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By : Vyncent
  • From ANON - PJ on December 07, 2004
    This is a great story. I really like how you had Inuyasha 'employ' help for this and that he is going to make them live with what they have done. Sometimes killing is just to easy for a crime. It kind of reminds me of the short lived TV show "the Crow" where he could 'pass the pain' onto the person that caused it. Keep writing.
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  • From ANON - MidnightTimberWolf on December 06, 2004
    I have to say I may not have reviewed all the other chapters due to the fact I just could not tear my eyes away from reading this story.... This is a cool fic and I hope you continue.... Can't wait to excited.... Update soon....
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  • From ANON - Jake on December 06, 2004
    hey this is an awsome stiry i hope you update soon thanx

    Jake.
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  • From lamoonangel on December 06, 2004
    I love this fic.the author gives good desscription and detail as to what is going on in the story .
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  • From ANON - Cold Demon Lord on December 06, 2004
    First off let me say you have done an excellent job of handling the rape issue but there are a few things to make want to try and imporve.

    I am just wondering would Inuyasha really ask for all that help, I believe in I not mistaken that he has never ask for help from his brother ever in the manga or anime I know they teamed up to save Kagome & Rin but that was mainly out of need.

    Secondly some of your chapters don't really do anything to further the plot and Kagome still hasn't come too I understand the brutallity of rape but 16 chapters in and we haven't even got to who the suspects are and were they are at.

    All in all it is a solid story but you might want to think a series of certain points you want to make in a chapter and then move on to the next because like I said we are 16 chapters in the and all we know is Kagome got raped and now the Inu-Tachi is planning a attack.

    Good luck with the rest of your writing.
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  • From ANON - ChocolateHenati on December 05, 2004


    I cannot wait to see how all of this is going to end!.....Good stuff
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  • From ANON - New Fan on December 04, 2004
    I like where this story is going. I am glad the 'hunt' has not happen yet. Please update soon.
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  • From VampireWitch on December 04, 2004
    Hmmmm.....
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  • From ANON - Mija on December 03, 2004
    and btw if ya want to know what Im really waiting for is the living revenge they all plan to give the Nightwalkers..scum like them need to learn some old fashion justice and I sooooooo cant wait till ya give it to them through our wonderfull fuedal era hero's hehe..huggles Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - Mija on December 03, 2004
    omg that was another wonderfull chap, short but good I sooo luved it and look forward to more I cant wait, please update soon k??? ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From ANON - bettychan on December 03, 2004
    I just love this story. I do hate that that happened to Kagome, but you have turned it into a wonderful story. The only bad thing about your story is after every chapter I have to go find a story that is pure fluff so I don't have nightmares. Keep up the wonderful work. Please update as soon as you can. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on December 03, 2004
    I hope that the next chapter it the "HUNT". Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Jake on December 03, 2004
    hey this is awsome. please update soon. thanx.

    Jake.
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  • From ANON - Midnight_Sparrow on December 03, 2004
    Another great chapter.
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  • From ANON - KogasHentaiLuver on December 01, 2004
    This story has me glued to my chair with each new chapter. I love that you brought in Ayume's parents in on this. I thought the scene with the female wolf whining trying to offer comfort was so sweet. I am also amazed at how well you've managed to keep the characters IN character. Such fine writing. You are truly skilled.
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