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Reviews for LOVE POISON

By : YoukaiMusashi

From ANON - MoriCartel on September 22, 2005
I think the flamers just has an over zealous liking of your fiction but hasn�t the maturity or patience to see outside the box of personal wants and greed. Content from flamers (though not wanted, most of the time), do tend to be some of the best reads because hey, if you miss your TV soaps, just go find some poorly written flames around fan fiction websites. It�ll keep you entertained for hours. I�ve read some excellent stories and seen some of the most horrific flames you can imagine. (including use of poorly used and spelled Ebonics, missing words, fragmented and run on sentences, and ranting in so many directions that you just can�t understand what has their panties or briefs in a knot to begin with.)

Moral of the story: so long as one person enjoys your talent, then the talent has not been wasted. Smile dear, it�s contagious� and I�m very sure there�s plenty of us smiling when we read your updates (edited or not �^_~).

Thanks for the update and very much looking forward to your future installations. Well done, dear. Job well done.
-MoriCartel
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From ANON - Nicole Miklos on September 22, 2005
Hi good writer,

I really like your story keep up the good work and can't wait to see the next chapter and my sister has a few good words to say to you as well. My sister saies that she like your plot and character development.Is everyone going to help in there own way, my sister wonders. She really likes your story as much as I do. We both read it and then guess what might happen next. AND THAT IS TWO FANS THAT REALLY REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Blazewing on September 21, 2005
You're a wonderful author and obviously a very forgiving person, and I admire you very much for that. However, I don't think you need to apologize for something that's beyond your control like your story being moved up to the first page simply because you did some editing. It's considerate of you if you do start putting warnings in your summeries that you're not updating, just editing, but I feel it's not necessary. The majority of your readers probably just shrug and move on.

As for those like Anon, they probably don't have anything better to do, and if they're petty enough, they'll do as Anon did and attack authors about the least little things. Unfortunately, it's reviewers like Anon that drive the good authors away and leave the rest of the fanfiction community all the poorer for it.

So please, know that there are people (myself included) out there who love your writing and would be very sad if something like this ever managed to drive you away. You did the right thing in trying to keep as few involved as possible in this mess, and it's Anon's fault you had to post this in your story by not leaving an email address (not to mention rather cowardly - if you're goiing to critisize someone, at least have the decency of leaving a means by which that someone can contact you back privately rather than wasting everyone's time arguing publicly).

I sincerely hope that this mess doesn't discourage you from writing and I look forward to future chapters (however long it may take! ;-).

~Blazewing
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From ANON - Kyrie on September 21, 2005
Just to let you know, you're an awesome writer.
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From DLB on September 21, 2005
That really was a terrible anonymous posting... No feedback or info to help
you to improve your writing or anything.

And I can verify your claim about the editing of a post that updates at the
beginning of the list of fics, although I suspect I'm preaching mostly to the
choir.

As for your writing doll, you really truly are wonderful, so please don't pay
any mind to reviewers that use less than the 10% of the 10% of the brains
the rest of us attempt to utilize, don't look at that reviewer again - even
when the temptation arises - and know that you are genuinely loved by
the rest of us..... and the rest of us who read your work do it because we
want to -- not because its' necessarily the 'first' -- though I have to confess,
that it is top-notch and if I haven't said it enough, I apologize.

Don't allow this Anon bedevil and antagonize your self-esteem. You have
reason to be proud of your work and the romance that you have skillfully
entwined into the plot. As for there being 'better authors' out there, it is
a matter of opinion, doll, so don't sell your self short!

You are extraordinary!!!

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From ANON - Cynbad146 on September 21, 2005
YM,

BRAVO! . . . and well handled. I am not associated with the ongoing rude reviewer but I will never understand why someone, who would give such a hateful email, would not leave their email address. As a lurker/reader/fan, I give signed reviews, but usually I do not leave my email address unless the author requests it somehow, and then I prefer to personally email to that author. I am always afraid to leave my email because I have no idea who has access to it or will be able to view it. This is an effort to avoid spamming, undesirable advertisements, and virus's, etc. . . (did I spell that correctly?) There is absolutely no cause for meaness. You are a much better and tolerant person than me. Cynbad146
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From ANON - dont worry about it on September 21, 2005
this is for the nasty little bitch that keeps on insulting you BITCH IF YOU DONT LIKE IT THEN DONT READ IT
its real easy
you have no reason to insult ANYBODY sense you dont have your own story
THIS IS NOT FOR THE AUTHOR
sence THE BITCH (thats what i call her) cant leave her email address i wont leave mine

WRITE BACK
BITCH
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From ANON - Peachgirl2112 on September 21, 2005
Don't let idiots get you upset honey. You have a damn fine story here! I think everyone deserves a chance to read it! But everyone does have a right to speak there opinion too. So don't take it to personal dear, I know I don't when I get flamed.
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From ANON - drake220 on September 21, 2005
okay, see this is why I love reading your stuff. SO MATURE. god bless you. I mean, honestly, flame wars are incredibly annoying and take away from the story itself. i commend you for the way you handled this situation. well done.
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From ANON - midnight1212 on September 21, 2005
dont let that person bother you. 'cause the truth is i've pushed my request up, not for reviews just so its not forgotten....is that bad..? um... but i completely love ur story and its cool that ur editing ur story and if you want to revise it then go ahead its ur story no one elses
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From ANON - midnight1212 on September 21, 2005
i love ur story and i just realized that i have never reviewed.... but i am now!! yay! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! *does happy dance* ^-^
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From ANON - Chio on September 21, 2005
Please don�t let this person to bother you. I love your fic and I am waiting your updates every day. Please don�t pay attention to hollow words. Just cont�nue.
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From ANON - A friend on September 21, 2005
Just ignore that prick who's insulting u. they obviously have no grasp on the concept of how this website is programmed to move stories up to the front page, so just ignore the ignorant asshole. love your story, hope u update soon. I'll put up an e-mail address as soon as i create one for reviewing AFF stories.
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From ANON - Cutie Pie Hentai *not logged in* on September 21, 2005
Jess- I think you've been doing things smashingly. I, too, have encountered the problem with a page moving forward, but I have NEVER heard of someone having such issue with it. It just happens to be the way the system works. It's quite the sad situation when someone has so much free time that they can waste it with such random drivel rather than constructive ideas. In all honesty, I have specifically made corrections to a story that I wrote out of season, so that readers would be able to see it at a different time of the year. Specifically, I wrote a Christmas based fic that I did update specifically around Christmas time, so that readers would be able to more easily access it at what I felt was the right time. It wasn't for reviews, but more motivated by what I thought would be helpful to someone who might enjoy it. Perhaps it was wrong of me, but the search engine on AFF does not account for summary info, only title and author name, so someone looking for an Easter story, or Christmas, or Halloween, if something specific to the holiday was not in the title, would not be in the search return.
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed lately- I added your story to my updates on mm.org because I haven't had time to check daily for updates on aff like I used to, and mm just doesn't respond as user friendly to me.
For what it's worth, I read as soon as a new posting appears and I've never been disappointed- things are really moving now and the last few chapters have had some exciting developments. I eagerly await the next chapters!
CONGRATS on the award. I understand the warm fuzzies the simple nomination brings and the desire to share the news with your readers. You want to shout to the world that you were recognized and it feels so good to have something that you have invested so much of yourself in recognized as worthwhile. For those of us with even minor self-esteem issues- and most of us have some insecurities- to be recognized means validity and reassurance. Like a cute guy saying you look good after a new hair cut. As for editing, well, if your flamers want to criticize errors and then complain when you fix it, I say- Phhht! Good work and don't let it get you down.
In other news- I may acually have a new chapter up soon (I know, it's been, like, 8 months), so keep an eye out. :)
Best wishes- Jen, aka CPH
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From ANON - Kim on September 21, 2005
I love this fic and I am looking forword to reading more. I can see why you won an award. update soon please
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