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By : Vyncent
  • From ANON - Kimmie on October 23, 2014
    Usually I don't care for DARK stories and would stop reading them after a chapter or two, but I couldn't stop reading this one. That just goes to show how GOOD it is. I certainly hope you decide to complete it someday. Good stories such at this one deserve an ending. Hope to hear from you soon.
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  • From DragonLadyLiz on June 27, 2013
    Not sure if you're aware, but chapter 15 and 16 are together. I'm probably not the first to point this out, but if you have time, you might want to fix it.

    I have to say, though, that so far, that's the only real problem I've noticed. I've waited until now to review because I've been that caught up in the story. Despite the dark subject matter, I am thoroughly enjoying it. Everything leads to something else, with an explanation or reason for what happens. I'm still curious about the emotional tie between Kagome and Sesshomaru, but I'm sure you'll get to that later.

    Well, I'm off to read more!
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  • From Ladygraywolf on June 05, 2009
    Damn. Pure and simple. Looking forward to them getting the bastards. Really glad that she's all healed up.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 15, 2008
    This is an awesome story! I hope someday you are able to finish it!
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  • From Jaedin on June 11, 2008
    i havent even read the story yet, but you've got me hooked from the first paragraph!
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  • From bracletbab on January 05, 2008
    Hey there! Are you going to continue this story?
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  • From Feifle on April 21, 2007
    This story has got me on edge, I wanna know whats going to happen... Good job!
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  • From spookyempath on February 11, 2007
    nicely done. your characterization is pretty good, a little off at some points, but pretty good. i hope to see more soon.
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  • From msallwy on January 24, 2007
    Hey, I'm enjoying this story but I found something out of place in this chapter. In Japanese culture and the worship of the Kamis, the sun is female not male as in grecian cultures of the west. There's a whole myth about how her brother and sister Kami have to lure her out with mirrors and such. If your interested in keeping to the japanese theme which it looks like with all the words that you have in romanji text. Thanks for the great read. I hope the rest of the chapters (which I'm slowly going through) are as good as these have been.
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  • From ANON - dsgjdkgj on November 21, 2006
    sweet
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  • From ANON - ladyrainstardragon on January 01, 2006
    Holy Crap!

    It's been a while since I checked on this story. It is now 4 AM, and I should have been in bed hours ago. However, I kept getting pulled along by your well developed plotline to read that fateful "one last chapter." I especially like your cliffhanger endings for each chapter.
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  • From ANON - Fate\'s Wisdom on November 20, 2005
    i didnt say it in that last review but a lot of your readers were first hand rape victims or people who knew someone who suffered through that crime.

    Once again,
    Fate's Wisdom
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  • From ANON - Fate\'s Wisdom on November 20, 2005
    oh my god.....
    i think that you should look over your reviews (again/if u havent already)
    i just skimmed half of them
    Be proud of what you have accomplished, if u do what i ask you will see the sheer quantity of souls you have touched today. im crying right now, its amazing that your story has helped so many people look back at what happened (i went and skimmed a quarter of ur reviews and i saw a handful of people who were touched and just gave me a sense Through the review of how relieved and sad they were reading this. i think it helped a lot of people come ot terms with their past and you should be so proud of what you have done. i see that you have ddone what the characters in your story did- your showed that people do understand.)
    im overjoyed that a step has been taken

    song now:

    I, can see a world, of one great family.
    living in peace and brotherhood,
    living in harmony.
    but the world, in which we live
    is a very different place.

    fear and hate, affect us all,
    every color, creed, and race.

    so we must climb the walls and cross the raging rivers.
    we must,
    make a world of peace our common goal.
    we can make a difference
    we can build a bridge,
    and open up the pathway to our souls!

    ONE SMALL STEP, BRINGING US ALL A LITTLE BIT CLOSER.
    ONE SMALL STEP, BEGINNING TODAY!
    IF WE ALL JOIN HAND IN HAND,
    EVERY NATION EVERY LAND!

    WE CAN TAKE ONE,
    SMALL,
    STEP.....
    LEADS THE WAY...........

    Fate's Wisdom
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  • From ANON - Fate\'s Wisdom on November 20, 2005
    please please please update!!!! the story rocks i want moooorrrrrree--cmon im dying here.

    i see very few flaws in your approach to writing this story. your grammar is above average, and though not perfect, i recognize that it is exceptionally better than most stories i have read.

    Fate's Wisdom
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  • From ANON - KogasGirl on October 15, 2005
    Please update as soon as you can this the best story I have read thus far.
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