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Reviews for LOVE POISON

By : YoukaiMusashi
  • From Spicyeggplant on September 20, 2005
    Oh yay another chapter! Perfect start to the day if I do say so myself. Your writing is fabulous as always. I'm particularly impressed with this portion of the plot - where you can see how all the pieces are being set in place for something big, but you can't see how it will occur and what the results will be. Good suspense - will Inuyasha ever get it together to tell Kagome how he feels, will Kagura discover in time why she is being left with Kikyo, will Kikyo ever be redeemed.....awesome, classic Inuyasha stuff, with your own personal touches. And yes, you can tell how much you enjoy Kagura's character. Whenever Kagura takes sent stage in your story, she shines especially brightly.

    Anyways, keep on doin' that thing you do.
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  • From ANON - Kari on September 20, 2005
    i'm back reading again, i've been off and on reading fanfics, i love the story up so far, kagome and inuyasha are going though so much crap. i can't wait to read more, i hope ya update soon, but take your time. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Cynbad146 on September 20, 2005
    Good work! The chapter started off with Naraku torturing Kagome and InuYasha with emotional and physical trashings. InuYasha transformed. Then InuYasha and Kagome agonized over their own personal insecurities, but continued to support each other. Lastly, Kagura and Kikyio did a little cat fighting. Over all, it seemed like Naraku was trying to pull another "trick'em into murdering one another" scheme. I was glad it did not go his way; though, I am worried why Naraku might be wanting InuYasha to "mark" Kagome. Did I read that wrong? Thank you so much for the update. It was great! Cynbad146
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  • From ANON - ktakn *-* on September 19, 2005
    aweeeeesomeeeeeeeee


    keep going =)

    update sooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - penpaninu on September 19, 2005
    (WHISTLES AND CLAPS) Great tale as usual, YM! This penpaninu is very pleased and happy! Your writing style is second to none, your story keeps us on edge, and we dont' care if you have a life and can't update frequently! Much kudos to you for keeping us hooked on a great story.
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  • From DLB on September 19, 2005
    Good thing you didn't leave it a one-shot........ :o)
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  • From ANON - Zelix on September 19, 2005
    Oooooh.... spicy, now things are going to get interesting... you evil little... giving us a plot like this with twists and turns that make us addicted and then torture us with more addiction like this... but seriously, wonderful work on this chapter, just plain wonderful, i've completely run out of praises to use when reviewing this fic so i'll have to settle for something less than what i want to say, i can't help it, i've just run out of praises to use! I just hope you'll keep updating this wonderful fic as soon as you can, that is all i wish.
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  • From ANON - InuyashaLover20 on September 19, 2005
    Ooooooo! Awwwwww! Everything is starting to fall into place. I like it. Ch. 19 was great. I definitely would be sick if I kissed Naraku too. Anywho, please keep them coming. I love this story.
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  • From ANON - BlackSand (not logged in) on September 19, 2005
    I loved this chapter! Excellent job as always especially with the IYKAG angst. Poor Kagome! I can't believe she kissed Naraku! Ewwwwwwwww... But my favorite part had to be the banter between Kagura and Kikyou. I liked how Kagura put her in her place and the swearing like a sailor was a nice touch. She's definitely an interesting character but I wonder if Sesshy is gonna play a role anytime soon? I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - jodibetz on September 19, 2005
    Uhh, I meant kikyou, I like kagura, the story is better without kikyou! Damn keyboards...doesn't type what you want.
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  • From ANON - jodibetz on September 19, 2005
    I love the dialogue between Kagura and Kikyo. I never did manage to dislike kagura but i think the Inu's story would have been a lot better without her. :)
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  • From DLB on September 13, 2005
    Sometimes, even the pros have their stories 'write themselves'.
    You should feel flattered that the story would take such time to
    do such a thing on your behalf.... *wink wink*

    -Jazz-
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  • From ANON - Kirah on September 10, 2005
    Wow... I knew something was wrong... This is freaky... I HATE NARAKU!!! And Inuyasha's going to be pissed... one question though. If Naraku doesn't have the jewel shards, than Kagome could easily purify him and run away. If he does have the jewel shards, then Kagome would have known right away that it wasn't Inuyasha, and also that it was Naraku (probably- he has alot more jewel shards than anybody else, after all.) This may be a loophole, or it may have been planned... I don't know, I was just pointing it out.
    Please update! (I know, you said you don't like to be pushed, and I understand... I just LOVE this story...)
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  • From Spicyeggplant on September 08, 2005
    Addictively readable as always! I particularly enjoyed the shifts in tone in Kagome's and Sango's "he's in love with my butt" conversation - it is how I talk with my friends (if I was a futuristic miko and they were demon slayers I guess??), and it felt very real AND funny, which is sometimes a hard mix to get. It might be a little while between updates, but the chapters are always solid with lots of plot, so they are worth the wait. Any chances on seeing some work on Beneath the Skin? I thought there was definitely the begin of a really fun story there.Good wishes on getting real life to squeeze out enough room for writing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 05, 2005
    Oh my goodness, this is great! I've been back to the site literally everyday looking for the next chapter. Inuyasha is gonna go balistic when he finds this out. Is Kagome going to purify Naraku's ass??? (pardon the language) Anywho, wonderful so far. Please update soon. Ciao~
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