any case, I must admit that you have an unique, intriguing way with words that had me begging for more at the end of each chapter. The moods of the many different relationships (Love, Brotherly, Friendly ect...) were set so perfectly that I was beginning to think that was how the manga, and the anime, should have gone (no matter the fact that it was set in modern times rather than in Fuedal Japan.) When I was reading chapters forty through forty-five, I was about ready to cry. After all that had happened to the characters, they were going to end up forgetting it all in the next life.

    But you surprised me (This entire story was full of surprises). They ended up getting together, ended up returning to their old, normal, lovable selves, and I ended up a very, very happy girl, lol! Naraku and Kikyou were the perfect enemies. Though Kikyou was a true bitch, I never harbored any real hatred for the sick, twisted girl. She was only a pawn in Naraku's sick game, as Sango became towards the end of the story. I would normally tell the author to update as soon as they possibly could, but that wouldn't make much sense here, would it? The story is finished, with a wonderful ending at that. I -will- tell you to keep on writing, though, because any InuYasha story you happen to put out, I will definitely read it.

    Wonderfully done! You certainly deserve my gratitude and applauding hands for allowing me to read such an intriguing, well-put-together story that had such an interesting plot. I wish you good luck with future stories...

    Chow for now,
    Liz (Bethy-kun)
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  • From ANON - Me.. ^_^ on September 24, 2005
    this has to be one of the best fics ive read...

    :) i love it!
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  • From ANON - TricksterGoddess on May 28, 2005
    I DEMAND A SEQUEL!! I DON'T CARE WHAT YOU SAY THERE IS GOING TO BE ONE OR ELESE!!!!!!! Wow, that's like the first threat I have ever given to a writer before, feel honored^__~ OMG that was horrible and great and nerve wracking and nauseating and exciting MY GOD! *twitches* That was a friggin awesome ending, I was going to die when... just about everyone died *heh* But the ending was so creative, I never thought their memories would come back when they kissed, well except for shippo, but he didn't have anyone to kiss...*sigh* Please oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please*on knees begging now^^* write a sequel, it would have A LOT of potential in my opinion! Although I must admit, I am somewhat satisfied, but there's still that gaping hole of what is to come... oh I hope you do write a sequel!!!
    ~A Loyal Reader~
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  • From ANON - kaisgirl112 on May 26, 2005
    this.was.so...............gooooooooooooooood! it made me cry, made me happy, and made me sad totally how i like to read a good story this is a master peice and u r another of my fav authoresses im gonna put this in my favs!!
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  • From ANON - Serena63083 on May 24, 2005
    Genius! Sheer Genius!! I loved the story.. You have to write an epilogue! This was some of the best writing I have read in a long time, no joke. I loved reading this story and was a little peeved when you killed just about EVERYBODY off but then you fixed it, so you are forgiven. I really look forward to your future stories.
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  • From JebusOfNazareth on May 24, 2005
    Mother of God. Sweet release. This is the best story ever. I hope that when Scars finishes, that it will merely tie, not surpass this story. I can not praise this story enough.


    I cant.
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  • From ANON - TricksterGoddess on May 23, 2005
    I was just about to review when I noticed that you updated with another 10 or so chapters, you are awesome... I'll finish them sometime in the future because I'm tired right now and have an honors french project due on Wednesday... sorry, You'll hear from me later^__^!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 19, 2005
    omg..*sniff sniff* that last chappy was so sad..but it was so realistic in many ways!!!!!!!! keep up da fantastic work!!!!!
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  • From JebusOfNazareth on May 19, 2005
    Mother of god. You write some of the most beautiful stuff I have ever read. Good god.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 18, 2005
    oh my god..r u going to update soon? *walks around the room* lets see...there are currently 500 reviewers waiting for those updates.. O_o update soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - Serena 63083 on May 16, 2005
    They need to have more pluses for your story!!! I was reading And thinking this is a good chapter then the next chapter got better and the next got better ect... I love this story!! cant wait to find out what sess does when he finds out Rins gone. *shudders* oh man!!! Anyway if you haven't noticed by now i really like your story keep writing!!!!
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