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Reviews for Passion

By : CiraArana

From ANON - zenia on June 14, 2006
Oooooh I really like your story so far. I just got into Inuyasha fanfics and hadn't even thought of this pairing. I like it! I also love how your chapters are super long. I am kinda sad that I have read all the chapters up so far... but I hope to see another one soon.
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From ANON - Shosuro on June 01, 2006
You can't do this to me!!!!! You have to continue ASAP!!!! I want more of the love story!!

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From ANON - passion lover on May 31, 2006
I love your storys there soo good.So whens your next chapter ?I can not wait to read it.I'm glad you passed your exams by the way!!PLZ, PLZ UPDATE SOOOONN
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From ANON - Mistress Fluffy on May 23, 2006
First of all, after reading this chapter I am really happy. Nope rethink that. I am positivly giddy!! I was soooo worried at the end of the last chapter that her mother would find out and like, disown her or fill the well with cement or something. But the fact that you kept her in the dark added to the suspense of it all. One cudo for you my friend!!

But on that note, you probably should go back there and have her mother and family find out about her pregnancy. Or you could always do something like, after Inuyasha was done visiting Kikyo he went to the well and decided to see if Kagome had told her family what was wrong with her. And when he gets there Kagome's mom lets him read the letter and then he finds out, and decides to go back to the past and go ape on Kagome. Or something. I don't know, you are the author, and if the next chapter is as good as this one, that will be awesome!

Second, after reading your authors note about the clue about the childs gender, I decided to go back and read it. And I think I found it!! The test read that if the test was blue (boy), it was negative and that if it was red (girl), it was positive. And since we all knew that Kagome would be pregnant, (or atleast, I kinda figured it out) it has to be a girl! ^_^ A cute little girl with white hair and blue eyes... or something cute!! ^-^!!! And I was thinking, before I realized that it is highly likely to be a girl, that you should make Kagome have a girl just to tick Sesshoumaru off. I can just imagine it... it would be hilarious. But you get a cudo for that clue!!

Thirdly, I think that what Sesshoumaru wanted from the beginning was a way to make sure that the Western Lands stayed in his bloodline by him having a child. And if he died, the Western Lands would go to Inuyasha, which we all know he would absolutely hate. Atleast, that is my reasoning behind it.

And finally, I just want to praise you on this work of art that you call Passion. It is probably number three on my favorites list, number one being House of the Moon, and two being Chained to You, but only because those are done. I have tried to write stories before and heaven knows they sucked. And I am trying to make a comic right now, which is sadly not coming together ,so I know how hard it can sometimes be to create a story. You are just an amazing writer and I am truly honered to read what you have written. And I am not sucking up either. The way you write is captivating and I can't get enough of it. Sometimes, I just go to A Single Spark or here and just start reading your story for the fun of it. I tell you, it is one of the only stories that I have ever read that can not bore me by reading it again and again. And I know, I have probably read your story about 6 times over. Please, take as much time as you need to write the next chapter! I for one will definatly not complain! ^_^!!

Oh, I almost forgot, congragulations on passing your exams! I am getting my grades soon, so I hope I pass! *crosses fingers*

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From ANON - angie-chan on May 21, 2006
wow. that was AMAZING I just couldnt stop reading!! I waited till now to review because I couldnt stop reading. Im truely in love with this fanfic
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From ANON - MirMir on May 18, 2006
You are such an excellent writter!
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From ANON - Tori on May 16, 2006
I just wanted to say that I've really enjoyed reading this fic and I hope you'll be updating soon. :)
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From ANON - Subaru on May 11, 2006
I was so upset when they took down the site for awhile I didnt think I would ever be able to read the ending to this story. I hope you update really soon!
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From ANON - lil_merc_girl on May 03, 2006
i had been fluffy802005, but i changed my name.

i still absolutely love this fic. i figured that sesh would be happy with the news and that kagome was worrying for nothing

now, the reaction from the inu gang is gonna be the tricky one.

thank you for updating. i was seriously going thru withdrawal with the site being updated and all.

can't wait for the next chapter!!
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From ANON - Shard on May 02, 2006
An awesome chapter, I can't wait to see the others response to current events. I wonder if Sess is right about the child being a boy, but then again I doubt it would be an only child, Jaken is going to have so much fun babysitting. Hope to read more soon.
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From ANON - dreaming_illusion on May 01, 2006
hey~ .. post on fanfiction.com.. cuz like the words.. are messed up here in adultfanfiction.. anyway. i was following your story.. and i really like it.. please post on fanfiction soon..
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From ANON - tanesha on May 01, 2006
great update

so kagome has told sesshomaru that she is pregnant and he wants the baby. i wonder what his name will be and what he will look like and what kind of powers he'll have.

so how is sesshomaru making things harder in the next chapter? is sesshomaru demanding that kagome come to his castle now or is she preparing to tell inuyasha and the rest of her friends about her and sesshomaru's secret relationship and sesshomaru is making things harder by either saying that she will come to his castle or either that he will tell inuyasha and the others about them now so that kagome can leave? i'm not sure how he can make things harder.

i'll have to think about that one. oh and thanks for what you said about my review. i do really like your story and i so wanted to know what was going to happen. your one of my favorite authors and one of my favorite stories too.

so what will inuyasha do and say and what will be his reaction? what about sango and shippou too. what will they say and do?

about your story called 'devine connubine' i was wondering where that story is posted because it sounds good and i would like to read it. what pairng is it. sess/kags or inu/kags or another pairing?
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From ANON - Sarah on May 01, 2006
Wow yet a great chapter. You see i can't get enough of your sory. I'ts the best stopry i have read by far. i read alot of Sesshomaru and kagome stories. And their all so good. But yours is wow. it really does beat the rest of them! GREAT WORK PLEASE UPDATE SO VERY SOON!

Sarah (I'm on A single Spark. Although i do not know what's going on with that site right now. If you can get on it. I'm Sesshomaru's_Koi1804 I wish i had made a better name... like even thought of my Serea name first. But if you could please read my The End of Heartache. and tell me what you think. Your opion would really matter to me) Thanx Sarah
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From ANON - Silverstar871 on April 30, 2006
Once again, another great chapter from our revered authoress! I absolutely loved this chapter! The interaction between Sesshomaru and Kagome was beautifully detailed right down to the dialogue and emotions. I thought that it was super sweet when Sesshomaru said his future son would be the heir to his throne. Wow! I've never actually felt such strong feeling coming from the characters before but you've written it so perfectly that the reader can actually sense the emotions well. It just blew me away!
Will the next chapter be the epilogue? Or are there more chapters?
Keep up the fabulous work! Us readers/reviewers are thoroughly loving it! ^__^
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From ANON - Shauna on April 30, 2006
HURRAY!!! I had to re-read some of your past chapters to remember what I had forgotten, but after that I was a-ok. SO!! Everything's been worked out pretty much eh?? Oh man, if I were Kagome's mom I would FLIP! But then again, she's most likely not going to go back to see her eh? Hell, I would freak if I were pregnant, so Kagome's reaction was extremely plausable. So Sesshoumaru got with Kagome so they could create a powerful miko/demon, but since it's going to be a boy it'd be a priest/demon. hahahah!! It'd be hilarious if he accidentally exterminated himself. But Sesshoumaru didn't think his emotions would get entangled with this wild web of randy sexual excapades, now did he! Silly Demon, Emotions are for the Sexually Active!

I really really liked the way you described his reaction. The way you described his eyes... it was beautiful. Wonderful work. However, wouldn't there have been three heartbeats? Or wait, the baby still isn't that far along. Never mind.

Oh, and congrats on the tests!
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