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Reviews for The Seduction Game

By : XYZ
  • From ANON - Nicole on May 26, 2006
    Yay another chapter. I liked how they are starting to get emotionally attatched not just physically although that makes for interesting situations;) Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - XiaoYun on February 02, 2006
    I LOVED YOUR STORY SOOOOO MUCHHHH...PLS PLS PLS UPDATE SOON!!!!

    P.S.I'd also like to be placed on your update list.
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  • From DarkAngelYame on January 07, 2006
    Oh, you have to love the effect of parents in these fics. (^-^) Another very well written chapter, I'm quite smitten with your work I guess you could say! I love how the plot just took a bit of a thickening turn, it's so mysterious and full of sheer allure; the plot's just developing so nicely, not too fast and nor is it so long, tedious, and slow. Well done!!!! I definitely had a good laugh at parts in this chapter, it's always good to mix up the humor with the romance and angst. I absolutely love it! (^.~) I will re-iterate, you definitely have a true artistic and creative talent with words.

    Don't worry about editing so much, it's all about author development and how you think you should improve; if you think it needs work, go for it! Yes, it is kind of stupid that aff.net takes a simple edit as an update ... but that's why you check the chapter tally just below the summary. haha. Why thank you, everyone says that's why I graduated high school with an English scholarship ... hee. I suppose I'll post something on here, I'll just have to whip up a new fic, one that'll surpass the others ones I've written (They seem a bit amateur-ish at the moment ...).

    Anyway, again, another job well done. I am absolutely loving this fic, it's one of those that I just can't get enough of! (But don't worry about long updating times, it's all about getting it right, right? ^.~ ) Keep up the awesome work; I'm totally anxious for the next chapter!!!!

    `Claire*


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  • From ANON - amber on January 03, 2006
    plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzz add another chappie....this is the best story i haf ever read ao far UPDATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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  • From ANON - the cridic on January 02, 2006
    continue
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 01, 2006
    HOW can THIS fic be NOMINATED for BEST LEMON when there is NO FUCKING LEMON?!?!?!?!?!?????????
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  • From ANON - amber on December 21, 2005
    hurry up and put the next chappy
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  • From ANON - senko09 on December 18, 2005
    that was great...plzzzzz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - AAR on December 07, 2005
    pure genius as always!!!! keep itz up yay!!
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  • From ANON - Ikiwi on November 24, 2005
    Wow.. you've got quite a lot of talent, ne? I never thought that this story would develop into something so intense and amazing as it is.. keep it up! OooOooOooo... I love it!! Keep the updates comin', please, if you can. I look forward to the next installment, thanks a ton! And hmm.. it seems as tho Inuyasha and Kikyou have different perspectives on what happened between them? interesting...
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  • From ANON - Tears_of_blood on November 24, 2005
    I LOVE IT!!!!!Its so well put together! UPDATE ASAP!!!! plz
    -NOBODY_BUT_ME
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  • From ANON - Rosalind on November 19, 2005
    Pros: I love the fact that this is an original story, and you've craftily used our favourite characters in Inuyasha to weave a story from it - it's simply brilliant! What keeps me reading is the unpredictability of the story - I can't guess how it's going to unfold.

    Even the lime scenes are excellent because, not only do they sizzle - they occur so suddenly, they sweep me off my feet, leaving me gasping for breath because I didn't see it coming. I love it that these scenes ooze passion and sensuality... simply HOT HOT HOT! At this point, I don't care even if there are no lemons, because things are already heated up. Of course, you'll *eventually* have to satisfy your readers... by giving them a little more sweet lemoniness.... ;) But right now, I'm perfectly happy to do without, and just bask in the gripping originality of the plot.

    Cons: Some grammatical errors, but nothing to severe. Still, it would be a good idea to get someone to edit with a fine tooth comb, to get an air tight article across. It's been top notch in terms of plot, and would be a pity to leave tiny snitches in the beautiful weave.

    Do keep writing, this has been excellent... I'm gonna read ch 4 now!
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  • From ANON - inugirl2003 on November 18, 2005
    PLEASE put me on you email list, I can't wait for another chapter. I loved reading your work, had a hard time stopping at any time. I usually don't like the modern day Inuyasha stories, but I got hooked on yours right away, it's very well written. Some authors are so bad, I can't go on even reading the story with all the mispellings and bad grammar, it's too distracting. To me the sign of a good author is you don't even think about reading, your just engulfed in the story without even thinking about it, and that's what your story is to me. Thanks so much, have no idea why anyone would bitch about anything you've done, but sometimes I think peeps have nothing better to do. Anyway, can't wait for Inu to really fall for her, and them to consumate :). I would love for him to become reformed and not want any other girl but her :), but that's my personal bias. The one thing, she doesn't seem that hard to get to me, every time he touches her she melts like butter, and he can land her anytime, isn't that like every other girl he's been with? At least she does come to her sense occasionally and shoves him out the door or something. I'd like to see him have to win her heart, prove himself, but maybe that's what you have in mind, she can't help the attraction, but won't give her heart unless it's safe to? Anyway, wonderful job, love it :)
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  • From ANON - DeronsDemonGurl on November 18, 2005
    Wow this is a really good story. I can't wiat until you update. Pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaasssssssseeeeeeee write more. Also if it is not to much trouble could you email me when you update please. Thank you if you can,no prob if you can't. The story was great again. Also can you include the rest of the prophecy about Inu and his mate in upcoming chapters please. Thanx. XD
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  • From ANON - Kiki on November 18, 2005
    Do you know how long I've waited for this chapter?!? Loooooong! XD And I must say, it's bloody brilliant. I heart everything about it. Keep up the fanta-bulous work! ^^

    Kiki AKA Kinkeh XD (Don't ask. Will review some more for the next chapter.
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