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By : Vyncent
  • From ANON - New Fan on November 26, 2004
    What did Sess went through in order for him to understand what Kagome is going throught now? Will Inuyasha be jealous of this
    new bond between Sess and Kagome? Update soon.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on November 25, 2004
    I read rape scence in the past (not to many) and I feel this one of the best one out there or that I ever read.
    You did not focus only on the rape but on the healing and the needed support that Kagome will need to get
    through it. Please updat this story soon.
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  • From ANON - Diane on November 25, 2004
    I like it & the plot is good, but for heavens sake drop the excessive Japanese especially the onna stuff, I'm not even sure that's Japanese since the only character I've come across that uses it is Wufei the Chinese pilot from Gundam Wing. It's especially silly to use onna & woman in the same sentence as you did in 1 of the chapters. I would just replace all the onna's you used with girl, etc & call it good.
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  • From kogaluver on November 24, 2004
    This is such an awesome story. I'm very proud of the way you have handled the feelings, emotions and aftermath of what a rape victim would feel. You are also correct regarding the kind of help Kag will need to help her recover mentally. Thank you for handling such a realistic horror in a delicate and informative way. GREAT JOB! Now, lets go kick some rapist ass, shall we. I will anxiously be awaiting for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - kashudoreineko on November 22, 2004
    Please, continue this story.

    I've been bawling my eyes out reading this. I have to know what happens next.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on November 22, 2004
    Will the other link with Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha to see what happen to Kagome? Update ssoooonnn!!! Great story.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on November 22, 2004
    Now it is getting interesting. I can not wait until they are exposed to the future. How will they react to it? Update soon.
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  • From VampireWitch on November 22, 2004
    Hmmm... a fitting retribution. And if InuYasha hadn't insisted on linking, I would've been disappointed in him.
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  • From ANON - julie on November 21, 2004
    I love your writing... but god, poor Kagome goes through hell ;). She is a strong girl though... I only hope this doesn't break her.

    --julie
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  • From ANON - Midnight_Sparrow on November 20, 2004
    :D
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  • From ANON - New Fan on November 20, 2004
    I can not wait to those beast pay the price. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on November 20, 2004
    I can not wait for those beast to pay the price. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on November 19, 2004
    You can not end it there. You must update. I hope that what Inuyasha and friends have for these guys will
    be very creative and very painful. PLEASE Update soon.
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  • From VampireWitch on November 19, 2004
    I love your attention to detail - this is very well done so far, and I can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - vashta on November 19, 2004
    Well written, I am anxious to see how you have everybody get along and react to Kagome's time.
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