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Reviews for Kizu

By : Murasaki

From ANON - Koorime13 on February 22, 2005
Hello again, it's been a while ^_^. Anywho, I'm glad you like my reviews, but I also can't help complimenting those who deserve it. You really do deserve all of them. I believe that you can be a great writer. You have that wierd little spark of something that I can't name that makes your stories great, not boring, addicting, easy yet complex and many more things. And not to worry about answering my questions all too soon, no need. Just take your time on writing this story so it can be the best. You certainly have the capacity and right imagination to pull it off. Okaaaay, I think I better stop now before I get too carried away. I'll resume complimenting you when you finish the next chapter. Don't forget not to hurry, ne.
Ja ne.
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From ANON - Dendy on February 22, 2005
I'll summize what I'm feeling in one word... whoa... just... whoa............ But you'd probably want more than that. =P The emotion, the depths of the characters in this story is simply amazing. I get pulled into their world, their pain, their loss. It's an interesting experience. And I just adore how Fujita seems to love and not quite hate, but something else, something complex, indefined. And how Kagome is Kagome. Not some warrior princess all tough and rough. But she can handle her own, she has her own pains, she loves and she's fragile but very capable. And I find how she seems to draw everyone into loving her without her knowing so fascinating. I find it's not so much the plot but the characters personalities that make the plot. Just watching their own turmoil, what the go through makes the plot of the story. I was conflictated between being sad at Inuyasha dieing, wanting her to get together with Sesshoumaru, and wanting her to run away with Fujita to spite Sesshoumaru. And of course Naraku, kinda feel sorry for the guy. I love the relationships Kagome has with everyone else, especially the relationship with Kagome and Sesshoumaru and Kagome and Fujita. I'm not sure if I could call either of them a relationship of love but I'm not sure what else to call it. It's like love, the passion, the heat but not quite because it has darker, crueler, harder to understand feelings too. This story is just so amazing, I try to explain what I love about it but it's just so hard because I'm not exactly sure I can put it in words. I tried but I feel like I wound up all over the place and this review didn't end up making any sense.
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From ANON - DarkMystic on February 22, 2005
Thank you so much for telling me about the latest chapter, I am truely greatful. I thought it was a wonderful chapter, and I loved how sesshoumaru made up with her...In a way, Uh >.>" I dont think you are suppose to scream at someone while telling them to stay true to you. *Shrugs.* I guess dog demons are different from humans in their emotions. Ok, please keep me updated on any new chapters, which means you're free to email me still.
Update asap thank you!
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From ANON - Hazeru on February 06, 2005
I really love your fanfic. I hope you continue it till the very end, it would be a terrible shame if you don't finish it!
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From ANON - Arryelle on January 30, 2005
How come U haven't updated in awhile whats up are u dead

loveas arry
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From ANON - azgbabygrl on January 27, 2005
Man this is an awsome story. i hope that kags is okay. Please update asap i can't wait to see what would happen next
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From ANON - Leighbriel on January 21, 2005
I love your stories! So please review soon! Bye! Can't wait to read more.
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From ANON - Hazeru on January 10, 2005
Wow, I hooked to the plot. Keep up the great writting and udated soon!
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From ANON - angel on January 10, 2005
gooooooooddddd! want more! must Finish fic. will die without update sent to me must read end of fic. falls over with intesabation.
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From ANON - sesshysgirl08 on January 08, 2005
WOW!!! I really enjoy reading your story it is very well written and very addicting! I love it!!! please update this soon beacause it is very good!!!-sesshysgirl08-
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From ANON - RainStorm on January 05, 2005
I think Kizu is a wonderful, well plotted story. It has a twist that I never thought would accure. I never thought Sess would strike Kagome. I mean she did resque him once. If he never hit his soldiers, then why did he smack the hell out of Kagome. But I'm a patient reader, and hope that you explain your logic on this subject to me. Other than that I have not 1 complaint. I am really enjoying reading this. I would greatly appreciate it if you would keep me updated on the story. I do have 1 other question though. Are a fan of the Sess/Kagome pairing? Well, I think I have taken enough of your time. So please take care, and please respond if you can.
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From ANON - Varekai on January 03, 2005
Very well written Chapter my dear. I must admit your writing skills improve even more in every chapter. I love reading what you write. It hold so much reality...but still has the edge of imagination. Though I had to wait a while for each chapter, it was very well worth the wait. You should consider being a paid author. Lol, the money you'd be able to make! Keep up the great no, the PERFECT work! You have my total support.

Varekai
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From ANON - Paris on January 03, 2005
And a happy near year to you as well! If I was a drink I would like to be a cosmopolitan! hehehe Yes, 2004 did treat me well as did New Years Eve, hehe. I think that either we are indeed a kindred soul or at least we are on the same wave length, so to speak. I�d like to think that our wave length number is like one or two due to my lack of patience, haha. Once again, you have left me breathless. I even went back to the beginning and re-read everything in order to try to piece things together better. That Fujita, I just do not have her quite figured out yet�but am I right in saying that she is pregnant with some sort of child who has holy powers?�in reference to that purifying your carrier line. AND- may it be that she is romantically attracted to Kagome? haha, just kind of throwing things out here. Oh the tension building between Kagome and Sesshoumaru�I simply enjoyed that and was waiting to see what would happen later that night �in her chambers� te he he. But the scene that stuck out in my head and continues to replay its self over and over again is in the end with you saying �And Kagome could feel how her heart broke.� It was like I was there and I could feel it. Maybe it�s from remembering feeling that same feeling�I think most people can say they�ve had it�that feeling you get the second that someone else breaks your heart. That whole scene just gave me that feeling in my eyes where I wanted to just cry for her. I�m pretty sure that I also called him every single curse word that I knew�I may have invented some new ones as well. I don�t know. hehe. Hmm, the almost last thing I have to comment on is the line �even the sky was crying over her pained soul. As she was the loved child of gods she was loved by all.� Before I read this, I was thinking to my self, wow, this chapter reminds me of a song that I once sang called �Nanie� By Brahms. So I flipped to it on my I-pod and when that line came up in the story it almost perfectly matched the part of the song I was listening to. Not sure if you like the whole classical music thing�but since we are a kindred soul I thought that there was a high possibility of it. Here�s a little excerpt from the song: (PS�The song is about a boy but I changed it to a girl�and I thought that Sesshoumaru fit the wild boar character in this part of the song, hehe)

�No balm, Aphrodite could bring to the fair [girl] so wounded. And [her] tender flesh the wild fierce and cruel the boar has torn. Nor could the mother immortal give life to the god-like hero, and at the gates of troy falling, falling [her] fate [she] fulfilled� �See they weep, the mortals they are weeping, the goddess all, they all are weeping. For beauty must fade. For all the perfect must die. All the perfect must die�

But back to the Sesshoumaru thing-- How dare he jump to conclusions! I hope he suffers for the pain that he has caused Kagome-- but at the same time I want them to be happy together. Oh the drama of my conflicting emotions...Yes, this review has gotten to be quite lengthy but I its no less than you deserve and sometimes I turn into this very talkative person. Hmm, as for the haiku poetry�I don�t know any, but I think that I will go look around and see what I can find. I do remember that there was some in the movie fight club and I think that it was about a bumble bee, hehehe. Well�if you want me to send you that song just let me know! I don�t think the words alone do it justice. Keep up the amazing work and I hope to hear more from you soon!! PS�I wonder how long they will let this review be�I may have to post it in more than one review. Take care--- amazing-- simply amazing!!

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From ANON - Morgan on January 03, 2005
Yay!!!! I love it!!!! Very good *tear*. Please update soon. -Thanks.
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From ANON - Koorime13 on January 03, 2005
SICK!!! You are so sick!!! How could you just leave it at that. Anywho, this was again a very wonderful chapter and I am touched at your words. I really didn't know that my review would have such an effect on you ^^; But then again you desserve it, you desserve reviews like that and even better ^.^ Your story is truly amazing. I do wonder though where you get all the info from. You seem to be a very knowledged person and you seem to know what you are writing. Couldn't help pointing that out ^^; Also the thing with Kagome killing Sesshy's retainers: why did Sesshy actually strike her? I mean, duh, he came too late to see what happened, but that is no excuse to strike her. And is Fujita pregnant? Is it Sesshy's? I hope not.
Anywho2, I hope you write more very very very soon. Mail me if you see fit. Ooh, before I forget Happy New Year to you too.

Ja ne.
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