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Reviews for Anniversary

By : ktakn
  • From ANON - Anon on October 22, 2005
    wow you really fucking suck at english

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  • From fallenangel7583 on February 03, 2005
    for your first english fic, that was excellent. really hot lemon scene, excellent job!! bravo.
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  • From ANON - YoukaiMusashi (too lazy to sign in) on January 08, 2005
    Hola! Gracias por leer y review mi fic!!! Me gusto mucho tu fic, ojala la sigas :) Perdona que responda tu pregunta aqui...espero haberla entendido bien...hasta ahora, en mi fic, Inu no se ve a si mismo como uno, sino como tres...pero Kagome ama sus tres partes y sabe que no la lastimaria :) Inu sin embargo, piensa que si...tiene la autoestima baja y lo que paso con la zombie le debilito la sangre humana...eso ya lo explicare en el siguiente cap. Pero ya descubrira lo contrario gracias a Kags y va a aceptarse como un solo Inu ;) Pero falta para eso, lamentablemente...gracias de nuevo! Y por favor segui escribiendo! Espero que te guste lo que sigue...aunque los lemons tarden un poco, todo va a ser explicado :) Ay cuando me va a tocar un cachorro como este? Guau (quiero decir Wow-lol) Con tu fic me puse verde de envidia y eso que adoro a Kagome :) Wow otra vez. ojala mis novios (ahora inexistente/s) tuvieran tanta energia!!! Si, claro...me voy a tirar por algun pozo ahora. Bye! Tu vecina de Argentina,
    YM
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on December 16, 2004
    It was very good all though you should use your spell checker alot more.And for it being your first english story you
    did well though the way you placed the words was out of sequance with english phrases though we as a reader can get
    past that and enjoy your story.The lemon was great and I look forward to reading others from you.
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  • From on December 15, 2004
    yay i read this b-4 wel good story =D
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  • From ANON - No Sugar Added on December 15, 2004
    For your first English fic I think that's excellent - it's only the tenses and capitalization that need a bit of editing. Thank you so much for paragraphing it out! You have no idea how much I appreciate that!
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