Click Here!

Reviews for LOVE POISON

By : YoukaiMusashi
  • From ANON - Sentinel28A on June 27, 2006
    I stumbled across this story, looking for ideas for one of my own. And I'm completely blown away. This is one of the best Inuyasha stories I've ever read; the fact that it is a lemon takes nothing away from the story itself. Your characterization is right on: I can hear the seiyuu voices saying the lines, which is a mark of a great story. (Well, maybe not in the sex scenes. That would be kinda strange.) You really should think about writing professionally.

    Too often, a lemony story will end up being too much sex and not enough plot. (I'm ashamed to admit that I know that...) You don't have that problem. The love scenes fit into the plot seamlessly and are cute...yes, cute! Love isn't clean and surgical, nor is it dirty and gross. It's clumsy and it's funny and it's strange and it's true. You've captured all of that, and you're not even done yet!

    I am definitely bookmarking this story, and I'm quite happy to find you haven't (hopefully) finished it yet. Thank you for a wonderful story, even if it did make me stay up far too late reading it...which is *another* mark of a good story.

    Sentinel28A
    Report Review

  • From ANON - inusgirl on June 14, 2006
    Great!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Cynbad146 on June 12, 2006
    YM!!!!!! Where have you been! Strike that! You just told us. So glad to read you! I was worried when you did not update in your usual timely way. Big Congrats on the 1st place for the lemonade/limon/limonade! It is well deserved (and a little congrats to Trusuprise also). This chapter was so touching and well versed. The limon was so well written. It NEVER sounded like just a bunch of quick groping and panting, which many limes/lemons turn into, unfortuanately. The sensitivity in the scene made it so much more. The part that was especially touching to me was afterward when Kagome asked InuYasha, "Are you happy?" Other mentionable parts were: '. . . love has a new meaning;' " . . . stupid human side gets to have all the fun . . .," really humorous. I am not going to list more because basically I liked ALL of it. I am sorry to hear about the personal problems and I hope the July finals do not exhaust you. Update in August . . . got it; I will be here! It is nice to know that you will be around. Thank you for all of your considerations. You are one of the most humblest authors that I have ever read and believe it or not, it adds to your work. (". . . tentacles . . . bad career move . . .," still hilarious, HAAHAAHAAAAA!) Catch you later, Cynbad146 Final thought . . .'Pocky, all mine, muhahahaaaaaaaa!'
    Report Review

  • From Dunkelgelb on June 12, 2006

    Sweet Jesus. Twenty-five chapters of rated R material, then BAM! NC-17 straight through the fucking roof! I could write some kind of in-depth review here, but at 35000+ hits and 500+ reviews under this magnificent story's belt, I feel that there is nothing I can say here that hasn't been said already.



    But, you know what? I'm going to do it anyway.



    You are an excellent writer, one of the very best on this site. Your continued patronage to us here is a heartening reminder that AFF isn't quite as screwed up as some would suggest, and even though the InuYasha anime is no more and the manga is of limited availability here in the United States, fans new and old alike will still be able to enjoy it through the stunning work of you and your peers.


    Report Review

  • From ANON - Caroline on May 24, 2006
    I just love this fic! It`s truly one of the most wondeful things to read on this site!
    Thank you for the update and please- soon, more?
    Report Review

  • From ANON - hecate on May 21, 2006
    Great chappie! Want more!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Lori on May 16, 2006
    YEA!!! You're back~ Good luck with your finals and post ASAP. Ciao~
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Cynbad146 on May 16, 2006
    YM,
    The "pure fluff and lime" was tenderly written. For some reason, "fluff" is more meaningful in an InuYasha fic, because he always attempts to avoid any vunerability. You did such a great job making it believable. It was a nice reflection of Kagome and InuYasha that he worried about his youkai actions and she worried about her purification actions, and the complications from their feelings of guilt. I liked the "never give up" confidence scene. This is a given to anyone who reads InuYasha, but few writers ever mention it. You know my favorite scene was the lap scene; from the scent searching- navel licking, to the kissing scene. You really know how to get the emotions over to the reader. (Fans face again like the southern belles do!) The part that cracked me up the most was, ". . . woke up and opened your big, fat mouth . . .," (snigger, snigger.) I want you to know that I consider the stopping at the bathroom to be a possible cliff hanger. Sounded innocent . . .but . . . Thank you YM (and TruSurprise-Beta Extradinaire,) Cynbad146
    Report Review

  • From ANON - flakeyfrost on May 15, 2006
    you're back! I am so glad I really missed this story.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - BringerOfWrath on February 10, 2006
    Very nice story so far, I am loving the way you have done with Inu and Kagome.
    Report Review

  • From vtchachi on January 22, 2006
    Hey nice chapter. Sorry it took me so long to read it. School and then the holidays and then school again, and always work. But anyway, I liked the chapter. Kags and Inu, poor souls need to talk to each other!!! I see there is another chapter, so sorry this is short, but I want to read it while I have time! Thanks!
    Report Review

  • From DLB on January 21, 2006
    Aaaah! I luv it!!!! Nobody died -- though I think everyone
    learned their lesson for the time being... Everyone except
    Sango and Shippo are now delirious! That was a very powerful
    climax between Inu and Kouga and Kags; totally worth the
    wait. And I totally am not disappointed. Loved it with a
    capital L.


    Report Review

  • From ANON - Marlemon on January 20, 2006
    I'm a fourth of the way through and I am LOVING this fic! There is such incredible tension but not so much that you give up. It teases. :-) Beautiful job!!! Okay, now back to chapter 6.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Cynbad146 on January 20, 2006
    YM,
    Thank you for your very kind words. I was having a really hard week and your update has been the first good thing that has happened. I really, really enjoyed your update (like a ray of sunshine)! I cannot imagine a more intense LIMON then the last one. I am looking forward to that. You are definitely talented in that area of writing. Overall, what I would tell you regarding this chapter, is that, eventhough it was more action packed than conversational, what really got me was the vivid descriptions and feelings during the various scenes. When you were referring to TruSurprise helping with the fight scenes, I wondered if TS was helping in the choreographing of the fight scenes. (You are good in sharing the credits for the story with her.) Scenes and words like "he flexed each finger, causing each of his claws to lengthen;" "murderous, smoldering glare;" the body slam by Kagome to InuYasha; the really vivid speech that InuYasha gives about his dream/nightmare with Kikyou; and last, but my favorite, the purification scene. It was soooo intense. Yes, I loved it! I really got a kick out of, "Oi . . . Miroku . . .you alive?" "You look like shit." Also, "Oi, I can't smell it but I can hear you crying, so stop it . . ." The humor is a nice touch when there is so much angst going on. Lets my heart rate catch up. I sure wanted to know what Sango told Kagome regarding Youkai mating info. The only negative thing that I noticed was one word missing in a sentence and one misspelled word. No need to mention, you always backtrack and correct later. If there were other glitches, I did not notice, because I was enjoying myself too much. Good stories are worth reading more than once and I ussually always read yours again! Lots of kudos to you for a another great chapter . . . and kudos to TruSurpise for her help. Thank you YM for sharing the joy of your talent. (Waving YM banner again!) Cynbad146
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Lynn on January 19, 2006
    Another fantastic chapter done! Just so you know it, your story is one of my very favorites.
    Have fun on your travel and when your back, write more!

    Lynn
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!