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By : Vyncent
  • From ANON - essie on February 19, 2005
    all right ha ha this it just what he get
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  • From ANON - psyco_chick32 on February 15, 2005
    Did you just add the scene with Sesshy, Inuyasha and Kagome watching the attack? Because it was amazingly well written, and I read it through like 4 times. I don't remember seeing it before!
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  • From ANON - kashudoreineko on February 10, 2005
    I'm thinking it's a sign of my own humanity that I actually feel sorry for him/her. Part of me thinks I shouldn't, but I do anyway.

    Yay. I'm not jaded beyond all hope!!!

    Story continues to rock.
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  • From ANON - Jenny on February 10, 2005
    Ok This chapter for me was too good. I say you went easy on the motherfucker and I wish for more harm to come to him/her.
    I feel that it's not enough!! Punish him/her more!! I would like to know what the southern lord will do to it!! I'm not sick, I just don't believe that is enough but it IS A FUCKING DAMN GREAT START!!!!!! KEEP IT UP!! Your a damn good writer!! By all means don't hold back. Be as graphic as you possible can, the more the better. I don't like reading things like this and if I just read this chapter and not the others I would say your one sick bastard but because I read this from the very beginning I say bring it on and make the boy pay for everything and BEYOND.
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  • From ANON - Deep Serenity on February 10, 2005
    Okay, LMAO, I am twisted and thought it was so funny!!!!!!!!!!
    good job, and so fitting I wish this could be done to every rapist.... anyway, I loved it EXCEPT please when you have time take out the he/she stuff, anyone who has made it this far in the story knows what is going on, it greatly distracted from the chapter and the details of what was going on. I understand what you were doing, but any reader mature enough to read this chapter will be able to follow along without the he/she thing.

    good job, and again very creative story.
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  • From ANON - Mija on February 10, 2005
    ooh that was soooooooooo good, but more, I want the little weasel to suffer more...yes I am cruel, but somone like that deserves more pain than one can ever be inflicted, his mom, sister??? damn the man is sick, and for what he did to Kagome got him this payment...go Kagome for having faithfull and loving friends who would do such a thing for her and get away with it hehe...gotta love that part...sigh..ok I am being morbid I guess but still think he deserves more punishment and cant wait to see what his new MASTER has in store for him, hehe, great chap cant wait for the next one, till then keep up the awsome work, be well safe and happy much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From ANON - Midnight_Sparrow on February 09, 2005
    I repeat myself from earlier: I NEVER want to be on Sesshoumaru's bad side...
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  • From ANON - New Fan on February 09, 2005
    I never thought that Sess and Kouga would sully their hands on him/her Natsuki. I hope that Kagome will never find out about that. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - essie on February 09, 2005
    this very very very great dsmn update
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  • From ANON - Gem on February 09, 2005
    perfection of retribution
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  • From ANON - justme on February 09, 2005
    Whoa!!! That is a viscious chapter. Can't wait to see what kind of 'exotic' taste the new Lord will have. heh heh.
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  • From ANON - psyco_chick32 on February 09, 2005
    Wow. This just keeps getting better and better... did Sesshy say that soon the well would be closed??? Kagome would never want to go back, would she? Especially after asking Inuyasha to take her "home"... Wow, I absolutely CANNOT wait for more updates!!
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  • From ANON - deep serenity on February 06, 2005
    well...(face flamming) chapt 29 was...hmmm great, I really wish INU could be my boyfriend for one night. anyway, I have read lots of different stories where he marked her and I think this is one of the best. Because darn it he is half demon and I hate when they have him acting to "soft" because human or demon sex tends to bring out the animalistic side in most so i thought your scene was very very good, not to mention all the sexual tension of four years, so it needed to be very passion filled and couldn't be to soft. Good job
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  • From ANON - Gem on February 06, 2005
    TO GOOD!!! I wondered if that is what you had planned when you hinted about the punishment fitting the crime. Perfect. And the finishing touches of the healing and not being able to talk, that is truley worthy of Sess himself. I think the idea of payback for all the suffering caused ideal.
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  • From ANON - deep serenity on February 06, 2005
    ok I wanted to read all the "hunt" chaps before i reviewed, very good, this story is very emotional but on a mostly realistic front so I am very happy about that. I like where this is going about the "gril and her brother" sick, but again, could happen, probably has somewhere in history so it is believable. Now the only thing I don't like is that Inu has been neglected in this story as far as I am concerned, (to me it is easy to tell you your fav char is, Sess!) which if this was Rin I could understand, but don’t you think Inuyasha should have played a bigger role, I mean he didn’t even get his target. And yes I know that you explained this away by have Kagome and Sess bond, but still I think Inuyasha should have given a little more detail in this story.
    With that said I am very happy at the way you don’t ignore the other characters and their feelings(which I think to many Inu writers do) so good job, and seeing as how I still have about 7 more chaps to go, maybe you do involve Inu more…if not this story overall is wonderful and I’m sure I will enjoy the rest.

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