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Reviews for Passion

By : CiraArana

From ANON - Kaienah on January 18, 2006
UPDATE SOON IM DIEING TO KNOW WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN.
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From ANON - Silverstar871 on January 17, 2006
GRRREAT CHAPTER!!! SO CAPTIVATING!!!
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From ANON - Maxdezbell on January 17, 2006
awesome fic so far ^_^ keep it up! I want more!!!
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From ANON - angelfighter on January 17, 2006
Hi!
It�s not so long back I reviewed for Diary, a story from you posted on fanfiction. There I wrote I couldn�t write about the fics which are posted here. Now I can and I have a good reaspn to do so. I love Passion. How you write is is great. I still have to read the last two chapters, however there will be no roblem, because I enjoy the fanfic too much to stop. The first meeting from Sess and Kag, wow, that was going fast, but not wonder, he is a gorgeous and besides he was rather sudecive, there was no way she could have resisted him. Then when he called for her it was cleare it was not a one night stand for him, neither for her. I don�t like stories where she is used only for a distraction. She is way too emotional to be happy afterwards and she simply does not behave so. Here, Sess shows more interests in her then only sex. I think and I hope I understood it well, that he loves her. Besides the lemons, wow (OK, I have to take a deep breath to calm down and dispell the blush I feel creeping upon my face). I enjoyed them. It is amazing the others didn�t found out. It was Kouga who had a suspition. The explanation why it was so made by you was a good idea. What made me a little sad was, that Sess abandoned her. Why in the hell let he his mate go with Inuyasha, what if something happens to her. It was not the first time Inu failed in his promise to protect her. (SIGH) Men I swear their pride is getting in the way all the time. What I read from the last chapter kag is pregnant. Great I am happy about this. I don�t know what you plan for her, but let her be happy. I think ones Sess find out she is pregnant he won�t let her go. If he finds out, but I don�t think she would hide this from him, she accepeted to became his mate, so there is no need for her to hide the information, unless she will continue in her task, but this would bring her unborn pup in danger and I don�t think she would do so, HUH? Sorry, I am definitly twaddling too much for comfort. May it be as it is, I like the fic and the way you write it. Please continue. Take as much time as you need. I visit a university and I am writing my own fic as well. I understand fully what it means to have no time for writing. So I am glad you wrote you have a lot to do for your uni and won�t update soon. It�s ok. That�s very kind from you because your reader know why you stoped writing for some time. My story is going slowly, because I as well have exams and so on to work at.
What to write else, ah, thank you for your answer to my last review for Diary. It cheered me up a lot.
Now to DRAGONS pray. This is an exception from what I wrote previous. Here Kag needed help and Sess offered her his services (my mouth hung open) and she accepted, besides it was her who asked if nothing more. The lemon you put there with the two. I can�t write down a word about it and remember, because I would be embaressed for the blushing what would certainly follow and won�t go unnoticed by the people whicha are it the room. It was so gentle what he had done to her. The way he made it joyful for the girl. He said to her otherwise she would not enjoy it and that he only started. Then the idea with cutting through her barrier instead breaking it. I think that was the first time I saw something like that in a fanfic and I found it good, because so she had more joy from their sex, her fright it would hurt gone the second he entered her. What was amazing was how he lost control and the next morning. He liked it to have her near and his body and perhaps youkai found herenticing, HUH?
The lemon with Sango and Miroku was nice as well, but the three chapter lemon with Kag and Sess, fuh, that was a great work. A lot of emotions put in it, feelings, simple gorgeous.
I was glad when I read you were about to write a sequel to it. I think it was Devine concubine. I am curious what will happen there. A friend to me wrote, that you won�t start in the near future, because you have enough to do with The diary and Passion, however I will wait and will be very enxited when you start posting it. I also like you will first finish what you started. Many nice stories are withound end and where not updated for so long. What a shame the authors stopped them. The stories you are writing, it would be a shame as well if you stopped, because the are too good to be stopped. (I hope I used the correct words and wrote what I meant, if not it should be prizeful and I am sorry if I wrote it the uncorrect way)

I have to go, my next lessons start soon. Take care and untiol later

Angelfighter (Linda)
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From ANON - Ryohko Imai on January 17, 2006
ONG!!! Onegai, ONEGAI!!! Update soon. I seriously need to know what is to happen next. I just want Kagome to be selfish this one time and just go to Sesshoumaru, tell him that she is pregnant, and let him know that she still plans to help out her friends in completeing the shikon and defeating Naraku.

Onegai, update soon.

Ciao
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From ANON - Inuyoukai8 on January 16, 2006
Oh wow! I love this story! Please update soon!
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From ANON - Anon on January 16, 2006
OMG! your story is really good, I can't wait until you update, the way you portray all the charaters is dead on, Kagome has to go to Sesshoumaru now right? update soon, I will be waiting
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From ANON - Sarah on January 16, 2006
Hey wow what a great story keep it going! I'm ganna say this when you can please update. But remeber school first!.... When ya not to busy though ...great story!
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From Empatheia on January 15, 2006
Wow... I think this chapter was longer than my entire story... Great setup for next chaper. Really looking forward to the Chernobyl that I suspect awaits us devoted readers when Inuyasha finds out...
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From ANON - ivorycoral on January 15, 2006
Wah-HOOOO! You updated! Life as we know it is wonderful! I still really like how this story is progressing. I think, as a reader, I kinda figured at some point Kagome would become pregnant, but the way you brought it into the grand scheme of things worked out really well, and doesn't make things so cliche as they might have otherwse been. Keep up the awesome writing, I wanna know what Sesshoumaru's reaction is going to be when he finds out about this *Grin*!
Best of luck go with you, and all the Muses.
ivorycoral
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From ANON - Demon slayer Kai on January 15, 2006
Umm...Ugh the only thing that i absolutely CANNOT stand is that Kagome's fifteen...I didn't know that...it really bothers me. But other than that, great chapter! I love that you write such long and detailed ones. PLEASE PLEASE write the next one sooner, faster than you wrote this one. Update soon!
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From ANON - Jazz on January 15, 2006
Please please please pease update soon, AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Jeni on January 15, 2006
this is hiddeninnocence96@yahoo.com, i emailed you before, remember?? i was sooooo excited to read your story. she's pregnant!!! ahahaha. you are so evil but i love that you did that!! please review quick, cause i think im going to die of waiting, i almost did you know while you were gone. anyways, good luck on updating quickly, hope you don't get another virus soon (that sucks)
^___^
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From ANON - AMBER on January 15, 2006
great story hope u update soon
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From ANON - ltsonya on January 14, 2006
It's always great seeing an update from you. Life can make it hard to get writing done.

As soon as Kagome was throwing up at the sight of food I figured she was pregnant. The one thing I couldn't help think on is the actual baby the poison Kagome breathed. Did it have an affect on the baby? Or was Sesshomaru's demon power helping him/her out? It's not terribly important but something that popped into my mind while reading.

I enjoyed seeing Miroku helping Kagome out, always by her side. Of course, he's concerned about Sesshomaru getting revenge if anything were to happen to her, but I think his presence helped her through everything. He can accept just about anything with little judgement (or keeping it to himself) and that really came through in this chapter.

You also did a good job capturing Kagome's fear about being pregnant - the fact that she's a 15 year old girl who has to tell her mother. I'm glad she isn't just happy about the baby, but fearful.

Like always, I look forward to your next update. Don't let school stress you out too much (before you know it, it'll be over!).

- LtSonya
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