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By : Vyncent
  • From ANON - essie on January 29, 2005
    omg I want to know what changes happen please update soon
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  • From ANON - WiccanMethuselah on January 29, 2005
    Ooh, the suspense continues!!! I can hardly wait to find out what, exactly, he has morphed into ... although I have a feeling I already know what sort of "exotic" tastes the Lord of the Southern Lands might have ... the continued suspense at what the "male" has become is a delight. Your writing is powerful and evocative ... I sincerely hope that you intend to make a 'habit' (career) out of it!!
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  • From ANON - KogasHentaiLuver on January 29, 2005
    I am so anxious to see how that rapist is tortured. I'm actually biting my nails in anticipation. I wasn't really clear though of what Koga's gift was. Were they slaves to be presented to the other lord? Anyway, hurry with the rest. Oh. I think I know what the liquid he drank did. I bet it turns him into a woman, hehehe. That way he can really feel what he had done to the other women he tortured and killed. That would be a fitting sentence.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on January 29, 2005
    You can not keep us waiting. You must update this story sooooon.
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  • From ANON - tate_wichippi on January 24, 2005
    Could you tell me who is the watcher at the end of the story? You refer to the Watcher as they, why?
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  • From ANON - Midnight_Sparrow on January 22, 2005
    :D:D
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  • From ANON - WiccanMethuselah on January 22, 2005
    Thank you for a MARVELOUS end to a searing story. I enjoyed all the twists and turns this took; my only regret is that you did not dwell just a little more on the "changes" that were to overcome the rapist. All in all, a fic that I would HIGHLY recommend to others!
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  • From ANON - kashudoreineko on January 22, 2005
    And the watcher is???

    This story is so brilliantly woven together, that each chapter pains me because when I am done with it, I have to wait for the next.

    I'm not wordsmith enough to craft together phrases that can convey how much this story has touched me. I eagerly await more.
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  • From ANON - ChocolateHentai on January 22, 2005


    That was one of the most beautiful chapters I've read in quite sometime.......the way you wrote InuYasha and Kagome's connection.....I was about to cry. Good Stuff!!!!
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  • From ANON - essie on January 21, 2005
    about time they did it this great please update
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  • From ANON - New Fan on January 21, 2005
    Who was the person spying on Kagome and Inuyasha? Hey, what
    happen to the leader? I hope that answer is cleared up? Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Gem on January 21, 2005
    Well worth waiting for, nicely done.Also a good counter point to the darkness of the previous chapters. I think it balances them out. Can't wait for the next install!
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  • From ANON - joey on January 21, 2005
    this is a cool story but I am a bit disappionted that is seems like Kagome got over being raped or like nothing happened. Alot of stories do this and it kind of irks me that people just write about someone being raped and then just "blow it off" I understand that she loves Inuyasha and he saved her, etc but most woman would still not want to have sex that soon after being raped especially if it was her first time. So I hope you can come up with a good reason why she was so willing to have sex so soon and why the rape is not effecting her. Anyway I will keep reading this is still good so keep writing
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  • From ANON - Mija on January 21, 2005
    ooh wow another terrific chapter and congradulations on the nominations, I myself had intended to nominate ya but someone beat me to it, sniffles, even on the unworthy one too...sigh, but I do get to vote hehe....anyhow best of luck and another truelly wonderful chapter always look foward to another one, till then be well safe and happy much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From ANON - WiccanMethuselah on January 20, 2005
    This is a gripping, well-told, finely written tale. Dark, yes. Angst-ridden, yes. Possible to leave for even a minute .... NO! I am impreessed by the skill with which you weave the tale, bring the threads together and bind the story. I can hardly wait to see what happens when Kagome awakens, what Sesshoumaru will do next, whether or not the necklaces were all returned, or if some of the travelers will return to the future without InuYasha or Kagome. Thank you for making a winter day so much more enjoyable!
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