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Reviews for The Seduction Game

By : XYZ
  • From ANON - DarkTenshi on August 16, 2005
    Love the story! Its fucking awesome!The descriptions of the characters are near-to perfect! fantastic! Update soon please!!
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  • From ANON - Kid ^_^ on August 11, 2005
    Yay! You've updated! I just recently read your story during last month (...? Was it...? @_@ -_-) . I am a new fan. ^_^ Sort of...-_- YAY!!!! New chappy!!!!!! I forgot for a bit that Kikyou was Kagome's cousin in this....since we kind of found out in the first chapter or something like that. Kanna!!!! ^_^ She's particularily evil here....@_@ Cool.....*lazy satisfactory smile* Anyway, I'm hoping I can get into your mentioning in the author's notes. I've never been in one and I've always wanted to! ^_^ (Make my wish come true, pwease! ~_^) Can't wait for the next chpater! ^_^ Study sessions, possibly? ~_^

    Happy and dedicated fan,
    Kid ^_^

    Ha ha, now you have two reviewers with 'kid' in their name. ~_^ ^_^
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  • From ANON - kira on August 10, 2005
    I LOVE THIS STORY!
    i hope you update again soon. i check this story al the time to see if it is updated. it is one of my favorites.
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  • From ANON - Little Creature on August 10, 2005
    all i can say is... wow. that has to be one of the best fanfictions i've come across so far. not only is it written well, it has an awesome, incredibly suspenseful plot and the way you portray the characters is so great! i can't wait for the next chapter! oooo, the tension! this story is definitely going on my recommended list-- well, Rabid Creature's recommended list, cuz we coauthor... pleez update soon! well, not if u have to sacrifice quality writing for it XD
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  • From ANON - lost child on August 09, 2005
    yay! a new chapter and I loved every second of it. Dang, now you gotta update again so I can see what happens next and see how this story will end
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  • From ANON - cu-kid on August 08, 2005
    Yay for a new chapter! I was smiling and laughing through most of it ^_^

    And yes, I do both love and hate suspense. My favorite line in a movie is from the original 'Willie Wonka' when he says 'The suspense is killing me...I hope it lasts.' That's exactly how I feel ^_^

    So, great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next. I almost missed this update *gasps* If you could, please email me when you post again -it would be much appreciated ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kams on August 08, 2005
    Wow. That is all I have to say. ( Well, not all!) You write beautifuly! And I just feel like I am Kagome when I read this! It is just wonderful. THe way you describe the more intamet parts of the store are just dazaling! My cheast tightens each time Inuyasha gets close to her neack area. I feel like he is doing that to me! You are a very talented writer! And, FYI, I am in the same boat as you as far as the whole, 18 yr old virgin thing. So to know that there is a wrighter on here who shares that with me is wonderful, and comferting. I always wndered if it would be possible for me to write a sexual story, with out actualy haveing the expeariance requierd to do so, and now I know that virgins are just as cappable, and in some cases BETTER, than those who have. So I applaude you for that. ^ - ^ I scenseirly hope that you wright more VERY soon, for I will scertanly dream about this tonight! I also hope that the guy you like comes around and sees you as more than a sister! lol, great job, and write more soon please!

    Love,
    Kams
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  • From ANON - Echo on August 08, 2005
    Yeah! Another wonderful chapter! And, kami, I'm sowwie but Kikyo's such a bitch. Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - anon on August 07, 2005
    First of all the fic is awesome. I wil give you a pat on the back for the nice work. But I will have to agree with the other anon reviewer. I also write and I keep seeing your story being pushed. Understandable if you update everyday. But you have only five chapters. I've seen another author do it. Let me say it can be annoying. I think you have great writing talent don't get me wrong, you're awesome. But I could see where the other review was coming from though the cursing wasn't necessary. Editing is fine but doesn't explain a story being pushed up all the time. I've read you're story I didn't see many mistakes so editing should only take a little bit. This is not a flame
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  • From ANON - AAR on August 07, 2005
    As always another chapter that many had been waiting for. I must ask though, do you use a dictionary and look up words, or do you just get it out of your mind. I didn't even know some of the words in this chapter. NO, i'm not stupid people I just never heard of that word. anyways. congrats on another great chapter.
    AAR
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  • From ANON - daniela on August 06, 2005
    wow!!! awsome chapter!!!! awsome!!! u left me hanging in the ending... u have to update as soon as possible!!!! i wanna kno wat happens!!! lol. please continue!!!!

    -danni-
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  • From ANON - Vania on August 05, 2005
    omg, this is great! keep on writing!

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  • From ANON - Sareanna on August 04, 2005
    Is Inuyasha going to go after kanna, or is he going to refuse to let Kagome leave his sight, for fear that something will happen to her? I really love your story i hope you wright more.
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  • From ANON - Hanyou on August 03, 2005
    So I guess Scented's your teacher huh? Well I though the chapter was oretty damn good, but I still see parts where some of your writing is almost totally the same as Scented's. Odd... but I liked this chapter, hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - kiiru on August 03, 2005
    This just keeps getting better and better. First, you did the impossible and changed my opinion of Kikyo. Then between the comedy and drama you fit in a cute little romantic scene. But if Kagome and Kikyo are related, then why didn't Kogome use her sacred powers like Kikyo did? And then there's the big question: When are you going to update again?
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