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Reviews for Passion

By : CiraArana

From blue_heron on March 31, 2017
Look at you still receiving fan mail after all of the years! ;P I just finished up this story, having found it in the dusty recesses of the SessXKag archives. I really enjoyed this small arc within the larger storyline. It was steamy, well-written, and the characterizations were great; I even eventually accepted Sesshomaru's endearment evolution as potentially plausible. Ha! I adminhat I struggled with how simple-minded Kagome was throughout, but really had to remind myself that she was 15, which could justify her slowness in drawing what felt like straight forward conclusions, at times. Overall, I really loved your work and it's clear you spent a great deal of time and dedication on it. Like many others, I wish there were more, but as a stand alone - fantastic! Best wishes ~

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From Venyis on June 26, 2016
Enjoying this story, thanks for sharing this adventure and your hard work.I would add that the human egg is viable for more like 24 hours, on top of that human sperm can live in the female for a *minimum* of 72 hours (5 days!). Amazingly, some studies have shown 10+ days (frightening, if your looking to avoid pregnancy)!Anyway, safer to assume there is a more of a risk of pregnancy than not. Google is your friend, tho always take the internet with a grain of salt. Check out something like WebMD and there is a neat article at The-Scientist.com called Widening the Fertile Window by Robert Martin on July 1, 2013. I'll admit I'd expect Kagome too at least think about it, being a modern girl and all. Hell, bopping around in the feudal era like that, I'd likely take medical precautions just out of concern of rape. Inuyasha does his best, but Kagome has been in enough scrapes to realize the bad guys get her in their clutches enough for the opportunity to be there. And it doesn't have to take a lot of time for a dude to get himself off... But I do like it when Kagome sets a mature and responsible example. Personally, I shy away from young pregnancy, while different in the feudal era due to life expectancy, in modern concerns it's is unnecessary and should be a personal choice.Also, it's certainly something Kagome does NOT need while traipsing about feudal Japan, constantly facing enemy yokai and Naraku.My usual thoughts about why she doesn't get pregnant is that it's not in the story line (yet or at all). The author and muse has control of that, not me or Mother Nature.Plus, who knows how demon sperm works. Though, with Sesshoumaru, I'd be willing to run some tests...
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From ANON - Zero on November 20, 2013
So this is my fourth or fifth time reading Passion. I absolutely love this story, and I have to say, it is my favorite sesshomaru/kagome story of all time. That being said, have you started working on Passion part two, or will you be getting to it soon. I have been waiting since this story first ended many years ago. As I said, I love this story and would love to read more about sesshomaru and kagome's life together and see what happens next. I greatly look forward to hearing from you, hopefully sooner rather than later.

Zero :D
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From mareepoole on April 14, 2009
love this is ther moor?
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From SilentSanctum on February 07, 2009
The actual budding romance would have been nice if it was further elaborated on instead of simple carnal moments, but over all the story is good. Some imagery is lacking in some parts, and some characters do not appear, but generally fairly good. Wanted to clarify some facts. First Sesshoumaru while several centuries old, is said to be 19 human years in maturation. Now most importantly, a human female is NOT fertile for only 4 hours. A woman is fertile for a period of around 12-24 hours in which an ovum is released and makes its way to the uterus. Occassionally more than one ovum is released in which the time frame would be increased to 48 just to be safe. Now male sperm can live inside a woman's body for an average of 2-5 days. Conception may occur if sperm was released within 2-5 days before ovulation or 2-3 days after ovulation. Thus, if intercourse occurs there are truly 4 days minimum in a month in which pregnancy can occur and a 10 days maximum in which pregancy may occur with an average of six days in which pregancy may occur (since sperm on average lives 3 days).
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From Shosuro on May 19, 2008
Um, i know its been like 2yrs since you finished this story. AND this story is the reason why I started to write fanfictions myself. I just had a fleeting thought about this story and i looked it up. I just spent a whole sunday reading this story from start to finish. you are a wonderful writer. When i write my stories you are what i strive to be. Each sentence, word brings out so much emotion that it leaves me exhausted. I envy your skills. So when i noticed that you have not written a Passion2 yet i grew sad. Much like me, who hasn't written any more chapters, you have not continued on this story. I know my plea falls on deaf ears. And i know that you have a life that you need to live. But if you have a few seconds please type some thing down. a small chapter that says that maybe, just maybe you are considering continuing you wonderful writing. That would make my day to know that you have not given up on your beautiful gift, writing.

Shosuro
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From Chaosmage77 on November 19, 2007
I would just like to say that I absolutely love this fiction and have read it about a bizillion times. I anxiously away for you to continue it.

Kurai
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From katiedog on August 03, 2007
when will you post the sequel?becuase I love this story and you updated on ff.net last night and I was like......this part seems familar....and then I relized it was becuase I read it on here....
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From JLucPitard on May 28, 2007
This is a very fun, well written (with a few mistakes easily glossed over) and imaginitive story. Oh, and I loved the smut as well.

Bravo.
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From silverchaos215 on May 27, 2007
Really like it...hopefully you'll do part two & tie up loose ends of the story coz it's a very interesting tale..
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From Morningdove666 on April 03, 2007
I have just Finished passion and now you must make the continuation. Loved this story.
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From Neptunee on January 18, 2007
I realy love this story. I think about how you mainly revolved it around kagome, everything was from her view. I can't wait for you to do a sequiel, thats if you do, I also love Devine Concubine. But it just stoped. I also like where you left this one, on a really good note, it leaves you thinking what will their life be like? What will their pup look like, what will hapen. So please if you write another one let me know.
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From ANON - Lady Athenis Medusaen on January 01, 2007
WOW!!! That was SO GOOD! I hope to gods that you are not finished with this, as I'm enjoying it too much!

The final fight scene with Kagome and Inuyasha remind me of a Jerry Springer episode! YES! CLASSIC!

Ka-go-me! Ka-go-me! Ka-go-me!!! ::giggles::

You MUST update this as soon as feasibly able! You are one of my favorite authors, and I look forward to each and any new story that you pen.

Thank you for the wonderful writing. Keep up the good work.

BTW... how DID/DOES Sesshoumaru know that the baby is a boy? Isn't it still "too young to tell"? And would he love it any less IF it turns out to be a girl? ::hmmm::

Something to ponder there... (hehehehee!!!)

Brightest Blessings,
~* Lady AM *~
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From ANON - Taichi Prime on December 22, 2006
Hurry up!!!!! this is one of my favourite stories of all! very good!!!!!
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From ANON - rowdygirl on December 17, 2006
holy wow! passion is not a story, it's a novel! and what a novel! it's a good thing it's winter and i keep my house at 65 degrees F cuz it got very hot in here today! actually having the time to lie in bed and read your novel is the ONLY good thing i can come up with about being sick for 3 days. if i hadn't read your thumbnail bio i would have thought you were british, your knowledge of english is so very good. your character definition was excellent. you built the plot beautifully. i think you even did a great job of keeping the characters in line with originals. i felt bad that shippo had to stay with inuyasha, but you're right sesshoumaru would not have tolerated him. the one thing i have to disagree with you on is how kagome didn't face her mother and tell her the truth. with their relationship and her mother's support i am sure that her mother would have realized that kagome was not an ordinary 15-year-old girl. leaving the letter explaining everything was the coward's way out. but i haven't been 15 for an awfully long time and it takes a lot of courage to tell your parents that you are pregnant...and by a demon??? that would not be easy at all! lol

my only critical remarks are on the technical side: misspellings, punctuation errors, using the wrong word. but i'm somewhat anal retentive and ocd and i notice things like that. it was a great book and i even cried at the happy ending. thank you!
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