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Reviews for LOVE POISON

By : YoukaiMusashi

From ANON - howlingblue on July 15, 2005
Ah! you're back! ^_^

Loved new chapter, it's great to see an outside perspective on everything!

Keep this one going, I can't wait to see how it turns out!
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From ANON - Kari on July 14, 2005
wow, i have come back to reading fanfiction cause i've been really busy w/ work and really haven't had time, but i come back and see that u have updated twice since my departure. i was so happy to see that u have updated this work of art ^_^ i loved both new chapters and i'm so excited to see what's comming up next for our most wonderful soulmates. can't wait till u update again and hopefully its soon!

i'm so excited i can't wait!
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From ANON - Kid ^_^ on July 14, 2005
Wait....OMG! Don't tell me I've never reviewed this fic before!!!! I haven't!!!!! AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! JESUS CHRIST, WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH ME?!?!?!?!?!?! ARGH! Damn you days when I just read stories and didn't wait for the authors to post new chaps and didn't review the fics!! >_< ACK! Shit! Let's see if I wrote a review but never posted it........let's see.....nope...-_-;; Damn...I was hoping there was...Well, anyway, I have been reading this story for a while...so...just letting you know that. Oh, and, I lost this fic.....or in other words...after reading all the chaps I just left -_-;; (I never checked when people updated and I never reviewed back then) , so when I found it I realized, 'This is the fic where it had such a good portrayel of Inu's thoughts in the first chap!' and 'The fic with the warning of spoilers for the first chap.' Whichever, I found it again, and that's all that matters ^_^. I am happy to say that I have authors now ^_^, ones that I always check when they update (you're one, by the way ~_^) Good luck with your fic! And hey, try working some more on Underneath The Skin with Scherzade ~_^...errr....Schzerade...? Argh....I'm not sure @_@. Anyway, happy writing!

~*~
you are here alone again
in your sweet insanity
all too calm, you hide yourself from reality
do you call it solitude? do you call it liberty?
when all the world turns away to leave you lonely

the fields are filled with desires
all voices crying from freedom
but all in vain they will fade away
there's only you to answer you, forever

in blinded mind you are singing
a glorious hallelujah
the distant flutter of angels
they're all too far, too far to reach for you

I am here alone again
in my sweet serenity
hoping you will ever find me in my place
I will call it solitude when all my songs fade in vain
fly my voice, far away to eternity

~ The World, Yuki Kajiura, .hack//SIGN
~*~

(Felt like adding that, considering I'm listening to it. Kind of like on deviantart, eh? It was just the first verse, at first, but then I added the whole thing, just for kicks. ~_^)
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From ANON - Kid ^_^ on July 13, 2005
Awww!!! Don't be sad (be glad ~_^ lol)!!! We still love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >_< Love this chapter!!! Inuyasha always thinks about a lot of stuff...huh? Sorry, this is a short review, I need to go read my book (The Great Hunt by Robert Jordan, yay! I wanna read and finish it! Eventually...) ^_^. This chapter did come out nice, be happy! ^_^ Don't worry.....be happy! Ha ha, feel good song ^_^. Anyway, love you, love the chap and love the story!!! Keep writing!! (ha ha, I was almost gonna type 'Review!' ^_^ Ha ha) Ha ha, I'd like some of that pocky too, by the way ~_^. Hope there's a new chapter up soon! ^_^ (No rush, though. You take your sweet little time so it comes out nice and good) See ya! Errr.....read ya!........? @_@
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From ANON - New Fan on July 13, 2005
I love this story. I was looking for story for weeks. I hope that you can update sooner. Update soon.
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From ANON - skywolf (can\'t be bothered to sign it) on July 13, 2005
I really liked the last chapter :) Keep up the good work and PLEASE update soon!
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From Aleke on July 13, 2005
HOLY GOD!
...*struggles for words*...that was....increadable! LSGHSFJDGHLSFJDKJL! I envy your amazing writing ability!
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From Pocahontas20 on July 13, 2005
I loved this chapter too as well as all the other ones. I can't wait until Inuyasha disappoints Naraku. He's stronger than that and Naraku underestimates him. Maybe Inuyasha will realize that he is all the same. That he is both human AND youkai. He is the best of both worlds, like I always say. He has emtional strength and he has power all rolled into one. I think that's awesome, but he is so thickheaded that he doesn't understand that. Inuyasha baka. I enjoyed the ramen and I beg of you to update again soon. I'm biting my nails with the suspense. It's killing me. And I throw out a cookie for you because you ROCK as an author.
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From drake220 on July 13, 2005
i have to say, that sess scene with rin was beyond sweet. totally adorable! i loved it!! and poor yasha, so confused and miserable. but nothing beat Sesshomaru accepting flowers from Rin. too nice....great job!
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From ANON - Anaidil on July 13, 2005
Oh!!!! Thank you!!!! I told you that I would be able to wait and so I did. Here I am willing to read as much chapters as you can write. I�m also very happy that you are back. Once again thanks a lot. Update as soon as you can PLEASE!!!!!
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From ANON - vtchachi on July 12, 2005
Good chapter. I like how fluffy is so in denial! I am eager to find out what will happen. You have me on the edge, what does Kagura have to do with Kikyo's new body?????
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From ANON - J on July 12, 2005
Ok well as of lately the characters have been thinking up a thurderous storm. This last chapter though has got me a little happy because Sesshoumaru looks to be coming around.(Putting flowers in his armor) *srcatches head* Anyway I like the way you got inuyasha thinking. I like that alot. *starts jumping for joy* Inuyasha is an intelligent inu and I know he will figure out what has happened to him and what his kagome has told him on more than one occasion. I have faith in you even though this question may question it. All I have to write is that damnable ones name kikyou. *runs to the sink and starts scrubing hands, damn that was to hard now I'm bleeding ahhh* *help me* What do you mean by things didn't go the way the asshole had wanted and what does it have to do with kagura? Please don't let kagura get hurt?! You said happy ending right-- will it be a happy ending for the beloved characters or just inu and kags? Also I would like to add that you have written this chapter well you certainly have a way with words!!

My deepest thanks to everyone who helps you in anyway they can with this story.* Bows deeply to everyone especially the author*
I also want to know how to vote for you when it comes to the awards. You need to fucking win!! I know alot feel the same way. Let's make it know to anyone who has doubts in you that MY GIRL ROCKS AND THEY SUCK @$$. ;^) Simply as that!!
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From ANON - Zelix on July 12, 2005
Once again, a mind blowing chapter filled with VERY well made character depth. Sesshoumaru's way of thinking is so... fitting for him, you've portrayed him and Inuyasha so damn well in this fic, i love this fic and i just love the way you write it, always leaving us wanting for more like drug addicts, evil and effective, nice combination. Anyway, i can't wait for the next chapter and it's a shame to hear that people aren't reviewing like they used to... but oh well, i know what that is like, since my own fic "Time Soul Exodus" has a very slow update rate as well, which means that when people have to wait too long for the next update, they tend to lose interest until more than one new chapter is out, you know, to have more to read instead of a single chapter once a few weeks or so... it's a shame to admit but i too tend to be like that at times, wait until more chapters are out before i review, i think everyone tends to be like that once in a while.

So you could say that it's down season for reviews for now, but keep updating and it is bound to get up again, that's what i think anyway.

Oh yes, thank you for agreeing to second my fic Time Soul Exodus in the upcoming seconding season at the IY fan guild, this is the first time i've been nominated there and to be nominated into two categories to boot... wow, i never thought it would happen, i really didn't. But... you said that your fic is also nominated into the best serial fic category? Mine was too... which means that when the voting period begins... we'll be rivals on that department! Oh boy, i really need to shape up my writing pace if i want to keep people interested about the nomination, this should be interesting don't you think? Though i'm pretty sure you'll win in that category, seeing that you've been nominated a few times already which means you have the advantage of being more known than i am... even though i'll most likely lose to you, it will still be a VERY interesting experience to me, i hope you agree on that.

Well, this has been long enough of a review don't you think? If you want to talk more, Email me like as always and we will talk, good luck in the future with this fic and hope you'll update soon!

- Zelix, the king of plots and your number 1, most loyal fan who will be there for each and every update.
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From ANON - inu_luva on July 12, 2005
plz hurry and update, i got hooked to this story! you should have have them hurry up n do sumthing, or at least figure sumthing out! cant wait for the next chappie!
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From ANON - mel on July 12, 2005
yet another amazing chapter from you. GOD I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!! no really your fantastic!!!! talented!!!! gifted!!!! skilled!!!!
did i leave anything out? oh yeah - wonderful!!!! i give you an 11 out of 10 :-)
anyway i'll be anxiously awaiting your next update.
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