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Reviews for Passion

By : CiraArana

From ANON - Angel on June 02, 2005
wow!... this is great!... please update really soon... i can't wait.
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From ANON - akumu on June 02, 2005
Haha, I love the way Shippo had to cover for Kagome at the end of chap. 8 with the soap thing.
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From ANON - Lisa on June 02, 2005
Still marvelous, as always. Wow.

Please add me to that mailing list. I cannot WAIT for the next chapter!! awanderingjedi@aol.com
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From ANON - karlina on June 01, 2005
i wish u would finish the story....it was VERY good...i hope that in the future u consider a career in writing.
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From ANON - whimsy on May 31, 2005
Good lemon, but severe OOCness and departure from canon. Does anyone bother to read the manga? Of course, actual canon would spoil your fic, such as that InuYasha does love Kagome and that his feelings toward Kikyou are some affection and demands of obligation and honor rather than love. Even apart from the manga, does anyone truly believe that InuYasha would choose an undead who smells of the grave (wonderful perfume for his sensitive nose), whose own sister says she is dead, talks about taking him to hell with her, and couldn't have children in any event.
I once made up a list of overused plots and cliches for S/K fics. You managed to avoid the overused plots, but you tagged several of the cliches. Is a bit of originality too much to ask?

Taking the fic as given, at some point InuYasha should slap Sango around for automatically taking Kagome's side regardless of circumstances. When the facts come out, he should grind her face in the fact that she defended Kagome when Kagome was lying and ignoring InuYasha's attempts to find out the truth. Her behavior is so one-sided that I don't see how InuYasha can trust her.

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From ANON - Shard on May 31, 2005
Awesome, I have really been looking forward to this chapter and I loved it. It was great, I can't hardly wait for the next one, it's all so exiting.
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From ANON - Sel on May 31, 2005
Oi! I can't wait for more!!!!!!!!

Sel~
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From ANON - db on May 30, 2005
Your story is ok .Every one has personal ideas, likes, and dislikes.
I enjoy reading stories that have a differrnt twist to them.
It is wonderful how each person can come with so many
different ideas concerning one topic. Keep up the good work.
It is a wonderful gift to all when you share your hard work
with others.

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From ANON - inudemon16 on May 30, 2005
WOW!!! U won thats soooo cool !!! UPDATE SOON,
PPPLLLLZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - JACKIA on May 29, 2005
WONDERFUL CHAPTER!!!!!!!! BEEN WAITING FOR IT FOR A LONG TIME, THANKS SO MUCH FOR UPDATING AND SENDING ME AN UNPDATE NOTICE. LOVE HOW THE CHAPTER WAS WRITTEN, I COULD FEEL KAGOME'S EMOTIONS, I FELT THEM SOO MUCH THAT I FELT LIKE HITTING KOUGA AND INUYASHA...JEJE BTW, YOU GOT KOUGA'S CHARACTER PERFECT! I REALLY WISH KAGOME WOULD'VE SLAP HIM AGAIN. HOPE FLUFFY SHUTS HIM UP!
CANT WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER. HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON. THANKS JACKIA
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From ANON - drunken goddess on May 29, 2005
Ah! You JUST emailed me saying you had just finished the next chappy and I come to find there are THREE NEW CHAPPIES!? (*shakes in a moment of hyperactive happiness*)
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From Pocahontas20 on May 24, 2005
This is awesome starting from the beginning. You have a way with words that is astonishing. I wish you would update really soon. I'm dying here!
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From ANON - inudemon16 on May 22, 2005
Nice,......write more, write more!!!PPPPPPLLLLLZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Jen on May 15, 2005
WOW... thats all I can say is Wow... This story is sooo amazing!!!!!! I love it sooo much... you are by far one of the best writers ive read so far!!!! Please continue I cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!
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From ANON - JAckia on May 12, 2005
GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE GREAT FF, CHAPTER 8 PLEASE
PS FLUFFY IS SSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOVE HOW THIS FF IS GOING, IS THERE A MAILING LIST? IF THEIR IS CAN U LET ME KNOW WHEN YOU UPDATE, PLEASE? THANKS :)
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