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Reviews for A Plan Gone Astray

By : blueangel
  • From ANON - Souly on May 06, 2003
    Wow, that was an awesome fic! I write some too, but I never post 'em. Anyways, I just wanted to let you know how much I liked your story. At first it seemed like it was going to be like all the other kag/sess stories (you, the devastated kagome runs into the heartless sess and things just go sappy)... that was such a bad example... Ahem *smoothing her skirt down* I like the twist that your story took. Very interesting! People dont use his demon form much, well the ones i've read. I think they're missin out cus the PUppy makes things so much more interesting! (o^_^o) It's always refreshing to read a story thats a bit out of the ordinary. I would definately love to read a sequel or continuation, or hell, just another Oneshot! (psst...If you haven't noticed, i'm kinda beggin here ^_^;;) oh yeah... btw, when Sess is talking thru his dog form, is he talking talking or like... a mental talking thing? I was just a wee bit confused there. Well, i'll stop rambling now... heh.. *sweatdrop* well, can't wait to read and review your next story! (ps What is your opinion on Sess/Rin?)

    -Souly
    "Love Tastes like Strawberries"

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  • From ANON - pratz on May 05, 2003
    I like the Sesshoumaru's saying part (you're mine... blah blah blah...). That's so cool, possessive, and masculine. I wonder what Kagome'll react if it really happen (I wanna see how she couldn't scream anymore, losing her voice after doing *that* with Sesshoumaru.

    Please update soon.

    ps: should I also review on mediaminer? I think I'll see you here...
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 05, 2003
    The magic of fanfictions is that you can wright what you want. You could have Sesshoumaru change the size of his demon body for a more Kagome hight..MORE NOW. please?
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  • From ANON - hiyakuprincess on May 05, 2003
    that was not RISQUE that was hella good!!!!Please email me when you update!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Rei on May 04, 2003
    Please don't just make this a one-shot! I wanna see how this scenario unfolds! Please write more chapters, ok?


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  • From ANON - SIXIYAI on May 04, 2003
    NEEEEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDDDD SEQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLL
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  • From ANON - Michi-sama on May 04, 2003
    that's it? the end? c'mon, there' GOT to be more. y'know, the whole thing with sesshou in his dog form is turning several gears in the mind. hmmm. we may have something here.

    Ja Ne,
    Michi
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  • From ANON - imgonnakil on May 04, 2003
    how bout another chappie?
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  • From ANON - Rita on May 04, 2003
    Wow. I really really liked this. Very unique. And I'll admit, if Sesshoumaru wasn't so large in his true youkai form...Well, I'll leave that to the imagination! ::hes:hes:: Anyway, I can't wait to read more! You did say you might write more? Please please do!!
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  • From ANON - sayah1112 on May 04, 2003
    OOOOO that was REALLY good, please tell me that wasnt THE END and that there IS more...i NEED more! Please! PLease write another chapter, i love your style of writing and this fanfic has ALOT of promise! I really love it *sigh* Good job...well d..PL..PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER!

    ~Sarah
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  • From ANON - GreaterBeast_Xellas on May 04, 2003
    Oh My god....I LOVE IT . YOu should make it into a story please dont stop there. PLEASE
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  • From ANON - Hopeless Romantic on May 04, 2003
    Wonderful Job! Are you planning on continuing this? It has promise to be quite interesting. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - jen on May 04, 2003
    i like your story. it's very good and well written.
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