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Reviews for The Seduction Game

By : XYZ

From ANON - joey on September 22, 2005
this is a great story but in the future when you "edit" instead of adding a whole new chapter maybe you should put it in the summary or something to let us know. the fact that you story has won an award is great but asking for votes in the summary? and then when you 'edit' the story and we don't know "some" people will think you are "pushing" your story. Alot of us readers DO look past the front page for stories you know.
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From FiErY87ReD on September 22, 2005
I see that fallenangel7583 has already beaten me to it, but no worries. lol! If you ever need a second opinion for your story (a second beta reader), I would be honored to be her. Ah, I see you've edited your last chapter- InuYasha, InuYasha, InuYasha...the guy does some of the most unusual things...I'm shocked Kagome didn't wake up while he was doing it!

Still number one on my list!

Oh, and I agree with fallenangel7583- this Anon person has also insulted me for my story jumping up on the front page, when I had updated it that same day! I believe this person is just a downer who enjoys picking on other people (And he/she really is really a poor reviewer- sentences are not conducted correctly, poor grammer, juvenile language.) Do what everyone else does when this person flames their story- ignore them! No one seems to care much about Anon's opinion anyway, from what I've noticed...

You have a wonderful story here! Don't let any petty words tell youy otherwise! And do update as soon as you possibly can. I'm anticipating the next chapter to this thrilling tale of seduction!

Until your next chapter...

Adios!

Chow for now,
Liz (Bethy-kun)
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From ANON - Jullisa on September 21, 2005
It seems like you put a lot of time into your stories and your so nice to your reviewers. Really good story. Damn you are a good writer! (many many mnay more compilments) Buh-bye.
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From fallenangel7583 on September 21, 2005
you know, I�m not sure why i do this, but i do; i enjoy reading what others have to say about a piece of fiction i am currently reading. i do it for all of my favorite authors, i guess more so because I like to see who else is reading the story and what they have to say. So, looking back on earlier reviews, i noticed the two from Anon and from Demon fox. So i figured, hell, if those bastards are gonna get smart, i figured someone ought to bring them down a notch. First off, let me say that anyone who challenges, flames or otherwise insults an author loses all credibility when they use slander and then hide their identity with the cowardice of not leaving the author a way to get back in contact with him or her. If you want to stand up and be a �big boy/girl� and be taken seriously, then leave a name. Otherwise, pardon the French; shut the fuck up.

Anon: if you were an actual reader and not some mindless flamer, you would notice that there has been a whole new section added to the last chapter. But no�instead, you throw around insults like you are a walking god. If you don�t know what the hell you�re talking about, then shut up because obviously, you�re dead wrong at this point. Now, I could be as childish and immature as you and throw it back in your face that you�re a �fucking dumbass bitch who apparently has as much intelligence as my left shoe�, but I shall reframe. Instead, here�s my advice; know what you�re speaking about and if you ever want to be taken seriously in anything you do in life, grow a pair and grow up.

Demon Fox: you�re little bit about plagiarism is completely out of context. I actually have been working very closely with Scented over her issues with people claiming she was copying someone else. Get this through your skull�and to all those out there who feel the same; there is no idea new on the face of this earth. When writing, the textual character that is fed by passion off the readers, the character normally becomes what people thrive to read. In this case, the character is a bad ass InuYasha who is seductive, manipulative, and sexy as all hell. I have it in my fics, I�ve read it in nearly fifty others�just because the Inu we read here is as ballsy as the one in Scented�s works, it does not mean that they are plagiarizing each other. The word you threw so scandalously at this author carries a heavy connotation; it is insulting and demeaning. To blame an author for plagiarism is probably the worst thing you can do. it�s wrong, and it�s hurtful and I really hope that you can learn the definition of words and come to the rationalization that what you said is wrong!

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From fallenangel7583 on September 21, 2005
O_o i don't believe that he was....and she was....and...oh no....O_O wow. jerking off to a sleeping girl...that's just...wow. LMAO. very well done. ^_^;; holy hell. i really can't forumlate words on this. yes, most definiatly, the html cut out that last section. wow!!! great chapter and i can't wait to see the next. on a side note, if you want someone to look over a chapter for you, i can do so. (it would be a switch of rolls) :-) i'm always online with my free time and just having another set of eyes is good. :-) great chapter, can't wait to read the rest!!)
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From ANON - Valeth on September 18, 2005
Great story, hope u'll not let us just hanging like that.....please update....
I always love Inuyasha being bad boy... ^.
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From ANON - anon on September 16, 2005
LISTEN YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED SINCE THE FIRST OF AUGUST BUT YOUR STORY KEEPS GETTING PUSHED UP TOP ONCE A FUCKING WEEK. STOP ALREADY YOU REVIEW FUCKING WHORE! I DON'T CARE WHAT YOU WERE NOMINATED FOR. THERE IS OTHER AUTHORS THAT UPDATE THEIR STUFF REGULARLY AND YOU ARE PUSHING THEIR WORK DOWN JUST SO THE READERS WILL SEE YOURS FIRST. YOU DON'T EVEN PRETEND TO BE EDITING, SPEAKS OF COCKINESS AND SELFISHNESS. STOP IT ALREADY! IF THERE IS NO NEW CHAPTER PEOPLE AREN'T GOING TO HIT IT IF THERE IS NOTHING NEW TO READ! YOU ARE JUST BEING A DAMN PEST. BE CONSIDERATE OF THOSE THAT TAKE TIME TO UPDATE. YOU FUCKING SELFISH BITCH!!!
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From FiErY87ReD on September 15, 2005
Well, I'm certainly glad I came across this lovely piece of adult fan fiction! In many fictions I've read, InuYasha as the badass, as he is in yours, but this story- there's just something about it I can't resist! You perfected the characters' personalities wonderfully, if I don't say so myself. Your plot fair keeps me on the edge of my seat, forcing me to beg for more story. I just can't seem to get enough of our favorite hanyou and his most recent target. Something tells me that Kagome-san will be more to InuYasha than a simple lay, especially after his youkai side screamed for Kanna's blood, repeating over in his mind, "She's hurt our mate. Kill her. Kill her." You get the point. "Our Mate" was the key word there, definitely.

Ah, please, do update as soon as you possibly can, for I am intrigued by the world you've created for InuYasha, Kagome, Sango, Miroku, and so on...I would tell you to keep up the good work, but you're probably tired of hearing it. Hm, well, that don't matter- Keep Up The Good Work! There, I said it. And I must say that the mood you've set for this story is absolutely perfect! You are one hell of a writer- keep it up! Phew, said it again...lol!

Well, until the next chapter...

Adios!

Chow for now,
Liz (Bethy-kun)
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From ANON - kagome1312 on September 14, 2005
luvd ur story plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Snowfall on September 14, 2005
I like this story very much and know that I had read some of it previously. You're an excellent writer. I was kind of surprised at Kag's language, but I liked it. Hehe. It is so sweet how Inu is recognizing her as his mate and how he became morose when she said she would only sleep with someone she loved and he thought it would never be him. That was so sad. Oooh, sneaky Sess and family. What are they up to? Kikyou! *snickers* I like that you have her standing up for Kag's...or could it be that she's jealous? Mmm. Quite a bit of intrigue. It would be too cool if Kag's got to actually use Kagura's fan, like to take out Kanna. I'm babbling.

I love the story and anxiously await an update.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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From ANON - cladissa on August 29, 2005
well, are you going to write another chapter or not? it's great so far!
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From ANON - SYNAPSE on August 25, 2005
PLS UPDATE SOON, PRETTY PLS?
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From ANON - DemonFox on August 24, 2005
This fic is good, but your writing resembles so much of Scented Candles it's kind of annoying because it feels like you plagarized her writing techniques, or something like that. Why don't you have your own original things? I mean Scented Candles' writing is great, but you could be better
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From ANON - Wendy on August 19, 2005
wow is all i have to say. This story is soooo good and i cant wait for an update!
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From DarkAngelYame on August 18, 2005
Absolutely wonderful!!!! I absolutely love this fic! One of my fave fics on aff.net so far!!!! (And I've had more than my fair share of fics on this site). This fic is complete with sheer sexiness, quick wit, humor, and the ever slow developing romantic relationship of Inuyasha and Kagome. Your plot and character developments are absolutely brilliant, you're definitely talented with the art of words. ^_~
Well done! I really can't express how much I am enjoying this fic. The length is perfect (I really enjoy reading [slightly] longer chapters), and I'm enjoying the fact that this is a college fic, and not the completely cliche high school type. There is a definite unique-ness to this fic. It is definitely going on my recommended reading fic, and I noticed that it's posted on ff.net and mediaminer, you'll be hearing from me on those sites also (as well as being added to my fave story and author lists!). Keep up the awesome work!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

~^Claire a.k.a. Delovely^~
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