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Reviews for LOVE POISON

By : YoukaiMusashi

From ANON - Kari on May 18, 2005
Oh mY gosh i was so happy very happy to see that u updated, i read it a couple of days ago, but didn't have enough time to review. but i wanted to say that i reread the all 15 chapters all over again, that's how much i love the story. wonderful chapter keep up the awesome job and i can't wait till u update again and hopefully soon. pretty please w/ wipcream on top ^_^
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From ANON - Rei_spirit on May 17, 2005
Your story is very well written and I like it so far I am currently on chapter 11 but i have a few concerns one namely being that Kikyo will actually seduce Inuyasha and he will make a fatal mistake see that reaaly ruins a fic for me and i'd rather no go further until I know. So if you could pleae email me back about the later contents in your fic that'd be nice
Rei_spirit
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From ANON - Lizashu on May 14, 2005
God I LOVE this ch...but you already know that :) This ch reminds me of Dokumizuchi or Meioujuu, those manga chapters everyone thought were mere fillers but end up leading to important events. And even if it were just a filler I'd still like it because it's Kagura!! I LUV HER!!! ::waves Kagura flag:: Kagura and Sesshoumaru are perfect for each other...
Again, great ch :)
L.

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From ANON - tsuzuri on May 13, 2005
Wonderful!! Its rare to find a story that allows you to identify with the bad guys but you are a great writter and did it superb! Keep it up ^_^
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From ANON - Mikokanna on May 12, 2005
Hey! new to ur story but i've read wat u have so far! it's REALLY GOOD! your a good writer!! i love ur base line!!! haha it's awesome! *dances to inuyasha theme song* wooo!!!!! and OH SNAP! someone agrees with me too! kikyo is a bitch! that pile of dirt needs to REALLY DROP DEAD! or GO TO HELL! either one works.. but she has to die!or someone has to kill her.. *grabs shovel* i would do it myself if i could....*mumbles* damn.. whore.. Heh! sorry anyway.. yes i love it!! good story! u kno.. i kno i'm just rambling on saying this> but.. the only good thing kikyo ever brought with her.. was.. tension and suspense to the series.. and her sad theme song... yeeea.. that's it.. thou i can't help to feel sorry for her sometimes.. i mean.. she's alive.. yet dead inside.. it's a sad.. fate she lives.. anyway ^.^!!! ok.. well i'll go now.. but UPDATE SOOON! u have talent! and it must be awesome to live in Argentina!!! well keep writing bye!! *rolls away*
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From JebusOfNazareth on May 12, 2005
So very dense. Excellant structure, good story. Let's see how it unfolds from here.
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From CoffeeGyrl on May 12, 2005
Filler Smiller there is no such thing its all good. *blushs* you're just so sweet to mention my humble review but yes you did make the whole thing clear about how full demon Inuyasha talks, in the anime he's kinda coldly cruel, but I find your interpretation of it with the whole 'Tarzan' type approach it be very amusing and kinda sexy. But GASP WHAT ARE YOU PLANNING WITH MY KAGURA!! I love her so much she's such a great character I but I'm fearing for my fav incarnation's life are you planning on making her fodder for Kikyou's new body?!?!?! I really enjoy how you write Kagura even though she's a 'bad guy' you make her such a sympathic character I feel more for her sad plight than for Kikyou's. So much has happened in this story but really its just what a couple of days? You're making me fairly dance with antisipation^_^
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From ANON - Baku on May 12, 2005
Wooo!*applaud*so it may have been a filler, but it was a damn good one at that. I loved the thing that you made Kagura do. That was really original. I dont think i've ever read any other author do that. and kikyo kikyo kikyo.that bitch.*grabs knitting needles*im gonna stab her!!!so uhm...break a leg in the next chapter!!sorry, i'm still in theater mode.^.^'' keep rockin!
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From ANON - PK (am lazy now) on May 11, 2005
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!! YM has updated!!!! ::does extremely long happy dance:: don't worry, I am doing anything but throwing tomatos at you!! I am so excited that you have updated (although I am not sure how long it has been up), and I am sorry if you missed my reviews, but my internet has been out of comission. :( But now it is back and I am EXTREMELY HAPPY!! I have so many stories that I am reading right now, and in the 5 days that I didn't have internet, they have all been updated, and I have been trying to read them........ ::large sweatdrop:: I just finished the last updated chapter of one fic and decided to check in on you too girly! I saw that you updated so I read a little (A/N mainly) and decided to go ahead and review. (it is 11:34 p.m. right now and this PK needs her rest!!) ^_^ I am SOOOOO happy you updated and I will be e-mailing you very soon, but probably not tonite. Expect one tomorrow though. I still love you YM and I am sure this chapter is as good as the rest of them, I will be sure to include an extra review in my e-mail tomorrow after I read the whole thing. If there is anything I can do to help you, just let me know! I haven't been writing much on my fic (lots of stuff to do, working on transferring to a boarding school at the moment ::ack::). Don't worry about my patience, but thanks for commenting. A fic as good as yours is is well worth waiting patiently for, and I have been here with you from the beginning and I don't plan to leave you, especially when it is just getting into itself! I will wait as long as it takes you to update, cuz I check for them every afternoon!! Please keep up the good work and forgive PK for not reading your new chappy right away (I fear that if I did, then I wouldn't be able to function properly in the morning, lol....). I promise you will have an excellent review tomorrow though!! Must go though, need to get into bed and get SLEEP. ::lots of hugs and kisses for being such a sweetheart and for updating:: I LOVE YOU!!!!!! YOU ARE AMAZING, REMEMBER THAT!! ::tosses YM a large yellow raincoat and umbrella to shield her from flying tomatos and other various thrown things:: I am soo excited!

Lots of love, ramen, and extra extra pocky!
PK *Aislynn*
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From ANON - serena on May 09, 2005
how does the saying go? chose your poison? okay, well, i chose yours, and am LOVIN' it^_^ keep up the kickass work, ne? ^_^
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From ANON - drake220 on May 09, 2005
update update update update!!!!! joyous joy!! ridiculous rapture!! so excited i am! (star wars comes out and wham! i'm talking like yoda. i need to get out more.) anyways, that scene with kagura/sess was amazing! very sexy in a quiet way. kikyo was a scary bitch as usual. great job!! (BTB, on eartweak.com, theres a pic remarkably similar to your sess/kag-the-wind idea. here's a link. its quite good: http://www.ear-tweak.com/ images/ wind_sesshou.jpg
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From ANON - Yathtallar_Z on May 09, 2005
Hi! I'm sooooo pleased for your updating! ARIGATOU!!!!!!!!!!!!! I missed it so much I thought I went insane... I have read your ff 3 whole times to avoid it...
Have I ever said that I love that you hate claybitch like us? Well, then I say it now. :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Thaaaaaaanks!! (damn, it can be played much more effectively in hungarian...) it's coming! Hope you will like this pic ^________^
I have to apologise in my friend's name, because she hasn't got net connection, so she can't review you. but I asked her and she told me she was enjoying it, although she is bloodfan, but she's reading very slow (she doesn't speak english well) ::feh::
oh, whyyyyyy????! ::burst into tears:: you are soooo baaad... torturing the poor little readers...
nyooooooooooooooooo........
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From ANON - snowfall on May 09, 2005
Oh, I just loved the whole Sess and Kagura youkai meeting. Sigh. Such sweet angst. Inu's such a baka. He'll figure it out. Great story.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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From ANON - Kraffin on May 09, 2005
WHOMG!!!! Update!!! At last!!!! :P

Anyways,

I didn't so much like that chapter, there wasn't a whole lot going on, ya know? This chapter just seemed to be kind of a filler, and I don't think anything really happened. It seems like you still have writer's block, but you feel guilty towards reviewers because you haven't updated for a long time.
Don't worry about the readers, take your time, your real fans will be here when you come up with something. You don't need to rush yourself.
All I'm saying is that you should write for yourself, not us. When you stop writing for you, and only to please the readers, then you won't enjoy writing. Please, I want your story to be great, even if I need to wait for it.

Don't worry, I'll still be waiting. ;)
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From ANON - howlingblue on May 08, 2005
Wow, what a wonderful story!
I love how descriptive you are with each characters thoughts and feelings at every point.
Just bring out some more chapters, I can't wait for the next ones!
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