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Reviews for Kizu

By : Murasaki

From ANON - DarkMystic on December 31, 2005
Omg, I cant believe all those chapters are gone now, i mean I look foreward to reading your story, and I come to check on it, to find that not only has it not been updated in like a year, also its lost all its chapters! X.x Ugh, I think I have given up on expecting an auther to keep up their story, I loved this story too...Its really dissapointing. The least you could have done, was to tell everyone why you have stopped updating, you know keep us informed. -.- Oh well. *Packs up her things, and throws the bag over her shoulder, stalking off.*
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From ANON - DarkMystic on July 31, 2005
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW LONG DOES IT TAKE TO WRITE ONE CHAPTER????????????????????
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From ANON - sesshysgirl08 on May 17, 2005
ooo wow great job!!! this is sooo amazingly good!! lol. GREAT JOB!! and thank you for answering my question.that was nice of you!! ^_^ anyway awesome job and please update soon!!!
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From ANON - Koorime13 on April 07, 2005
Sugoi!!! I finally read this chapter. Sorry it too so long. I was kinda grounded..... and still am ^_^;
Anywho, the first part was definately confusing but as I read further that grey fog totally cleared up. To say that I was surprised would be an understatement, I definately didn't see that coming. Who ever knew Fujita was a male. I sure didn't ^_^. You put the little "secret revealed" chapter where it needs to be. Sorry, don't know how to say this differently. Let's say your timing for everything is very good. Great job on that. I hope you have more surprises for us. I can't wait to read more of this great story you concocted. And you are very welcome with my reviews. Anything for such a lovely story which was written by such a nice author. All the best and hope you write soon.

Ja ne.
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From ANON - Megan Consoer on April 03, 2005
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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From ANON - nightmareofcat on March 21, 2005
lovin it absolutely lovin it please update and soon! this story is soo well written that it makes me want to cry. please if you could let me know when you update it would be greatly appreciated. again i adore this story. 5 thumbs way way up. keep up the good work!
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From ANON - Anon on March 21, 2005
My oh my, what an unbelievable twist. A great risk you took there, but like all risk there are consequences. But you took a good risk and ended with a GREAT outcome. I must say, I'm quite proud of you. It's good to know that I didn't make a mistake when I became your first fan! You have a wonderful writing talent Murasaki. I always enjoy reading everybit of your story. Lol, I sometimes even catch myself reading it TWICE! There isn't much I can say that I know you haven't heard someone else say to you. I don't expect to inspire you by saying wonderful compliments and witty lines, like most people already have. But there is one thing that I can't stress enough to you about, and that is your story is truly captivating. I hope that you will continue this great materpiece, so that I can hopefully keep enjoying. Also, just incase there is anytime where you feel that what it is that you are writing is pointless, you are wrong. There is always a point to what you are doing, especially someone with such a talent as yours. Keep up the great work, because even if at the end of the day no one else is your fan. I'll still reading this story.

Varekai
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From ANON - Michelle on March 21, 2005
As always, another fine addition! I knew something was up with Fujita, way back when s/he was introduced. I had no idea it was this amazing though! You must ease my suffering and quickly add another chapter so that I get my fix. I'm a little addicted you see! :) I'm glad to see you're back, and better I hope.
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From ANON - DarkMystic on March 20, 2005
Hello again, I wanted to say that I really enjoyed reading this last chpater, and it revealed alot to me. *Nods, a bit shocked.* I had no idea that Fujita was a man, And why would sesshoumaru act as if she was a woman this whole time, and act as if he loved her. Im very confused, but this is kind of exciteing actually. Man what a twist, you really know how to make uhm good. *Nods.* Yes you do.
Happy Typeing, and update soon, thank you.
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From ANON - Morgan on March 20, 2005
Keep up the great work. Love it! WHOOT WHOOT! ^__^. I think I overdosed on the caffeine...again. Update soon. PLEASE! or I'll be forced to take drastic measures. ta ta for now!
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From ANON - Paris on March 19, 2005
Wow, you never cease to amaze me! This latest installment was simply stunning by its own merits. I�m not even sure where to start with this review; there are several things that I wish to express. First off, I am honored by your kind words and it makes me all warm inside that you would even consider the notion of writing this amazing story partially for me. It makes me feel very special. To me, this story is a extraordinary jewel that I have come to treasure�it�s so different and unique that it has captured my attention indefinitely. You really are a different breed of writer, you have this unique quality that cannot be expressed it words, instead, it needs to be appreciated. For that, I thank you. Please, never doubt yourself and know, in your heart, that what you do is amazing. I don't write things like this to merely praise someone for the sake of giving praise-- I do so because it is the truth, to do otherwise would be going against the very nature that is me. Once again, thank you.

I have to say, I never would have guessed Fujita to be a man. After reading �But she was not always a woman,� part of me was shocked, and went to re-read the line, haha. And the other part was like �Yes, it makes sense.� I mean, if one looks back and analyzes things�you can see little clues? There was always just an air about Fujita that seemed to be off, for lack of better wording. Or perhaps I am over analyzing things? I tend to do that from time to time. I am not sure how to address Fujita and more�he or she? I think I�ll continue to call Fujita she, to keep things simple. I wonder, has Fujita became so entrenched in being a female that she actually considers herself to be one�or does she still feel part of her to be man, and maybe that is responsible for her fascination with Kagome, you know, the touching and coddling. And then there�s that thing with Sesshoumaru�that rumor that he and Fujita we lovers. Hmm. I am guessing this did not bode well with him, lol. But perhaps, if Fujita did align her self to be all woman that maybe she did fancy him in that way and thought it to be appropriate? I took a human relations and sexuality class a few years back and this chapter made me think of it about when we studied gender confusion and other such topics. Your story always has me thinking, and I love it. This chapter also evoked a feeling of sympathy for Fujita. Life must be so hard, and sometimes we forget what it must be like to be someone else. So this is only half of the surprise twist? I�m quite intrigued! One can only wonder what other wheels are turning in your brain and what exactly the next part of the surprise can be. Ouuu�I cannot wait!!

I think that perhaps my favorite part of this chapter was the introduction of Sesshoumaru at the age of 14. You captured him so well that it just made me grin and giggle. This: �He did not take the place near his father; instead he took a place as far as he could from the bonfire, as if the cold weather didn't bother him at all� might have been my favorite sentence out of the entire chapter; mind you, it is always quite hard to pick when it comes to this story because everything is just impeccable. And then Sesshoumaru dismissing Fujita by ignoring him� All I can say is touch� my friend, touch�.

Another part that had me thinking was the section about making the wish. I was trying to think of wishes that would be pure and selfless. I mean, even if you wish for the well being of everyone, aren�t you also wishing that upon your self, even if indirectly. Because perhaps that by wishing for the well being of others you are also raising your self up in the eyes of someone else, say, for instance, a god or someone in the after life, and you know that reward will come to you them. And even if you think that you are being selfless and altruistic, there is really an underlying selfishness that you might not even be aware of� yes, confusing, I know�I�ve been thinking about it for about 20 minutes now and its mind boggling, hahaha. But once again, maybe I am reading too far into things. I guess that I would rather have complex cognition than be mindless.

The last thing that I will comment on is the line of �lives were precious above all.� It reminded me of someone saying �here at Camelot, lives are precious above all. That might not have been the exact wording but somewhere buried in my mind was that quote.

Well, I suppose that it is time to wrap this up, as I am sure that I have written a lengthy letter by now, haha. Not that I mind. It just seems to easy to write a review because there is always so much that I wish to express to you; your story inspires me. Once again, spectacular job, I love and adore your work, and I cannot wait to see what happens next!!!

--Paris, xoxo

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From ANON - Morgan on February 26, 2005
I really glad you updated. The story is great. Please don't make me wait any more. I NEED MORE chapters! Pronto. Chapter 11 was intresting...but in a good way. I LOVED IT. Next time don't take so long to update. Arigato!!!
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From ANON - Arryelle on February 25, 2005
Cool I'm glad ur not dead but are u going to take that long agan tear don't lol update (key word) SOON
great chappie
Loves Arry
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From ANON - sesshysgirl08 on February 22, 2005
ooo and THANK YOU SOO MUCH!! it was nice of you to have mentioned me and to have given me a small shout out!!! ur sooooo nice....ooo and u deserve everything...all of the reviews are deserved because of how well you write...i feel like i am the character and believe me thats hard to do!! so great job and THANK YOU again!!-sesshysgirl08-
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From ANON - sesshysgirl08 on February 22, 2005
WOW!!!!! THIS IS SOOOOOO GOOD!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! GREAT JOB!!!! awsome job!!! i absolutly love this fic and i hope you update soon! oo and one quick question...the last few sentences...did they mean that he only lusted after her and he didnt love her and she realized it a little late or am i just being wierd..lol?? just wondering. Anyway..please update soon and i love this fic!!!!!-sesshysgirl08-
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